Penname: Ace Jack [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A teenage boy is preparing for his mother’s birthday when he inexplicably shrinks down to half an inch tall, and must find a way to get her attention before this becomes the last birthday they’ll ever spend together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11367 Read Count: 161727
[Report This] Published: April 10 2012 Updated: May 05 2012
Reviewer: Ace Jack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Long Way Up

I rarely review stories--in fact, this might be my first or second time--but I like where this is going.  Great descriptions, and the pace is fast enough that it keeps reader interest in what will happen next.



Author's Response:

thanks, i appreciate the review

Summary:

A misbehaving teenage son once again finds himself shrunken and at the mercy of his overbearing and strict disciplinarian mother, who enlists the help of her entire women’s book club to help break her son of his bad habits.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13362 Read Count: 104475
[Report This] Published: August 10 2012 Updated: August 20 2012
Reviewer: Ace Jack Signed
Date: August 19 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

Master class. How to make such unrealistic scenarios enjoyable? You have combined believable characters with intriguing action. This is a true pleasure to read. Rarely do I comment, but this is superb work. Stop the story if you must, but do not abandon this genre.

Author's Response:

thank you for the review! i do enjoy this genre a lot, so i'll probably be coming back to it eventually

Reviewer: Ace Jack Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

Oops sorry. 5 stars !