Penname: Chaos [Contact] Real name: Ben
Member Since: March 11 2006
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Summary:

Spider-man gets shrunk by Madam webb and now has to seek help from his wife MJ. But will she bring him to the x-men or the fantastic four for help? Or will she keep him herself as a toy? Read and find out. Peter Parker's life was never easy


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1394 Read Count: 13031
[Report This] Published: June 11 2011 Updated: June 11 2011
Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

Finally someone writes something with Spider-Man and MJ! I can't wait to see what happens next. This is awesome.

Summary:

How far is Amy willing to go to test her experiment when it shrinks her son?


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6994 Read Count: 136935
[Report This] Published: May 31 2013 Updated: June 20 2013
Reviewer: Chaos Signed
Date: June 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story. I'm a huge fan of incest gts and your stuff is always great. I especially love this one for not only introducing a sexy, mischievous mom giantess but have the son be at least partially willing. Seeing a tiny son torn between his growing lust for his giantess mom, knowing that its wrong in many different ways while both scared and aroused, is so fascinating to read and makes for one Hell of a story. I’d love to see a conflict between both the mom and son over both of them being controlled by their desires. Amy will come to enjoy the power more and more, fighting to differentiate Jake from being her son and her sex toy. While Jake will be unsure what he wants, will he sacrifice his freedom and life to wallow in the pleasure he feels serving his mom? I don’t know if you’ll go in that direction, but that’s just what I’d enjoy seeing.

 

If someone feels that you’re not being believable with your characters or criticizes you for writing about incest, then they aren’t the audience for your stories and they should just not read your story. I always hate reading reviews where someone says something isn’t there thing and they need to change to better fit what they like. There are people that like what you write just the way it is and you should do what you enjoy best. Just carry on and keep up the fantastic work. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I plan on it, and who knows where my characters may go? Not me really, haven't thought that far ahead you see, but I'll keep your ideas in mind

-Jake 

Mother's Boy by tylby Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Woman shrinks her wayward son.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Humiliation, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3952 Read Count: 26384
[Report This] Published: June 14 2013 Updated: June 14 2013
Reviewer: Chaos Signed
Date: June 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love what you've written so far. Amanda is my kind of giantess mother, cruel but fair. Please tell me we'll see more? It would be such a shame to end things after only one chapter.

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 547042
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this is a great concept for a story. Take the ideas of the fans of your writing and GTS incest and write a fantastic story that everyone can enjoy. I got more ideas then I can count. I'd love to chat with you through SMS on AIM or Skype about them. My email adress is mego@shaw.ca just tell me if you want to talk. 

Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm loving how the story is going, the level of cruelty is awesome as is the creative ways that our poor shrunken son/brother is suffering. I'm really looking forward to seeing him as a mastubatory aid for his unknowing brother. I'd love to see the micro brother getting up close and personal with Hal's member, the brother not finding his micro sibling until after he's done. Seeing his own brother so puny in front of his giant cock, so helpless convinces him his mom was right and his brother is his to play with. He comes up with the most humiliating punishment of them all, he cock vore the nearly microscopic brother. We never read it but moving him down his cock to his balls seems like the kind of nightmarish hell our protagonist would suffer the most from. He could be left in his sack as Hal informs his family that he's seen the light and where the smallest boy in the house is. I can see them all getting a laugh out of it and congratulating Hal while poor jake squirms in his balls.

I hope you go with that, but whatever you do will no doubt be really good. Can't wait to read more, I hope your upload spree never ends.

Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the latest chapter. From the the tiny brother crawling on his brothers hand, to his experience as Hal masturbated, to where he put him when he was done. It was all great!

I hope Hal gets to enjoy his brother longer after he's seen the light. I'd still love to see some cock vore or maybe he let's his brother crawl around in the wrinkles of his sack or if you want to get really crazy he could shrink him down even smaller when he's swimming in his load so he's the size of sperm. Let him see what it's like to be really micro! Keep it as perverted as possible, maybe even write a few chapters with deaths and rewind before he died at the next chapter. I hope we see Jake suffer even worse at the hands of his oh so loving family.

Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I got a few deaths in mind. All cruel, all humiliating, all perfect for this story.

 

-After the lesbian scene, the mom starts sucking on his tiny body, ready to swallow him, but spits him out. Any brief second of mercy is abandoned as Amy says she wants a more filling meal. She grows him to the size of an action figure, slowly forcing him into her cramped mouth before taking a big gulp. Trapped in her tight, slimy belly digestion doesn't come quick. He spends days slowly being digested, having to hear teasing and feel his death chamber shake as people pat and poke the belly from the outside. As he begins to pass out, the mother has one last moment with him. Telling him that feeding her was his best accomplishment in life and nothing more.

-Jake begs his mom for his life, offering to be her slave forever if she spares him. Feeling 'kind' she makes a deal with him. Survive one week deep up her ass and he'll be a member of the family again. Jake agrees, crawl into her ass and being sealed into darkness. He goes through Hell inside his mom, the smell, the heat, the constant moving, he feels like it’s sucking the life right out of him. As he lays deep in Amy's ass, unable to move and moments from dying, he wonders if he got close to making the one-week. On the outside, the mother frowns when she feels Jake no longer moving in her ass. Skyler reminds her that he did survive nearly two weeks in her ass, which is pretty impressive. The family laugh about Jake’s only impressive act was surviving his mom's bowels for so long and how dumb he was to think he was ever getting out.

 

-Jake finally learns the reason his mom hates him so much is because he’s the result of her mother having an affair with a coworker that resulted in her husband leaving her and causing her nothing but grief. Jake finally meets his real father, who’s more interested in fucking his mom then meeting his son. Amy places Jake on his fathers cock and has him fuck her with him, hoping he’ll be crushed or drown from the experience. Jake survives, barely, and Amy is tempted to just crush him, but then she gets another idea. Shrunken down to a speck of dust size, Jake is forced either onto the cockhead or into the cockslit. Amy gives Jake’s father a blowjob and Jake is shot into her mouth. He ends up nearly following a little dribble of cum out of his mom’s mouth, but his dad spots him and Amy just licks him up like a crumb and swallows. We last see tiny Jake squirming as he’s digested in her big, hungry belly.

 

More where these came from if your interested :)

 

Summary:

In this direct sequel to Lucretia's Night Out, Lucy and her shrunken boyfriend Sam must deal with the aftermath of the previous evening, as well as new challenges presented by Lucy's power.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Mature (40-49), Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Lucretia's Night Out
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9418 Read Count: 60620
[Report This] Published: April 05 2014 Updated: August 12 2014
Reviewer: Chaos Signed
Date: April 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Early Risers

I agree, I like the fact we have so much male interaction. I consider this a cuckold story and you need male interaction to pull that off well. Keep doing whhat you're doing, in fact, do it even more hardcore. Really make poor Sam suffer ;)



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the giant male interaction; I mostly wrote giantess works before this series, so it was a new challenge which I enjoyed to write about and balance giant male interactions. While Tom has departed, Sam will still be put through the wringer! While I do have my personal preferences, the imagination is the limit for how he'll be teased and humiliated (or possibly even shown *gasp* small mercies).

Summary:

Third season of The Size Zone. This one will be influenced by requests by you the readers!


Categories: Adventure, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 229264 Read Count: 155581
[Report This] Published: December 31 2015 Updated: July 19 2016
Reviewer: Chaos Signed
Date: January 01 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1...The Dead Shall Speak Pt. 1

I can't tell you how excited I am about the new season. I can't wait to see what you write and the twists and turns you and your fans have come up with.

Summary:

Anna is a single mother who is barely capable of keeping up with her young, strong-willed daughter, Alice, who seems to take more after Anna's independent and seemingly-perfect older sister, Shirley.

It's all a little more than she can bear. Suffice it to say, the LAST thing she needs is to come down with the shrinking disease, and be stuck at the size of an ant, at the mercy of her sister, daughter, and daughter's friends. 


Categories: Vore, Butt, Breasts, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Lesbians, Odor, Nose, Unaware, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17408 Read Count: 76935
[Report This] Published: June 18 2016 Updated: July 07 2016
Reviewer: Chaos Signed
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love your story!

 

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