Penname: Tenshi [Contact] Real name: Johan
Member Since: March 13 2006
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Scott Chelgren, slacker and student at the University of Minnesota finds himself content with college and not wanting to leave. However, when he comes across some Magick his world is turned upside when he finds himself shrinking away from everything he has ever known.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Change Trilogy
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7801 Read Count: 108434
[Report This] Published: February 21 2006 Updated: February 21 2006
Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

What should i say? You're really good. This story starts like an épic tale lol no sorry i'm just a bit tired. It's great, and very well written. Better than i could have done, and actualy better than what i have done (yes i know, many people have surrely told you how great is your story, but ... i've nothing else to say ^^ ). I'll read it futher later, but you have one more fan ;)

Lost in LA by DX Machina Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Lost in LA continues the story of Scott Chelgren. When he goes on vacation with his new family he expects to have a good time, but what he doesnt expect is to wind up lost in one of the largest cities in the united states. Watch Scott try to fight his way across the entire city of LA to try to get back to the one he cares for dearly.

Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Change Trilogy
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18434 Read Count: 77291
[Report This] Published: February 21 2006 Updated: February 21 2006
Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Wow ... You did it again, i'm stunned!! I've read that story in one shout, and i'm still brething quickly. What a great story!!! That's just perfect.
I'm sorry, I know it will be better if I had something to say to help you getting better, like if I had noticed something bad, but there's nothing wrong with that story.
Lost In LA is my favorite GTS story. And you're the best man. Thank for having wrote it ;)

Summary: This is a tale about a little guy who gets stuck at a boarding school. While he tries to escape he continues to get mixed up in these girls problems.

Categories: Instant Size Change, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Boarding School Bust Universe
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28397 Read Count: 81060
[Report This] Published: February 24 2006 Updated: February 24 2006
Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow ... Impressive. And i believed i was a good writer ... This story is just perfect. The way you discribe characters, respect there feelings and behavior, the action's scenes ... all is great. I realy loved it. I'm gonna look what else you've wrote ... i'm shure i'll love your other stories too ;)


Author's Response: Wow, thats one of the nicest things anyone has ever said about one of my stories. Thanks!

Summary: The end of the world in nigh. And in the midst of it all, some hot chicks decide to have some fun.
Categories: Butt, New World Order, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 585 Read Count: 17968
[Report This] Published: April 11 2006 Updated: April 16 2006
Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow ... I'll wait for the next chapters to make my opinion

Summary:

Allison thinks that her sister Amanda stole her CD Player. The two sisters get in a fight over that fact and tear the house apart.

When their mother gets home, she is quite upset and punishes Allison by making her the property of her sister Amanda.


Categories: Transformation, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Humiliation, Object, Unaware, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14074 Read Count: 169769
[Report This] Published: May 31 2006 Updated: August 12 2013
Reviewer: Tenshi Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 01 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Great story you have here. Well, i'd prefer less torture but still, you did great. How to tie this of huh? Yeah, maybe i can ... to me, the best way to end is to finf happy. I mean, Allison has to be saved. Maybe a kind sorceress, or an angel, it's up to you. At first they just meet each other and the sorceress/angel find a way to destroy Amanda's and her mom's powers, and tunr Allison back to normal. After that, the two heroes just leave and have a good life.

That's just an idea like that ...