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A Growing Body of Knowledge by littlemac Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Summary:

A timid young man fresh out of college gets his first job at the public library, only to discover all his coworkers are towering amazons. He finds ways to make it work, but after some time he learns that it isn't a mere coincidence that all the women he works with are tall...


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56492 Read Count: 629084
[Report This] Published: May 24 2011 Updated: August 10 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

One of the best situational stories that I've read.

Well done - so realistically described.

I'm looking forward to each and every chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I was striving for a more "realisitic" feel, so its nice that it's being recognized and appreciated. Thank you for the awesome review.

The Light at The End by rodent38 Rated: PG starstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A girl is killed and reborn, but at what costs?

 

This IS a furry story. If you dont like furries. this isnt for you

 

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6345 Read Count: 40743
[Report This] Published: June 21 2011 Updated: August 22 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starhalf-star
Date: June 22 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Metalic Justice

A 50/50 mix of cat and human?

Weird.



Author's Response:

yepp. human body with cat ears, paws (feet) claws(hands) fur and a tail. 50/50 cat and human

Sandra's Throat by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8117 Read Count: 57535
[Report This] Published: June 21 2011 Updated: June 23 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: June 22 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Treatment

“Trust me, Carl, I’m a doctor.”

One of the best vore stories I've read.

Very well written.



Author's Response:

thanks; i just couldn't resist incorporating that particular phrase when it seemed to fit so eerily well with the situation

Every Poolboy's Nightmare by FTV Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Victoria is feeling a little old.  Will the new neighbor's thriteen year old son make up for that?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3048 Read Count: 25041
[Report This] Published: June 24 2011 Updated: June 24 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 24 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Anti-Aging; Made Easy

It's not "water".  It's "cum", "juice", or "discharge".

This story would read better if it was told in the past tense.

In any case, this is a good, imaginative story.

Please continue writing.

Teacher's Pet by Epiphone9020 Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Two students find out the true meaning behind Teacher's Pet


Categories: Body Exploration, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2054 Read Count: 7989
[Report This] Published: June 26 2011 Updated: June 26 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: June 26 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Must be a different level of high school than I knew.

What kind of high school has a grammar teacher?

 

Mmmmmm by Epiphone9020 Rated: X starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A tiny man is eaten alive.


Categories: Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532 Read Count: 6042
[Report This] Published: June 26 2011 Updated: June 26 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starhalf-star
Date: June 26 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmmmm.

"When he came to, he found himself naked" If he was naked, how could she dangle him by his shirt?

Too short...

 

Don't talk to Danielle by openwings227 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Step into the story of the young protagonist Neil. Who is just entering high school for the first time and in many ways learning the responsibilities that come with growing up. He will experience each of the seven sins first hand and have a serious decision to make at the climax. Feedback and reviews are not only encouraged, they will also affect how the story turn's out.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Growing Woman, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6462 Read Count: 33573
[Report This] Published: August 27 2011 Updated: September 02 2011
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 28 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Invidia

Great beginning.

Wonderful story scenario!

Looking forward to the continuation of this one.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement. Sorry I was a little late. (I'm taking 7 classes right now, so time's very tight.) I plan on updating it sometime either today or tomorrow.

Julia by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 450]
Summary:

Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134130 Read Count: 1103930
[Report This] Published: November 05 2011 Updated: July 20 2015
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ultimate Make-out

I'm very much looking forward to reading the next few chapters - "dark and explicit" sounds great to me!

 



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 08 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Make Love, Not War

Wonderful chapter.

I'm sure glad you decided to take this story to an X rating.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: It Comes Out

Wish I could see that sort of "thing on the internet". ; )




Author's Response:

I'm sure many on this site share that wish.

A Little Blackmail 4: Big Sister Diaries by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 268432
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 20 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Break-up

Great story. Well crafted. I love your detailed descriptions of what is going through her mind. She's psychotic and crazy enough to do anything to Jack - the messier and sexier, the better...

Change Happens by newschool2626 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)


Categories: Butt, Feet, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38469 Read Count: 308749
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: September 15 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 05 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Amongst Friends

I like it. 

Please continue. Bring out Debra's twisted dark side.

Be more descriptive, and maybe relate each experience from both sides.

Hey, if the step-brother shrinks and goes missing, she has little to fear from the authorities.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, but you won't get to see anymore of Debra's darkside. The interaction with her friends was merely to show Nicole that there has been a bigger change in her world that she hadn't noticed before. I was thinking about bringing back a couple of the girls for a chapter about Claire's brother, but odds are I won't do it because it wouldn't flow with Nicole's family's story.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Morning After

Yes, please continue.

This has the potential of becoming a very good psychological theme giantess horror.

I look forward to each new chapter.

 

Motherly love by Cheezo Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

A young 16 year old shrinks. Join him on his little adventure.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Toilet, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19223 Read Count: 605715
[Report This] Published: December 18 2011 Updated: May 15 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 08 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Sheamus' past

Well done!
Could be improved with more explicit descriptions.

 



Author's Response: Yeah I know looking back at it that chapter was slightly rushed. I'll probably edit it in the future.

Distant Relatives by Hollow Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

A continuation of The Caretaker, before the new school year starts, Jake, His mother, and Nique all pay a visit to Jake's many aunts, uncles, and cousins living in alabama. 


Categories: Giant, Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, BBW, Toilet, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30102 Read Count: 544672
[Report This] Published: December 30 2011 Updated: June 16 2013
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 07 2012 Title: Chapter 13: A small treat

Wow!
More than one thousand words in a single chapter. :) 



Author's Response:

This moment shall be catalouged in human history for all time

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: June 17 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Dinner plans

Chapters 16 & 17 were pretty good - lots of sexual tension.

These last two chapters apeared to be just social excahnges - boring...

Get back to the good stuff, please.

The Big House by justice Rated: X starstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

After your wife is sentenced to life in prison for a crime she didn't commit, you are desperate for a way to help her escape. With the aid of a new shrinking chemical from the lab, you sneak into the prison intent on saving your love.


Categories: Butt, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2579 Read Count: 31619
[Report This] Published: March 11 2012 Updated: March 12 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstar
Date: March 11 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Runion's Prisoner

This story is neither complete nor G-rated.
Status and rating need to be corrected.

Good concept, but not well written. 

The Tiny Scrubbing Bubble by Aborigen Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Cameron's a tiny little man in the service of a beautiful, mischievous giantess. To earn his keep with her, occasionally he has to perform certain "groundskeeping" functions.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Scat, Slave, Couples
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21545 Read Count: 53527
[Report This] Published: March 17 2012 Updated: February 26 2018
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 17 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well described story, Aborigen.

Good subject matter with a cruel giantess.

I hope you decide to continue it.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the positive review! I thought this would just be a one-off, but it sounds like there's some interest in more. What elements in the story most appealed to you?

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wonderful story.

Great detailed descriptions.

Fantastic immagination.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you much for saying so!

The Diminutive Situation. by Mara Rated: X Round robin starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A reclusive honor student named Claire McLane wakes up one day to find herself ant-sized in an all girl's High School with no recollection of how she ended up this way. Claire is forced to fight for her life to survive in a world hundreds of times her own size while trying to figure out how to get back to normal. Will she be able to find out how to get back to normal? Can she avoid the wrath of the Giants around her? Surviving High School has never been this hard... 


Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Amozo Virus Tales
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8407 Read Count: 88385
[Report This] Published: March 21 2012 Updated: May 02 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: March 21 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Beautiful Freckled Host.

How do you manage to write chapters with exactly 500 words in them?

Please continue - perhaps Chapt. 4 will have 600 words. : )



Author's Response:

When I tried to post the full introdiction it had 1200 words in it. Unfortunately, the website wouldn't let me post a chapter under or over 500 words. And thanks for commenting by the way. You're the first person that has commenting. I'm flattered that you want me to continue the story. Don't worry. I will. And unlike most stories here, I make sure it has an ending :)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.