Penname: RamsusXIII [Contact] Real name: Max
Member Since: March 21 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:

If you want to know about me just contact me and ask.


 


I'm also MoonlightUmbry


Beta-reader: Yes
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Summary: In the dead of night, a giant woman materializes in the middle of a quiet suburban street. Her goal: Capture a young human male for resale. But not everything goes to plan...

Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3699 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: February 17 2006 Updated: February 17 2006
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Short and sweet. Very nice work. :)


Author's Response: Thanks, Ramsus.

Summary: Shrunk by a meteorite.



You would think your mother would trie to save you..



But she has other plans with you..
Categories: Giantess, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 Read Count: 32772
[Report This] Published: March 23 2006 Updated: March 23 2006
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstar
Date: March 23 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is probably the first story I've ever read like this, to be honest I was a bit skeptical at first, because I didn't think it could be well written, but despite some errors, it was well done. It was a hot and lovely story.

Keep up the good work.

My rating. 6 stars. Above average.

Author's Response: Thank You ! I really enjoyed writing it.

Summary: In the not-too-distant future, a drug is invented that induces growth in every organic thing that absorbs it - except human males. This is a story of a man living roughly one hundred years later - when the male gender has become nothing more than a myth, and women stand over 250 feet tall.
Categories: New World Order, Giantess, Gentle, Insertion, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61928 Read Count: 310674
[Report This] Published: April 01 2006 Updated: April 01 2006
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2007 Title: Chapter 19: 18: Dawn

Pure excellence. This story had me from start to finish. Great plot, powerful emotions. Love the ending.

 

Kudos to you. If I could I'd give beyond the maximum rating, but since I can't you'd have to settle for that. Thank you for this wonderful story. 



Author's Response:
Wow.  Beyond a 5?  High praise indeed.
 
Glad you liked it. 

Summary:

Allison thinks that her sister Amanda stole her CD Player. The two sisters get in a fight over that fact and tear the house apart.

When their mother gets home, she is quite upset and punishes Allison by making her the property of her sister Amanda.


Categories: Transformation, Teenager (13-19), Animal, Humiliation, Object, Unaware, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14074 Read Count: 176444
[Report This] Published: May 31 2006 Updated: August 12 2013
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstar
Date: January 24 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Good story. Took me forever to read cause of all the errors, so I had to muddle through it. Not bad though, I like the way you took it. It's just the structuring that was poor.

Deep Inside Her. by Xtms Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: You got shrunk at school.

Then a girl finds you, and hides you deep inside her.

But then her boyfriend drops by and wants to fuck her deeply..
Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Couples , Entrapment, Humiliation, Unaware, Slave, Mouth Play, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1542 Read Count: 74750
[Report This] Published: July 17 2006 Updated: July 17 2006
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not bad because giant couples rule, but what became of the little fellow?

Homunculus by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary: A tiny teenager is forced to live with his normal-sized family. Ignored by his father, he finds himself at the mercy of his sadistic stepmother and her friends, who delight in teasing and torturing him. His only allies are his bratty stepsister and the gentle housekeeper/babysitter with whom he becomes enamored.
Categories: Violent, Instant Size Change, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139916 Read Count: 1336118
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: October 21 2008
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Say that was a pretty good story.  It seemed to drag in many parts. Which made it difficult to read, but all in all it was a good tale.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, Ramsus. Thanks!

Tech Support by nostromo Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A man comes to consciousness and finds himself the dildo of a young woman. He tries to regain his memory.
Categories: Mouth Play, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16848 Read Count: 61255
[Report This] Published: January 16 2007 Updated: January 28 2007
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Was kinda hard to follow at first but then it quickly picked up into something fantastic. Keep at it.

Author's Response: yes, i think the start may have thrown quite a few readers off, but i'm glad to see you approve the development! thanks a mil for commenting ramsus! ;-)

Summary:

On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace.  A four-year investigation proved inconclusive.  Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.

This is their story.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 223191
[Report This] Published: January 19 2007 Updated: June 24 2009
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 7:30

So far so good. I like the different point of views here. Can't wait to see all of this develop.


Author's Response: Cool.  Just wait until next weekend or so.

Summary: A accident happens in a town shrinking its entire inhabitants accept for one person, a high school student who just happens to be a cheerleader.
Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Cheerleader of Dupuy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19091 Read Count: 16084
[Report This] Published: March 18 2007 Updated: March 18 2007
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstar
Date: March 25 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah I remember seeing this story before. Not bad.

Mom's shoe by not really Rated: G half-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

a 12 year old gets his mom a gift  which he will regret


Categories: Object, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 425 Read Count: 30216
[Report This] Published: October 05 2007 Updated: October 05 2007
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed half-star
Date: October 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The shoe

what...

MISS Bloom by not really Rated: PG starhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A FETISH AT SCHOOL GOES WRONG WHEN YOU GET SHRUNK AND NOBODY KNOWS EXCEPT YOUR EVIL TEACHER.


Categories: Unaware, Instant Size Change, Crush, Teenager (13-19), Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 611 Read Count: 10140
[Report This] Published: October 05 2007 Updated: October 05 2007
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed half-star
Date: October 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: MRS BLOOM

For starters, you have it all in caps. DO NOT DO THIS FOR THE ENTIRE STORY IT IS NOT CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL! Second this story seems like a joke, are you really serious? Third, if you are serious, this story is an absolute mess, seems incredibly rushed and has like...no direction at all.

Summary:

A young man named Metal has a pleasant experience with his very good friend Lily.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Adventures of Metallus and Followers
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2330 Read Count: 39069
[Report This] Published: November 06 2007 Updated: November 06 2007
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 20 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Entire Story

Having a foot fetish makes one disturbing and disgusting? The narrowmindness of this world nowadays. Minor nitpicks is the overuse of elipses (which should only be 3 periods, not 4 or higher), lack of consistancy at times, lack of discription in some actions and few punctuation errors.

 

In any case, this was a fine story. Do look forward to another if any. 



Author's Response:

I like the way you think. Precise, thought-out, and to the point. But I intended for this story not only a certain group of people and wanted a wide variety of people to read a quick and well conveyed story that was actually likeable. So, i decided to make it a little less tword the hardcore side.

Foot fetishes are simply a state of mind that has one appreciate feet a bit more than others. Considering society, it is not smiled upon and may be both of your descriptions. Those were simply the views of the character and a bit of me
. Don't get me wrong, I think that it's perfectly fine for someone to have a foot fetish. But experiences drive opinions,and opinions drive other opinions to be similar, so that's how people think these days.

As to my excruciating amount of periods, they were simply used to convey how much time was spent in silence. It's hard to convey this with only two or three periods and be grammatically correct, but my views are solid. I wanted an easily pictured story, so I picked excellent conveying over grammatic perfection, just as may excellent authors do.

I can promise a second chapter of the series, and it will be soon. But not too soon considering my busy schedule. This has been a delightful exchange of ideas, and i hope to hear from you again.

From the One and Only, Sir Lime

Summer Job by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Dave thinks he's found the perfect summer job, interning for an affable but slightly mad inventor named Eddie. But Eddie's wife Carolyn appropriates her husband's shrinking machine, and Dave soon finds himself at her mercy...
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133393 Read Count: 354488
[Report This] Published: February 06 2008 Updated: February 02 2010
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww, out of chapters already.

 

It goes without saying I'm enjoying this one highly, can't wait to see more. 



Author's Response: Well, thanks for saying it anyway ;-) Glad you\'re digging the story!

Summary: Tiny Jacob finally gets adopted, practially given away since he was too old to remain at the adoption agency.
Categories: Feet, Entrapment, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3047 Read Count: 21023
[Report This] Published: June 17 2008 Updated: June 17 2008
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Trick or Treat, Smell my Feet!

A nice delightful short. I enjoyed it all the way. Great work.

Summary:

A Young girl fancies herself a super-villain, but first she needs to take care of her caped nemisis, Supergirl.

 ***Please note that this was not originally my idea for a story, the concept was borrowed from a single chapter unfinished (i think) story i found here a couple of years ago, i have simply made it my own and finished it ***

This is not my usual style of story telling, but i think it might apeal to a fair amount of people. A total of 10,797 words of smut, porn and fearsome amounts of sadistic torture (okay, that last part IS my usual style ^_^ )


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11126 Read Count: 127898
[Report This] Published: May 20 2009 Updated: May 25 2009
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Tables Turn

I've taken it upon myself to read all your stories as this is the 2nd of yours that I've read and thoroughly enjoyed. At this rate you'll be one of my favorite authors. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)  I'm pleased you appreciate my writing ^_^

Summary:

Nami was on her way to a business meeting back in Japan, however her plane is caught in a freak storm and crash lands in a strange kind of jungle.


Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4838 Read Count: 49859
[Report This] Published: June 02 2009 Updated: September 28 2009
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed
Date: April 11 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Bad to Worse

Quite an enjoyable story. I'm not the biggest fan of unaware, but I can respect it's potential, and you did an amazing job here.

Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^

Now and Then by Cayce Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: In 2009, high school junior Aaron Ledbetter is diagnosed with adult-onset minutism, a condition that will cause him to gradually shrink over the next year or so.

In 2010, high school senior Aaron Ledbetter is still adjusting to his tiny size when he finds himself a prisoner and totally at the mercy of an unbalanced ex-girlfriend.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8912 Read Count: 22114
[Report This] Published: July 29 2010 Updated: July 29 2010
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed
Date: August 03 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're one of my favorite authors on here and with good reason. Another good job. Is this all or should we expect future chapters? :)

Author's Response: Planning on some future chapters, although the Carrie storyline will probably wrap up sooner than some folks would expect. There are so many stories I want to tell here, and the whole psychotic ex-girlfriend thing is only the tip of the iceberg =)

First Dates by Emma Gear Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A guy and a girl have a lovely first date together. Then they go home for the night and the girl has some lovely games she'd like to play.

Then things get decidedly not lovely. Maybe a little smutty.
Categories: Mouth Play, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6172 Read Count: 12481
[Report This] Published: September 11 2013 Updated: September 11 2013
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed
Date: September 13 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yo dawg that was cool, fun twist on the ending as well

Summary:

Story One of my Danza Macabra Series of Short Stories, as voted for by my readers ^_^ (well, the majority at least :P)

No description of the Shrunken Woman, because she has no mirror to see herself with and it is mostly told from her POV. Also so the reader can place their own character within the situation should they wish to. (read: Use your imagination you lazy sods! ;) )

Happy with this as my premier story to get me back into the writing mood :) Its a concept i've been wanting to do for a very long time now.

Hope you enjoy!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Danza Macabra Series of Short Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2529 Read Count: 6711
[Report This] Published: September 13 2013 Updated: September 13 2013
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lunchbox

What a DELIGHTFULLY dark twist and finish. I was certainly engaged with this piece. Excellent work.



Author's Response:

Awesomes ^_^  Had great fun writing this so its great to see so many enjoying it :)

Summary:

A lonely girl sits at a bar waiting for a date who doesn't show up. The night isn't a complete loss however thanks to a friendly bartender who gives her something special to enjoy.

 

The second in my Danza Macabra series :) 


Categories: New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Danza Macabra Series of Short Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2666 Read Count: 6983
[Report This] Published: September 20 2013 Updated: September 20 2013
Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed
Date: September 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Opportunities

I did expect the olive to be her date, but that wasn't the case, and I actually prefer it that way. Job well done. :)



Author's Response:

Why thank you :D  I try to keep things 'alternative' ;)