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Taking the "Bus" by Toxenisfun Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Unfortunately for her, Jackie has to take the "bus" after work to get home.'

 

*EDIT 07/16/20* Updated Chapters 10 and 14 AKA the ones that needed fixing. As well, some more chapters coming in the next few days. Keep on the look out for those, trust me when I say you don't want to miss them.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: This Micro World
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91464 Read Count: 179349
[Report This] Published: July 30 2018 Updated: October 23 2020
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: November 30 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Breakfast...with company

I think the story could benefit from an antagonist since everyone else is so nice, but the Alyssa character came up so abruptly that it seemed forced. I know this was a first run, so maybe it could be improved.  Perhaps as an alternative one of the existing characters finds a darker side of themselves...perhaps Jackie herself.  When the three try the role reversal  (a great idea!) Jackie's new position of power awakes something in here where she is in charge for once. Perhaps her new position as giantess gets the better of her. Not that she's evil but she enjoys the power. Perhaps it even allows her to better understand Carissa who was in a similar position as a child when she visited Jackie's school for the first time. I think the Alyssa character can be developed a bit more, and just wanted to provide some alternative ideas for an antagonist.  Great work as always!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And yeah, Alyssa's introduction could've been a little more organic and not forced as you said. But I love your idea of one of the three becoming 'darker'. It's definitely an idea we could see in the future. Adding Alyssa however back into the story however, I'll go back to the drawing board on that one. Hope to see you around, hopefully with Alyssa's reintroduction fixed and definitely more organic!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: December 24 2018 Title: Chapter 11: VRcade

Excellent chapter!  Now that they are in the VR world...can't wait to see how the unlimited size options are explored between these three very different characters!  Would love to see Jackie as the giantess or, perhaps Carissa wrests power over the VR world from Jackie and reverts to some of her old ways with a tiny Jackie and Marleigh?  Unlimited possibilities!



Author's Response: I really hope to add at least a chapter to each of the girls personal fantasies dealing with their sizes. Even if she'd the one controlling everything, Jackie will still play ball with Marleigh's and Carissa's personal fantasies. A giant Carissa with tiny Jackie and Marleigh? All three the same size destroying a micro city? I agree, there are so many ideas that could be tossed in but not enough time. Hell, just those two ideas sound really interesting to write in. I hope to satisfy the desires of both the characters and the readers as well :)

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: February 01 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Fun in the City

Thank you so much for continuing this gem!  This was a great chapter, but I can't wait to see how Carissa treats her tiny friends!  They're going to have some big feet to explore! 

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: March 06 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Goddess Carissa

Loved the Carissa feet chapter! Really amazing,  but I had hoped for a giantess Carissa in a city of tinies including Marleigh and Jackie. Still, really amazing and fun! I can't wait to see what an omnipotent Jackie is cooking up now that she is mad...hopefully mega Jackie?

Where's Your Brother? by daftpunk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

NEW: 31 Aug CHAPTER 9!

A sick, shrinking boy is taken care of by his over-protective but klutzy mother. His sister, jealous of the attention, plans revenge!

An Unaware Giantess focused story.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Maternal, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14102 Read Count: 172070
[Report This] Published: August 26 2018 Updated: November 01 2019
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: October 15 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Dam Bursts

Very excited for the next chapter.  I've been waiting for Eleanor to get her opportunity . Hopefully he gets much smaller while they're together. 



Author's Response:

Yes the next chapter is going to be really special i hope! As for eleanor some PG13 suggestions would be good.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: November 13 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - That One Night

Great chapter! I like Misaki as there is opportunity for either Jeremy to be a dominant tiny or for Misaki to finally take control given her naturally passive/submissive nature.  I would, however,  still love to see Jeremy explore his sister's soles.  Perhaps they could recreate the bed scene at his new size? Perhaps he could even be smaller than now?



Author's Response:

Should be something youd like in the chapter after the next! thanks for reviewing as usual.

United States Shrinking Postal Service, Part 2 by jnbt Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

My (now ex-)girlfriend and I had quite the ordeal, having been shrunk down to 1/8th of an inch tall and shipped by the United States Shrinking Postal Service to visit her younger sister across the country. It was a terrifying situation to be thrown into, but I did oddly love it. Parts of it. My life has returned to normal lately, but a text from my ex might change all that.

[Emphasis on hands and feet, and accordingly, fingernails and toenails. 1/8th of an inch tall.]

EDIT #1: My ideal Elana feet: https://tinyurl.com/y8uwxaut


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16972 Read Count: 76663
[Report This] Published: September 11 2018 Updated: October 22 2018
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: September 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

I'm so excited you decided to continue this story. It's a great concept and one of my favorites on here! Hopefully there's a lot of footplay and the return of the French pedicure girl. Maybe even some growth with the USSPS ray? Great story and thanks again!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: September 18 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Elana's Apartment

Elana looks like she would make a great giantess if her friend at USSPS could ever give her a growth pill...she would have the time of her life.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: October 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Anna's Reconciliation

I continue to really like the story, but I feel you are beginning to blaze through characters without any meaningful interaction with any single one of them. What made part 1 of USSPS compelling was the character development. It might help to slow the pace a bit unless this is part of a broader story arc I can't yet see. Would also love to see interaction including but moving beyond nails to footplay and exploration.  Would also love to see gts growth down the line as Anna, Elana, or Anna's little sister would have a lot of fun with it. Still, great work and looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the advice. Kinda hit a wall here. Taking some time to think of what's next.

The VitaCorp Accident by tinyman91 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

This will be a slow shrinking story about an older brother that worked at a very respectable vacination laboratory. However not everything is as it seems, after a lab accident it is reveald that the Corperation was using sub par safety measures to keep contamination to a minimal.

David is exposed to an unknown virus due to the fact that the building's air filtration system was nonexistant.

This story will follow things from his point of view as he slowly watches the world grow around him.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22712 Read Count: 96862
[Report This] Published: October 17 2018 Updated: October 10 2020
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: September 17 2020 Title: Chapter 7: A Movie Nightmare.

Great chapter and happy to see you continue this story! I can't wait to see him get really tiny, and i love the dynamic with his sister! Hoping for bare footplay!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, and don't worry he'll be getting real tiny soon enough and yes there will be some bare foot play too.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: May 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Accident

Well, either way, I am really looking forward to reading more and hopefully Nicola makes a reappearance as his attorney as he gets down to some really small sizes ;)



Author's Response:

Afraid not, it was just a small cameo, but there will be references to other author's works such as Minuss, and BBL Zimmer, as I said this is an omage to the authors that have inspired me over the years.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: May 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Accident

I al so excited you decided to continue this slow shrink story as it is one of the best on this site! Your storytelling and descriptions are wonderful, and I cannot wait to see how his relationship with Gwen changes as he shrinks to a tiny size. I am hopeful he gets well below 1 inch and there is a footplay focus. I am especially excited to see your inspiration from SG and the inclusion of Nicola!! She is an AMAZING character (although she is Irish, not Scottish in SG), and including her will help a lot of people sustain themselves before OHH's Nicola growth story begins.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Actually her profile states she's from scottland, but moved to Ireland, but I might've read it wrong. Either case I wanted to make sure that I payed tribute to him with this chapter, and I figured what better way than making her the representative of the victimes of the accident? I'm glad you like the story and as soon as I figure out the next arc I'll post the nex chapter.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: March 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Accident

I really hope this story continues...it is one of the best on here!



Author's Response:

It will, it was just on Hiatus.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: April 25 2019 Title: Chapter 5: An Antibiotic Secret

Welcome back! Very happy to see this story continue as it is one of my favorites. Can't wait to see him get down to a really tiny size!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, glad to be back, hopefully the next chapter won't take quite as long, but I'm not making any promises, I still need to get the bones laid out before I can flesh things out.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: October 17 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Accident

Yes, very interested in seeing this progress.  A slow-shrink novel is always great!  Would love some footplay when he gets small enough...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review, and don't worry there will be plenty of foot play from both the mom and sister to satisfy even the most seasoned foot fetishist.

Lauren by SkullNoise Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Lauren is a well-off girl living her dream in a fabulous apartment in the city. She goes to work, hangs out with her friends, and goes on some harmless adventures when she gets blackout drunk.

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Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10515 Read Count: 24789
[Report This] Published: October 25 2018 Updated: November 12 2018
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: October 25 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Party for One

Very good start. Looking forward to reading more!

Family Foot Devotional by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

An unfortunate fetish and a shrinking punishment soon molds Cameron into a full-time, full-size foot slave for his mother and little sister.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19690 Read Count: 172132
[Report This] Published: November 11 2018 Updated: April 09 2019
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: March 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, Jacksmith!  Loving this story, but I had to ask...will 2019 be the year that Carley finally realizes her dream of being a real giantess in ALBM?  Would love to see her return to toy with a whole city!



Author's Response:

It's hard to say. I would like to write that at some point.

Hidden Worlds by oops Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Jess seeks to reveal the hidden world beneath our feet. Years after an epidemic shrunk millions to miniscule heights we've established a new normal. The tiny population now toils in the service of the unnaffected, unnoticed and unnappreciated.

So Jess temporarily shrinks down and turns her camera on these hidden worlds starting with the society of thousands that live and die inside her insatiable roommate's sex machine.


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Humiliation, New World Order, Breasts, Body Exploration, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5493 Read Count: 52431
[Report This] Published: November 14 2018 Updated: November 18 2018
Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: March 22 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Proposal

Hey! Is there any hope of continuing this story? It's one of the best on here and a very new take on the genre. The scale of it is also awesome!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: February 14 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Proposal

Hey! I wanted to check in to see if you planned to continue this story.  It really is phenomenal and a unique gem here on GTS World!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed
Date: March 22 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Proposal

Hey! Is there any hope of continuing this story? It's one of the best on here and a very new take on the genre. The scale of it is also awesome!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.