Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed
Date: December 24 2018
Title: Chapter 13: Some Hard Questions
Yeah dude is just going to be crushed by Fulda (or otherwise killed) at the end. Would hope that her Gina and her sorority would get some justice despinsed to them, hell I would hope Fulda would acknowledge the errors of her ways and bring in all of her sisters herself. Dude is done-realistic view point and the one I am sticking with till the end.
Hopeful (hopefulish) viewpoint, Dude and Fulda can love each other, dude can help Fulda realize her sorority sisters need to be 'contained'(thier going to make mistakes that will lead back to her), that shrinking and crushing people is wrong(she may one day do it the wrong person and she will wish she was 1,000 feet tall and dealing with the military) and since she has a book on witchcraft there has to be a spell that brings all the people she has wrongly murdered back.-Hopeful
That if there is a such a spell, and to make sure her real sisters/sorority sisters don't harm anyone as well as Fulda herself, but it requires a sacrifice. The spell like a wish or time travel makes her kill the thing she loves most to accomplish it and even if they are brought back due the spell, they always remember who killed them. So Fulda ensures she doesn't kill starting at 14, she avoids the Prom indicident, she shrinks dude for fun and restores, both do wonderfully in college but every night dude is reminded how Fulda killed him, and Fulda has to live with that massive sin on her conscience.-hopefulish
from all the stories in GW hero goes down, murders aren't punished and logic is at least susspended if not thrown out the window. Would be nice for a happy ending, but those are rare here and it seems authors just want to vore or crush.
It's been a good story so far, but till Fulda's sisters get justice, until Akane returns every one back to normal and when Fulda casts the spell bring back her victims I am squarely in the Dude's dead, Gina's going to get away and Fulda's going back to mass murder if she hasn't already. Would love it to be otherwise but something about this forum seems to reenforce it (like Fulda's sorority). I will not read more if it goes down that path of murder, crush and vore.
Thank you.
Author's Response: This is a perspective I never expected to see, and a bold statement about what you hope happens. I try to maintain an air of suspense about what's coming up between now and the ending, but I will say that there is no such wish spell, and if there were using it would effectively negate the past 60 chapters of this storyline and 20 other stories I've written. While that would placate you, I don't expect that would satisfy any of my other readers, no matter how guilty Fulda felt each night. Everything else is still in play - the main character may die, any number of women might get their just desserts, someone could take issue with them all at once (though that would really be outside the story's scope), but I'm not going to undo everything that's happened since before this story even started.
All that said, I'm flattered you're this invested in the story. It's got a little longer to go before its final wrap, but I think the climax is really going to be something. Please stay tuned, even if it swerves somewhere you don't like, since the winding road can go in all sorts of directions on its way to the end.