Hello! I instantly warn that thic will be a long one, but I think this is already visible.

Generally, great story. I love fantasy, especially D&D like party scenarios. The idea behind this story is brilliant. Being unwillingly bonded with pact which gives tormentor absolute power over you is truly nightmarish scenario. I really like Kirinhalut's ideas for utilizing this power :) So since chapter one I was thrilled while reading this stoey. I know that it may be not really popular because of fantasy theme, but it still could improve over time so don't give up ur rush this one. I like the rescure party and different personalities of giantesses there and their relations.

I'm really thrilled to see what Kirinhaluthad planned for tiny, but I hope especially for one thing: more shrinking. Our protagonist is already very small but from present one inch, that is 2.5 cm, he could shrink to something like 0.5 cm (0.2 inch). Being over four times smaller would mean:
- that Bush will become gargantuan giantess, shaking ground with her steps from our hero perspective and able to mistakenly step on him
- communication with the rest of party will become definetly more hard. He will be much easier to not be seen, so even without Kirinhaluthad  actions he will be at larger risk of different dangerous unaware scenarios. At a closer look he still will be visible and recognizable, but his speech will be unheard. So either some kind of magic will be used by Sora for communication or Bush will have to act as intermediary.
- if already steps taken by giantesses were lound and earth-shaking, after becoming over 60 times their previous weight from our hero perspective, each step will be now tremendous explosion of earthquake, creating dangerous shockwaves of wind and dust and shrapnel. I'm especially looking at careless elf, who could enfulge hero in disastrous eartquake, or maybe elf-quakes is a better therm? She could just place her foot next to ouer hero and by frantic taping of big toe alone shake ground for our tiny hero. Though I'm not really looking for scenario wih our hero being trapped in shoe: it's a really popular theme recently in different stories.  Also their speech will be very defeaning to our hero, hell, their breaths could form from enough distance disastrous winds.

But that above is just my theory. Generally I would love to see:
- this story going long, it has great potential for many different scenarios and aventures hapenning to our party of giantesses. They could ecounter insect swarm, evil witch, evil real giantess, dragon, all sorts of dangerous encounter scenarios very dangerous for our tiny hero. Relations between characters could develop in intereting ways, maybe elf could change her mind about tiny? Or we could know why she is so reluctant toward him ,even if burden of taking care of him is so little to party.
- I'm cheering for happy ending. I feel that you might have something totally different planned for our hero, but I would just be happy to see happy ending for him after all this torment and dangerous situations. Maybe not happy ending like returing to normal size, but maybe gaining some useful abilities and becoming proper memeber of party? I know this might sound absurd but if he could ragain not size but just strength of original size, he could really be useful. Or maybe Sora could turn him into her familiar, granting him some nice abiities and breaking him from Kirinhaluthad power?
- I like Kirinhaluthad but at one point she could just die or her secret indentity discovered by a party, our hero would then keep continue travelling with party without her? Or maybe she would then fly the party, taking tiny with her, but party will come after her and rescue him?
- Generally I love earthqukes created by mere walking of giantess, tinies experiencing tremendous g-force while being lifted by them, defeaning voices, shadows enfulging tinies in darkness, generally giantess dominating tiny reality by their sheer size alone, keep good job with that :)

I know that points above might sound like a "wish fest", but tread them just like suggestions :) I'm eager to see what you will write regardeless of them

Great chapter! I loved the action feeling of it and fact that our tiny hero managed to achieve his goals, displaying quite a bravery. Female antagonist who catched him was also greatly diplayed, generally while reading this story I really feel how small is our hero and it's great. As in previous review: my favourite story so far.

Also we got some very interesting pieces of world building: elven rulers valuating shrinked humans and also human queen ripping them of their laws, I think that if you would exapnd in future on these plot seeds, it could turn out to some very interesting plot and world history. We also got info of feys known as atomie.

I have some, imho interesting idea for a chapter in this story:
- our protagonist is captured/or finds asylum in city (not just a few huts but a real city) of beings as small as him or even smaller (it could happen after our hero shrinking even more but that's not that important).
- he either wants to be saved from this place or wants to lead peaceful life here. In first possible scenario giantesses party comes to save him/or some other giantess comes, maybe even unaware of our hero being there, for example human hating on feys for murdering her shrunken boyfriend/brother/son etc or elf wanting to capture tiny humans. The second variant, I think far more interesting, is Kirinhaluthad manipulating our party to attack and destroy city, maybe knowing that our hero is there or maybe not.
- as this story has strong D&D vibes for me, in D&D quite a lower power spell is enlarge person, making someone two (or if upgraded -three) times bigger. Our giantess party could use this spell amid attack on city, for example seeing that it has some suprisingly powerful magic defences. Seeing the grow inside attacked city would quite epic.
- generally our hero experiences dramatic desctrution of city, especially if Kirinhaluthad  manipulates party to attack town, it would be heart-wrecking for our hero to see his hope for peaceful life and maybe newly made friends literally crushed under feet.

Another great chapters! It's great to see that mood of the story switched from a torment to more pleasant for our little hero! All it required was getting Lel out of party :D One thing boggles my mind, did anyone in the party ask for our heroe's name? Maybe I forgot.

Besides, what I especially loved in recent chapters:
- our hero once again proved brave and capable in combat despite his size in saving his teammates and this time saved the day for party instead of ebing used as a tool.
- I loved the idea of magic traps imprisoning victims in jars and fact that staying in there for more than 24 hours makes effect pernament. Good and creative use of magic. I don't get though why Sondra didn't try to dispell this effect, at leat on this one tiny humand they got out from jar, she seems to be able to cast spells withouth spending many time on them and soon after meeting our heroe for fist time tried to enlarge him with one.
- This one step which Lel took which utterly crushed our hero was so epic, funny and pun! It worked greatly with her speaking about "putting her foot down" and in comparison to fact that our heroe when facing bandit leader or witch was able to dodge footfalls aimed at him but all it took to destroy him was one unaware step from Lel :D It's like her mere presence, whether she is aware of tiny hero or not, is a source of suffering for him. It was also greatly ironic that moment after helping to save whole party which was his size minute ago, he was stomped by one if it;s members. Also fact that Lel ignored Bushwack trying to speak about him worked great with the whole scene.
- Sondra's care for our little hero when she though that he died and after was so sweet and greatly written that is one of our favourite moments of this story, I hope to see more of it :D Also Sondra and Margret making a bed for him was a nice touch.

- Repercussions for Lel were a great plot point. Even if she crushed our hero unintentionally, her previous actions and words made this mistake a one way ticket out of party for her, it's great that karma finally got her.
- I love the fact how Margret sees our hero a little bit like a fun toy. Sure, she recognizes him as human and definetly treats him better than Lel or Bushwack but she also seems to be hyped a little bit about his size, what makes her a great character, scene with cup was great and I must admit - unexpected.

My only one "note" is that it would be great if wooden floor in tavern could be more "tremor conducting" and giantesses walking on it could rock our tiny heroe's world, maybe during morning half-awaken Margaret could stomp on it a little bit too hard and create earthquake for our hero (and make him for example fall from desk)? But don't worry too much about his comment, I have fixation on tremors, hence the nickname :)

Could you please give exact size of our hero - is he exactly one inch tall? and how long is Lel's foot/shoe? Also one last question: will we get some barefoot or sandal action or rather not?

Ok, that's a really interesting story! I warn:

- this review will be too long

- I'm a grumpy person who always finds something to complain on something or sugest how to improve something, with specific tastes. My purspose is definetly not criticizing, discouraging or putting the author down. Don't worry too much about things in here.

- I don't mind monster girls, but I'm rather into other types of them. Still, it doesn't stop me from appreacieating this story :)

- I'm rather not in the target audience as I'm not especially into "direct sexual interactions" but if your story will offer something besides them in incoming chapters I will definetly stick ;)

Alright, what I liked:

- underwater setting: it's a rare location for story, oferring many unique and interesting situations and indications

- the Mako personality is really entertaining and cute, despite havoc created by her actions

- putting emphasis on ground/ocean tremor when Mako has pushed off ground or by her speaking was good. Putting even more emphasis will even make it better

- the mundane situation of ship disaster and well described in believable way rescue action create great contrast with leviathan Mako

- the idea that Mako is unaware of her monstrual ascension and mistakes humans and their devices with small fishes is delicious - pun intended

- I love the switching between human and Mako perspective

- tiny human reactions to Mako were good and believable

My suggestions:

- my mantra: bigger impact of giantess on enivironemnt: tremors, earthquakes, sounds ... you did those good but they can be used even more, also you could try playing with things like shadows (the divers unaware of her presence who are all of sudden covered in titanic shadow sound like a good scene idea). Also movement of water created by movement of Mako can be a disastrous force itself, bring all sorts of different doom on humans, both undearwater and bove it. Idea of pilots of some underwate or above water vehicle desperatly struggling to survive abrupt storm caused by Mako is an interesting concept.

- I think that keeping idea of Mako being unaware of her new size, at least for some time, is a good idea. Also, to some extent idea of humans not knowing with what they are dealing with can be interesting

- some unaware destruction of oil rig, cruiser ships, submarine etc is a good idea imho. It can be fully unaware or result of Mako playing with human vessels, without realising that they are inside

- to expand above: I would love scene where Mako swallows, even by accident, some underwater vehicle or object (like waterproof container) with people inside and people doesn't realise at the beginning what have happend - they slowly realise that something went horribly wrong and then leave their vehicle and event after that not realise horror of their situation instantly

- Ok, I think that Mako size is really good, but if she becomes bigger later ... she could deliver some disastrous destruction by her mere presence or movement, like giant waves destroyning some port for example

- I don't know if Mako can breathe above water, but if she can, then she can interact with some parts of costal cities ... or places like Statue of Liberty

Good story, I'm looking for more :)