A scientist finds a way of communicating with a woman from another world. He transports himself to her world without her knowledge, the only catch being that everything in her world is on a far larger scale... But that's just the tip of the iceberg.
It'd be a sham if I didn't review this, so I will. I very much liked it! I have to say, when I started reading it, I didn't expect it to become so action-packed towards the end. Very impressive.
Author's Response: Thanks Mundo, much appreciated. Your own "Micro-Shrinkers, Inc." is excellent, but I\'ve held off on giving it a formal review until it\'s complete. Perhaps that\'ll give you some incentive to finish it?
Scott Chelgren, slacker and student at the University of Minnesota finds himself content with college and not wanting to leave. However, when he comes across some Magick his world is turned upside when he finds himself shrinking away from everything he has ever known.
I read this story a long time ago. One of my favorite stories, as is the sequel.
A boy shrinks, and his sisters document the experience on YouTube.
Finally made it through the story. It's an interesting world that's been built here. The whole relationship between humans and premies is a little creepy and unsettling and I'm glad that there's definitely acknowledgement of that with Eli and the Premoria community. I'm really hoping we get to see it come to a head when Eli is able to afford to go live there. All in all it's an interesting story you have and I'll be watching to see where it goes.
Thanks for the review! I agree, it is a bit creepy and unsettling. Judging from the latest chapter, the initial glimpses of Premoria don't seem to be all that less creepy. Here's to holding out hope for the rest of the city. :)
