I'm intending to read this all in one sitting, but I have to tell you, after this first chapter I am absolutely in love with your setup. I really appreciate how you've worked the language of gender in here, and then extrapolated it out to a place where a "ciscunt" can exist. Or maybe that's a thing in the radical SJW, I dunno. Either way Anita is terrifying in how realized a fanatic she is. I appreciate how you're twisting the narrative.

I love Anita. I want to be captured by Anita and have her *SPOILERS* cut my cock off. Although maybe it was just the balls. In my mind reading it I saw it as all the bits. And that pause.

I like this a lot.

Hey! Cool. Here are my thoughts.

Your formatting has improved between this and your last story.

None of your characters have faces or bodies. You do a good job providing action, and stringing actions together into sequences -- all that is very clear -- but you can trim some of this out for other things: descriptions of your characters, more of their thoughts. More dialogue especially; you have almost none. Right now all of your characters all feel the same because they are missing they other ingredients.

For any character you want to be a real character, try to do two simple things at least: build an image of them in your reader's mind, and then reveal the mind of the character to the reader as well.

Overall this reads like a cinematic scene, which is good. But that's the start. Words give us an extra element as writers. We get to convey emotion directly to the reader. This means dipping into the scene and not watching it. Action is only one part; use senses to pull the reader into the moment. Sounds, tastes, smells. You do have the presence of smell here, but saying something is a "stinky foot" for instance, does not build an olfactory sense; saying it smelled "salty like sweat, and like the mango foot lotion that was Giantess #1's favorite," both creates scent, and develops the character just a hair more.

You don't need the call to "present day" halfway down; the paragraph before it establishes time.

I'll give you a piece of general advice I give anyone, and follow myself: when you're done with a story, trim it by a third. The next time you go through it you'll be left with all this action, and you'll be in a good place to build.

Also, if you care about a character, give them an eye color. Eye-to-eye contact, light, is a visceral connection, and putting color in there will create that connection in your reader's mind.

Again, you have flow and action here. Please don't take this critique in a negative way. It is written with love; thank you for sharing.

A great read to revisit. Rediscovering all the little details here was truly a pleasure. I love the setup - a hand-drawn tome - and your vivid descriptions and dialogue give us a clear and quick glimpse of who Scarlet and Lily were before this orgy of crush gets underway. And that cup crush. :D

A wonderful story and a pleasure to reread. I'd forgotten about the little "bug" that escaped from the box in the beginning. Really love that subtle little touch!

A fine yarn, Rythmear. A great origin story for Scarlet, a goddess of size-death.

Black Neptune, this is excellent. I very much enjoyed it. As a reader who is bisexual, I truly appreciated Kevin's fluid orientation, and how he's questioning what he likes. That is a familiar place for me (for a younger me), and it's neat to see that play out in a character, because it's not something I get a lot of in fiction in general, inside or out of fetish writing. That, and gay men stepping on women is its own sub-kink of mine. I love it.

A lot of hot footplay in this especially. That oh so sexy trampling too - I like that you mixed that in. That sole sandwich! Both Kevin and Ricky are hot, teasing, cruel giants, and I really appreciate that. And <3 flip-flops.

In terms of grammar, I didn't see many errors. A few shifts in tense, which is something I struggle with and have to carefully edit. Only one typo that I can recall off the top of my head. (Waste instead of waist.) I found it to be a very clean read, and very much enjoyed your descriptions.

Just to say, there were a lot of odd comments here. People who didn't give you the same right to your fantasies that they enjoy. Luckily the administrators of this site welcome a wide range of fantasies, including ours, and I hope you will not let the words that were posted here discourage you. It's just a gauntlet any writer outside of F/m or M/m has to survive posting at the big hubs like World and City and CF.

You're a fine writer whose work is a joy for me to read, and I sorely missed it. It's so good to see you writing again.

A very enjoyable read! I really loved how you played off the idea of people with opposing kinks here, especially her desire for an unwilling victim, and how that manifested in him. Haha, that last line is truly great. Also, I didn't know I would be in this. I could not stop giggling when I appeared as an unconscious prop. :D

I particularly enjoyed how James responded to being teased with the lure of his kinks. I feel like I know that kinda reaction and it made his character very lifelike for me. She did, too, with the texture you wrote into her preferences.

Even if this used random names instead of evoking people I'm fond of, I feel like I would have enjoyed it just as much because it's very well done all around.

I enjoyed this as is, with giant men and little women. :)

I really like it. It's short and sweet, but has some great descriptions. I only wish there was more of it. I enjoyed the way you described the world and wanted to spend more time reading it. Would love to see you dig into some greater detailed action.

I'm really enjoying this. It's a rare kind of story for me. I'm bi and really appreciate how Tyler seems to be as well, and that he's being humiliated at people's feet - the stuff of my fantasies. I'm really curious to see where you take this. I'm really into the characters, and how they're treating him. Looking forward to this conclusion. :)

I found this to be cleverly written. it was a real pleasure to read, and damn hot. hell of a strong voice. wonderfully concise. love, love, love Kerry. really enjoyed it!

I enjoyed this, very much! A fine read. I love this group of characters, and how fluid they are in their attractions to one other. Very hot stuff!

short but very sweet. I enjoyed the glimpse at this world.