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Reviewer: treblig01234 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2019 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Boy Meets Mother

  • Nice, cruelty is missing in many stories here. We love giantess because of difference in power against small person. 

 

Please don't limit your words because of because of people saying the character is too young. 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Boy Meets Mother

I'm liking this so far. The mother's love for her diminuitive son immediately endears me to her character. 

Small critique. Each time a character speaks should be treated as its own paragraph. This makes it easier for the reader to know who is talking. I was a little confused during conversations because of this. 

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