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Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg this story is already around 9 years old... but I enjoyed reading this story most immensely!
Truly exceptionally well written.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2008 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked the story. You did everything that you needed to for a short tale of this type.
I'm looking forward to your future work.

Author's Response: thank you for your kind comments. i hope you enjoy my future work. I think I've found a good place to write my vore stories.

Reviewer: Star Sage Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2008 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, not bad, not bad at all. As an American, I found it hard to place evey dish, though thanks to an anime, I know what Mochi looks like(Monster Rancher). The plot is good, and the characters come off well. I do enjoy the last few scenes too, especially the description of the contents of the stomach sloshing about. All in all, an A.

Author's Response:

thanks for your kind comments!


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