[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 10:17 PM Title: Performance Evaluation.
This is my favorite chapter. I can see Leilana messing with him, but never actually shrinking him. Just using him for sex.
Unless he asks to be shrunk.
Author's Response:
I think she's very much into the idea of having him be at her disposal, completely at her disposal, for any and all business related needs.
Thank you so much for reading and providing feedback!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2022 7:27 PM Title: Performance Evaluation.
Damn, I need a part 2 to this!
Getting called to the office by my boss is usually bad, unless your boss is hot. If my boss was hot, it’s like getting invited to her personal room.
And the fact that she locks the doors and such to maintain privacy while also discussing business to create tension just felt so good to listen to.
I wonder if his performance for this next part will be below expectations or something. Lol. Imagine she doesn’t like his sexual performance so she keeps him in her panties all day so he could practice his skills. Lol. That would be awesome.
Great chapter! I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
I like the way you think! I'm planning on running a few other stories about office life. I plan on bringing back Leilana Laurent back for a future episode!
Thank you again for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2022 12:42 PM Title: The External Hire
Cruelty written amazingly well. A plethora of words and adjectives were used, and an overall tidy and concise descriptive prose. Very good stuff. If anything, I’d only want the actual scene to be a bit longer, but that’s merely a personal nitpick.
Author's Response:
Longer stories are definitely my bane. I am working on a long form super hero story, but it is proving as difficult as I'd imagined. I will work on getting better at it, though!
Thank you for the feedback and for reading!
Date: September 10 2022 8:32 AM Title: The External Hire
I have no idea how I missed this story until now (but hey, I get four chapters at a time!).
Just good job, really!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!
I have a few more office misadventures planned, I hope you enjoy them as well!
Date: June 29 2022 4:48 PM Title: The External Hire
Any future updates planned?
Author's Response:
Yep! I'm just really bad at finishing things, I've had sequels to Abduction and Dangerous Occupations done for months, I just keep getting distracted. I've also got a long form one that I want to write about a witch working for an otherworldly power, and I want the characterization in that to be on point. Worse still I've taken up writing GWA scripts, and have been universally bad at that, so I'm trying to improve there as well.
As far as Office Life and Death, yes, I will have more, but I really want to find scenarios that are both unique enough to merit writing and centered around an office setting. The "'Downsizing Our Workforce' thing is nice, but I think may have been overdone. I'm writing a non-Office story that features a tiny man attempting to domme his normal sized girlfriend, and it got me thinking about a setting where the boss was a shrunken man navigating the perils and perks of working with a series of employees who each present him with challenges.
All in all, I hope to get something out this weekend, although I don't know just yet what it will be.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 8:18 PM Title: The External Hire
Great to see you writing again. Excellent work on all three chapters! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope the next chapter can live up to the expectations. I want to keep this going as a means of forcing me to write.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 6:00 PM Title: Supply Chain Diversity
My goodness, even the dialogue was amazing in this chapter!
Alanna’s story telling abilities were spectacular. It’s like she was telling Bill a horror movie and she was enjoying his reaction.
I love it when a woman describes what she would do with a tiny guy. It just makes me excited because if you like what she says, it makes you excited for it to happen!
That scene with Michelle was good. Her body language changing from her shy self has left Bill shaking. I love it!
Also, the ending was superb with the him shrinking and Alanna finding him. Now those stories will come true!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope the next chapter is as well received. I expect it to be a spicy one.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2022 1:13 AM Title: One on One Meeting
Wow, I’m loving these short story ideas!
The second chapter was subtly erotic and I found that fascinating. Just the anticipation of wondering what Melissa would do next only for her to leave him there all day and have her friend have him.
That was amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! I expect to push the next one this time next week, and I hope it will live up to expectations. Thank you for reading!