Date: May 27 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love how this story is progressing, well done. Especially like the fact that Diane seems to have been in a relationship were she was either taking advantage of or for granted. Hope you tell her story.
Ps hope emily's doesn't give up hope.
Aaron
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouraging review!
Date: May 27 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I thought the bowl was leading to a meal
Date: May 27 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep! Typcial case of abused person over-compensating. And, the fact she hasn't exposed herself totally, as yet, could mean that she's got scars--from previous relationships--that aren't just mental and/or emotional.*
*Sad-but-true. Some of the sick bastards,who give the male gender a bad name, are just smart enough to leave their girlfriends' faces alone.
Author's Response:
I have to say, your reviews are really enlightening. I now have a better idea of where to take the story. Thanks! :->