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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 12:00 PM Title: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

That would certainly keep _me_ tuning in for further terrific chapters. ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 11:56 AM Title: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

How about Medusa of the Inhumans, Valkyrie of the Defenders, and the Silver Age Black Widow (Natasha Romanov) regrouping as the Lady Liberators? But, under the pheromonal control of...the Mandrill!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 1:59 AM Title: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

You've certainly pushed the boundaries even further than my recent Spider-Man yarn. Great to see it happening with a married couple, to make it nice and morally OK.

Maybe Janet Pym (Giant Woman) and Henry Pym (Ant Man) could be in it too.

Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 4:34 PM Title: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

Commas are a writers friend.^^ Why dont you use them. Also maybe read the chapter again before you post it to get rid of the spelling errors.

 

But despite of that, its good

Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 1:09 PM Title: Spider-man get's a trip up Mj's Cleavage

Finally someone writes something with Spider-Man and MJ! I can't wait to see what happens next. This is awesome.

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