[Report This]Date: January 13 2013 4:04 AM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Wow... that was a close call, eh? *chuckles* Poor Luke. Getting sent flying by the equivalent of a speeding car made of... sock can not be pleasant. *sigh* But that lucky sonuvagun. I may not be the one for... THAT but... gosh.
Intrigued reader,
Ghostbuster5
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 11:10 PM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Spectacular chapter. The fear displayed by Luke was tremendously believable as was the reaction Sophie displayed. I just loved all the detail that you put in this. An when she said something tomthe fact of making his fantasies come true was incredibly hot.. But now that you said the next chapter will most likely have feet, I can't wait.
aaron
Btw thanks for reviewing my 'story'
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 4:23 PM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Good chapter. I like it. Work on your spelling, but it was much better than your first .
I really like it.
I hope shes a Gentle Giantess.
But I dont know your style so I just have to wait.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 3:14 PM Title: Unexpected Behavior
I like the fact that he's getting closer to being completely in her mouth. Nice to have a story like this with no sadistic violence in it.
Author's Response:
I know sometimes what they do to the tiny people in these stories makes my stomach go crazy so I decided on a pure gentle one.
Date: December 31 2012 8:52 AM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Hmmm feet next, ok. I'm not too keen on those but I'll probably end up reading it anyway. This was much better than the last capter although I did notice a few mistakes like here:
he turn and ran as fast as he could
You mean turned.
And here:
it could ruin are friendship!"
You mean our not are.
I think there was another error but I seem to have lost it.
Author's Response: I'll fix that as quick as I can. Truly appreciate the review and all the other ones.