[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 4:23 PM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Good chapter. I like it. Work on your spelling, but it was much better than your first .
I really like it.
I hope shes a Gentle Giantess.
But I dont know your style so I just have to wait.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 3:14 PM Title: Unexpected Behavior
I like the fact that he's getting closer to being completely in her mouth. Nice to have a story like this with no sadistic violence in it.
Author's Response:
I know sometimes what they do to the tiny people in these stories makes my stomach go crazy so I decided on a pure gentle one.
Date: December 31 2012 8:52 AM Title: Unexpected Behavior
Hmmm feet next, ok. I'm not too keen on those but I'll probably end up reading it anyway. This was much better than the last capter although I did notice a few mistakes like here:
he turn and ran as fast as he could
You mean turned.
And here:
it could ruin are friendship!"
You mean our not are.
I think there was another error but I seem to have lost it.
Author's Response: I'll fix that as quick as I can. Truly appreciate the review and all the other ones.
Date: December 26 2012 2:26 PM Title: Sophie and Family
I have high hopes for this story. It seems to be exactly what I like ! So please keep writing this
Author's Response: Sorry I'm a busy person so updates will probably come rarely. Try my best 2nd chapter is almost done.
[Report This]Date: December 25 2012 7:15 PM Title: Sophie and Family
Haha you like what I like. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response: I can't wait to put it on paper(figuritively speaking of course). I don't know if it will be erotic for a while because a crucial part is coming up.
Date: December 25 2012 10:37 AM Title: Sophie and Family
fair start
Date: December 25 2012 1:11 AM Title: Sophie and Family
I enjoyed the short read. I hope you continue with it and I'll look forward to it! Also, I liked the foot fetish joke at the beginning but I laughed even if it wasn't intentional. (Feetish)
Author's Response: Did not realize until you pointed it out. Made me chuckle!
Date: December 24 2012 3:16 PM Title: Sophie and Family
It's a good start. Not really much else to say, other than a bit more description would be nice because the chapter was so short.
Author's Response: I'll work on that thanks though.
Date: December 24 2012 2:34 PM Title: Sophie and Family
Hmm, I like it, but I don't think i'm going to rate right now. It's nice, but I found some spelling errors. You might want to go back and read over it. That's sometimes the best thing to do. A spellcheck might do some good but your own eyes are even better.
But I do like it. I would like to see where you go.
Author's Response: Yeah thanks man I was writing it on my iPod though so I probably have some bad slips thanks for the comment though.