Reviews For The Dare
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Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness! I haden't seen this one before for some odd reason. :)
A nice little surprise for me I must say. :)

Reviewer: TinyGirlsRule Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

haha I'm sure they would have been tasty, we boys tend to be delicious don't we? haha



Author's Response:

MM i bet you are i am salivating at the thought of having one in my mouth oooh sexy thoughts .....

 

Amanda xxx

Reviewer: TinyGirlsRule Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice and original, actually all your stories are pretty awesome. I can really picture what's going on in my mind and that's what makes a great story. It was pretty hot. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you i only write a story when the passion i feel inside builds and i am unable to control the urges,its a horrible feeling wanting something soo badly that it takes over your life.I have felt like this since i was around six,always had fantasies about eating the boys in my class lol.I am sure if i was able to i would have gobbled them all up by half term...

My stories are what i myself wish for i get mm lets just say i have a lot of fun writing them and leave it at that i'm sure you know exacty what is going through my mind right about now..

 

fancy coming to tea it won't hurt i promise i shant feel a thing hehe..

 

Amanda xxxxxx

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Terrible grammar and poor spelling.

But I liked the story, and I love this theme (dirty panties, toilet sex, shrinking, and vore).

With improved writing, more details, and a longer story, your works could be great.



Author's Response:

LOL XXXX

 

Reviewer: Plasmids22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story! This story included the sex and Vore all in one package. I love how she started to control him later on in the story, and use his desires to make him a slave to her beauty and body. The Vore was a nice touch as well, a nice little snack to satisfy her hunger. I'd love to satisfy your hunger as well Amanda. I'd love for to shrink me down and swallow me whole as little snack for you hungry stomach! Excellent story keep it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for you review always nice to read something positive, makes sharing my desires with you more plesurable it is a very short tale but then some  stories can get monotonous and drawn out,better to write down my feelings when they are strongest.It allows a small part of me to ecape this world of realities besides i like the thought of you playing around with your self hehe very sexy ......

 

Amanda xxxx   

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