Date: August 28 2015 9:51 PM Title: Lollipop
Great story! Love the sense of ownership. You should write more :)
Date: August 03 2015 1:37 PM Title: Lollipop
This is a very well written story! And I love butt play!!
Date: June 10 2015 6:00 PM Title: Lollipop
Short and sweet with excellent diction. Solid job, hope to see more like it.
Date: November 05 2014 4:13 PM Title: Lollipop
muito bom !!!
continuar ...
Date: September 21 2014 5:20 AM Title: Lollipop
This is one of the best short stories __ever__!
Not the absolute best first story because I didn't check them all before writing this comment, but it's probably close :)
Date: September 21 2014 1:07 AM Title: Lollipop
That was just brilliant! :-). O how i wish, she would do that to me. loved that story!
Date: September 20 2014 8:10 PM Title: Lollipop
Fantastic! I hope you write more.
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to :)
Date: September 20 2014 12:51 PM Title: Lollipop
Very nice. I felt like I was editing one of my own chapters,... Ha! ;`)
...only, your's is formatted much better. I too, enjoy this type of tale. The readers imagination, can form their own image of the perticular character/ s' , and we could never do that to the full extent for everyone who reads it,...?
Leaving certain discriptions 'open', and allowing the reader to 'picture' themselves, as the protaginist; creating the set up, and drawing up the scene, performing...
Great job!
P.S. I think you might want to change the rating to at least an 'R' rating, might be a good idea.
Author's Response: Changed the rating, thanks for the heads up. And cheers for the review, so glad you liked it :)
Date: September 20 2014 12:31 PM Title: Lollipop
muito bom !!!
continuar ...
Author's Response: Obrigado!