[Report This]Date: April 05 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter X-33: Down time Part 2.
Seems like Mark's life is basically over.
I'm really rooting for Mark to survive, but if I see how he's being treated, I'm not so sure. I'm looking forward to what will happen.
I must say I really do like your writing and thank you for keeping this story updated.
And as for a chapter with one of the "party" girls?
I would say one with either Crystal, Linh or Amoe would be good in my opinion. They seem to be the most into Mark by far. Maybe they will have some competition over him? IDK?
Author's Response:
Hey!
Glad you are enjoying it.
THanks for letting me know - those girls will definitely be considered!
[Report This]Date: March 21 2020 5:25 PM Title: Chapter X-32: Frape Part 2
Can’t wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great work:)
Author's Response:
THanks! sorry for the delay!
Date: March 20 2020 1:37 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
wow Frape 2 is just amazing, i love how you make us feel the helplessness.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yea i really enjoyed writing the frape chapters!
Date: March 09 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter X-31: Down time
if you want,the seperate stories you can continue the story of Sarah and her mother,yes mother daughter bonding is wonderful,I'd like to know whathappened to that poor guy's family.oh to be honest I miss mother's uggs:)
Author's Response:
Hey wwsl.
Yea i'm thinking perhaps doing sepereate stores but that all follow the story line of Mark, similar to this one, we'll be later in the story but probably jumping about the timeline from before and after the flight.
Whether or not we'll see Sarah's mother again is not certain, but it probably won't happen again soon. Hopefully you'll enjoy some of Mark's and the other tinies trials though
Date: March 08 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter X-31: Down time
Hey man I’ve been reading your story I literally made this account to say I love it please keep writing it!!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're liking it, and thanks!
Date: March 03 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter X-27: Daydreaming
god,the depiction of your cruel mother is so sexy
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Date: March 02 2020 9:13 AM Title: Chapter X-16: The Meeting-The Party 2: Linh's Game
This is already great a292;I like the change from gentle to cruel , especially asian girlXD
Date: March 01 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
“ Ani could only see Mark by looking just below Ani's foot, most of hist tiny body visible between the ball print of her shoe and the bottom of Ani's foot.”
I think you made a mistake in this sentence? From the later sentences it seemed to be “Crystal could only see mark”
Author's Response:
Yes thank you my mistake! Appreciate the note!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2020 2:25 PM Title: Chapter X-29: Daydreaming Part 2
Only a sick, deranged, and depraved subhuman monster could write something as repugnant as this. Seek help, Ken - and when you finally find a psychologist willing to treat you, let me know, because I'm sure there's something wrong with me for loving this so much. What's wrong with me?
Congratulations, you've made me hate myself. Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response:
Ha!
Why the animal in us acts the way it does isn't something I think anyone can deal with but ourselves, unfortunately.
... but glad to hear you're enjoying it! :p
Date: February 23 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Hey mate. Since you asked for votes for a future character appearance i am suggesting Amoe. I love the idea of a well-meaning but possibly clumsy/ near-sighted giantess with vision problems and a forgetful nature. A reunion with Amoe might not be the light at the end of the tunnel for poor Mark.
Keep up the great work =)
Author's Response:
Noted!
And thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 9:02 PM Title: Chapter X-28: The goddess awakens
Another great chapter. It was good that this one was a lot more dialogue/story heavy, since the last college chapter was extra long. It's a nice break.
But I've been looking forward to a chapter focusing on Ani since she was first introduced. So I'll be looking forward to the next college days chapter. And I'd definitely appreciate seeing more of her overall.
Also, congrats on getting your original account back!
Author's Response:
Yea, Ani is going to be a main character over the next two college chapters, which, to be honest, are some of the most, eh, exciting stuff i've written IMO. Hopefully you like it. At the latest one will be posted next week.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 9:00 PM Title: Chapter X-26: Amoequake
You did an awesome job with this chapter, though each of the college days chapters have been amazing.
It was especially interesting to see the contrast with how Amoe wanted to treat Mark to how she was actually treating Mark without noticing him.
This is all part of the same night, correct? It was just that certain characters left by this point? I was just a bit confused on that point.
Author's Response:
Yea, it's all the same night, a meeting that's become a bit of a late night party. Some characters have left already, others are napping.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 2:08 PM Title: Chapter X-28: The goddess awakens
You just keep posting very good chapters. I haven't said something in a while, so I thought I should say something like keep it up!
Seems these huge girls are really getting everything they can from tiny mark. This night seems to last forever.
Thank your for writing!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: February 19 2020 6:54 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Reposting this here since the other one is now deprecated:
I'd like more of Linh, I like the idea of a tiny vietnamese girl having an American way smaller than her to torment, also the fact that she is actually a good person but being tempted by her sadistic desires.
Author's Response:
Noted!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Great stuff all of this, the tension draw up from the previous flashback was intense.
It's like you know something was in there, but yet when it happens you couldn't believe it and the fear was palpable.
Still love Sarah.
Glad you got the account back, will be in touch again.
Author's Response:
Love to hate or hate to love?
[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period
It is a pity that Mark cannot talk to Sarah. I think he would be able to change Sarah's thoughts a bit, she seems a bit insane when it comes to tiny men. There really should be a courthouse where people like Mark can make their case against people like Sarah. I think that would really help. Yes. Sarah seems like the caring kind of person.
Thank you for writing. It's a good story and every chapter is good and keeps me on edge for what will happen next.
Hopefully unitl next time!
Date: January 25 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period
Keen to see the present timeline storyline continue as soon as possible! Lots of great buildup and suspense for the end of the flight and a new phase of marks life. I really enjoyed sarah thinking of ideas to turn mark into the perfect insole as well as dianne's cluelessness about mark's entrapment. It's interesting to see Diannes perspective change but maybe it should never 100% convert like some other characters have?
Hopefully she continues to misread the situation and believes she is helping mark on his way to freedom by having him stuffed inside her thick hiking sock rather than Sarah's.
In terms of requests for the college characters perhaps Amoe could continue using her phone with Mark by dropping him on the sleeping body of Kelly and taking photos? Could be a chance to try new Tags like nose,ears,mouth. She could also do her own photoshoot with him, posing like he is a morsel of food.
Author's Response:
Hey daftpunk,
I'm also enjoying writing about the Dianne/Sarah dynamic. Hopefully i keep their characters intersting and believable, so i'm glad you are enjoying it.
In terms of the college stuff, there will be a few more chapters that i already have planned in terms of this meeting/party, and Amoe will be heavily featured along with a few other characters.
What i'm thinking of is a standalone event with one of these 7 girls, outside from the party/meeting we are still reading about. Again, no rush, feel free to let me know in another review.
In terms of your suggestion with Amoe - i already have an idea similar to that *possibly* in the works. I can't guarantee anything, as i kind of let these develop naturally, but we are thinking on a similar wavelength.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2020 2:10 PM Title: Chapter X-24: Crystal's Lesson
Very well written chapter. I really liked it, Crystal really seems like she is a natural at being a godess. I really like how you make Mark feel really small and the girls really big. All the tremors are there. Every movement is significant.
And for the last part, I would say I would really like Mark ending up at either Crystal's or Linh's place because of the scenario's you wrote with them. But on the other hand, I think you can write a good scenario with any of these girls. Maybe the tallest girl has her turn this time?
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forwared to the next time.
Author's Response:
Hey meereten
thanks for the compliments. I'm trying my best to depict the characters perspective in a way that feels believable, so the feedback is welcome, and i'm happy you like it.
I appreciate the words, but I want to focus on one character, and bring out their qualities. So crystal and linh are now in the running!
Date: January 20 2020 11:59 AM Title: Chapter X-24: Crystal's Lesson
Another awesome chapter! Well written and completely puts me into Marks view with your detailed descriptions. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Now as for what character, I personally would like to see more of Stephanie (of the people in the room) or Naru (of all the college characters).
Again, nice chapter! Really a fun read!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Also, thanks for the suggestions. They are now in the running!
Date: January 15 2020 10:35 AM Title: Chapter X-23: Sarah's first time
Aww, I was hoping she would play the generous goddess for a while, to see when she would change her mind - too bad it was cut short.
Other than that, awesome work as usual.
I also believe you're the first author I see who gets a commission starting from his 1st story - congratulations!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
Sarah's had to start somewhere!