[Report This]Date: February 02 2020 4:20 AM Title: Prison Break
The main reason why I liked Ms. Crowell was her dominance toward the student with 5 marks early in the story. (That was Adam, right?)
I always liked the hot naughty teacher toying with the male student so when she punished him, I was amazed. So I’m glad she is making the return.
While I prefer Ms. Crowell to punish her students, I am curious to see what she would do with Michael. Also, will every woman use just their ass in this story, or will some get horny and put someone in their pussy too? Just curious.
Looks like Monday is going to be a fun day. I wonder what Ms. Crowell has in store next.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm definitely going to do a stint of several chapters involving Ms. Crowell so stay tuned for that. And my plan at the start of this was to have the story be almost entirely ass focused, but I don't have a problem adding other content in there. I'll keep your requests in mind, but it may be a while until I get to that point in the story. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!
Date: January 31 2020 10:07 PM Title: Prison Break
Wait till Monday!!! What a tease.
It would be nice if Ms. Crowell picks up where Camilla and Kerri both began with their placement of Mr. Laning. It would be funny if Mr. Laning was stuffed deep between Ms. Crowell's asscheeks only to find Adam languishing there.
My apologies for being a grammar nazi {so to speak} but in school my teachers were very strict on the proper use of grammar and they picked out every slight misuse of the English language. I guess it has stuck with me. I'm sorry for being so needlessly nitpicky.
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm afraid I only post on weekdays as my weekends get pretty busy. And don't worry about the grammar thing, if there are specific errors I'll go back and fix them. But simply saying "lots of mistakes" doesnt point me in the right direction and unfortunately won't lead to them getting fixed. Either way I have thick skin and I'm not the sort to take criticism personally so no worries.
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: January 31 2020 12:17 PM Title: Third Party Encounter
Kerri is back, Yippy! I like how she made Mr. Lanning agree it would be ok if she farts on him. Nice touch.
Camilla might think Mr. Lanning finally escaped, in which case Kerri could keep Mr. Lanning. She may want to keep in mind what Camilla could do to her if she finds out she has Mr. Lanning. Quite the situation.
Your story is terrific, and your writting style very enjoyable. That said, one can tell from having read your previous chapters that you rushed this one. Quite a few grammatical errors {really no biggie, and does not detract from story flow} and you called Kerri Camilla {"'Oh yea, I'll try not to do that haha'. Camilla giggles at the thought of gasing her tiny teacher."}
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. And like I said, dont be afraid to point out mistakes like swapped names, etc. However I went back through and the grammar seems appropriate to me. If you see something specific, let me know.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 4:37 AM Title: Third Party Encounter
Well, this is unexpected. A new giantess who seems very similar to Camilla. What I wonder is how different is Kerri from Camilla? They are both lovely girls from his class and they both want to keep him in their ass. I hope there is something new because otherwise Kerri so far seems like another Camilla.
As for predictions, I think Kerri will just fart on Michael constantly and then Kerri tells Camilla what happened and then they both mess with him.
If Kerri were to escape, it would be interesting to see him return to Ms Crowell, but I doubt that would happen. Glad you mentioned the hot female teacher though. It’s making me excite again.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Can't believe how excited people are for Ms.Crowell... def gonna have to get her back into the mix soon. Thanks for the continued support!!!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 9:37 PM Title: Insurance Policy
This is a good chapter. Camilla making sure her kidnapping is successful and now she has blackmail in case he escapes.
I love how seductive she is and the threats to put him in naughty places.
However, I’m still anxious for the return of Ms Crowell and her student with 5 X’s. I would love to see what she has in store for her troublesome student.
I like the consistent uploads and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We'll see about Ms. Crowell in the future. She'll definitely be present but I havent fully landed one way or the other on her demenaor towards her students. Stick around and find out!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 8:13 PM Title: Insurance Policy
Another great addition! I was hoping we would get more time of him taped to the back of her thong. I wonder what she has planned for the weekend. Gassy food? Dancing?
Author's Response:
Ooh dancing? That's a great idea! What young lady doesn't love a night out at the club? And tinies make for perfect accessories :) Don't you worry, there will be thongs and gas a plenty as the story goes on. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 2:35 PM Title: Out of the frying pan...
Michael isn't the sharpest tool in the shed it seems. He could have known this weekend wouldn't be pleasant for him. And I don't even disagree with him, this weekend is getting dirtier by the chapter.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
No, no... thank you for reading! And don't be too hard on Michael, its hard for a man of his age to turn a blind eye to smoneone as young and beautiful as Camilla. He is flawed, but maybe through dedication to his goddess, he can repent :)
Date: January 28 2020 7:10 PM Title: Rule Breaker
Hopefully it's back upon/within Camilla's asshole for Micheal. Now that she knows Mr. Lanning can survive extreme conditions for a period of time, she could easily prolong his suffering inside her ass.
The idea from a previous chapter of Michael spending the entire night between Camilla's buttcheeks could now become a reality. She hasn't showered from the gym yet, now would be a terrific time to subugate Mr. Lanning to a night time of Camilla's sweaty butt crack.
You wrote in your chapter end notes that you already wrote the next chapters; could it be that Mr. Lanning gives serious consideration to abandoning his current life and family for a lifetime devoted to the euphoria of Camilla's foul asshole?
Author's Response:
Oh Michael's got a whole lot of assholes left to deal with throughout the weekend, dont you worry about that. Thanks for the steady reviews, it's very much appreciated!
Date: January 28 2020 5:05 PM Title: Hiding the Body
As much as I like the ass torture Camilla inflicts upon her shrunken toys, her casual swallowing of Mr. Lanning is just as good.
Now that Camilla has swallowed Mr. Lanning, it would be great if he starts to move around and Camilla realizes that she just swallowed a person who is still alive. If so, will she puke him up/out? Or will Camilla decide she likes the idea of Mr. Lanning digesting inside of her?
Perhaps, as a side effect of being shrunk yet still otherwise a full sized adult, Mr. Lanning will survive his passage through Camilla's bowels.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2020 4:21 AM Title: Hiding the Body
Oh god, I do hope this isn't the end for him. Maybe he'll get a second wind and she'll feel him struggle then vomit him up? If it is, man powerfully written. Either way, well done!
Author's Response: Don’t you worry about Michael, he certainly resilient for a tiny little insect. Stay tuned to see how he makes out! Thanks for reading!
Date: January 25 2020 12:23 PM Title: Confirmed Killer
Some extremely nice ass action. Especially like his head up her asshole and hoping Camilla would fart so he could breath. Also like how doing a deep squat and farting opened up her asshole for his head to get pulled inside.
If Michael is in fact dead, perhaps Camilla could wash him off then swallow him, just to have the pleasure of turning him into her pooh and sometime later pooping him out. Perhaps after holding him in for a day or two so while at school Camilla could walk around knowing where he is {a piece of her shit inside her "killer ass"} while everybody else is wondering where their missing teacher is at.
As to your last chapter and the gym, it would be interesting if next time she goes there the guy who was watching her fart hits on Camilla. BINGO! Next butt toy!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Giantess booty action is the best! Although it seems like she may have judged too quickly, you hit the nail on the head with her preferred evidence disposal method. Glad you’re enjoying it so far! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2020 9:22 PM Title: Rule Breaker
Uh oh....camille murdered Michael...on accident...but she still did it....I do hope she feels extremely guilty about this,and she dosent get away with it.
It be very intresting how the guilt will eat away at her. Hopefully she gets busted and major punishment is given.
Good stuff man keep it up!
Author's Response: It seems stories of Michael’s death may have been... exaggerated :) But it seems that Camilla is more concerned with getting caught than she is with Michael’s “death.” Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for daily uploads!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2020 11:08 PM Title: Playing By the Rules
Great story. Looking foward to the next chapters. The messier, the better.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, there will be no shortage of disgusting torture as the story goes on. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: January 23 2020 7:47 PM Title: Playing By the Rules
One can only hope that for what ever reason, Michael comes to the decision that it's probably best if he does infact stick his head up Camilla's asshole to plug up her wet farts.
As odd as it may be in contrast to his protests thus far, maybe Michael will realize his place as being his body crammed between Camilla's butt cheeks with his head plugging up her vey tight asshole. Who knows, perhaps after some serious thought Michael will recognize he actually likes having his head stuck and squashed in Camilla's rectum, and actually getting euphoric from the stench of her farts.
Can Michael come to the realization that Camilla's ass torture is actually what he desires most of life?
Author's Response: There may be some character that grows to love Camilla’s torture, but it likely won’t be Michael. He’s far to rooted in his ways to be comfortable being subservient to a teenager.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2020 2:46 AM Title: The Challenge
I just read all 7 chapters and I love the balance of story and sexual content.
I also like how you involve multiple body parts to torment the guys. The chapters with Adam are amazing, especially with their butts.
For some reason, I like Ms Crowell more than Camilla. She has this authority over Adam that Camilla doesn’t seem to have. I can easily see Adam feeling helpless when Ms. Crowell dishes out her punishments.
My favorite chapter is still the first one with Ms. Crowell dominating Adam in the beginning. It was such a great opener that it convinced me to read the rest of this story.
Speaking of your story, I love how often you upload chapters to this story. Even with the shorter chapters, it’s good to get consistency knowing that a new chapter is on its way
Anyway, you did mention suggestions and I think others have mentioned this as well, but I also would love to see Ms. Crowell have her own personal toy. I bet you never expected her to be so popular, but I just simply find her more sexy than Camilla.
You mentioned in a response to a review that Ms. Crowell could only shrink a person during school hours, but what if she broke that rule, or perhaps made an exception. Maybe Adam gets a 6th X in her notebook and he is forced to spend the night with her or something. Maybe it’s not even Adam. Ms. Crowell taking some random guy home as her toy would also very erotic.
On a side note, I love the dialogue in this story. Camilla’s words that she uses on Adam and Michael are amazing. When she guided Michael’s hands to her pussy and told him that she can hide him in her panties, I got a little excited. The way she said that was hot, especially as she forced his hand down there.
I like Camilla’s naughtiness and Ms. Crowell’s dominance. If Ms. Crowell can get that same naughty mentality, she might be one of my favorite giantesses of all time. I could list numerous suggestions since giantess teachers are one of my favorite fantasies. However, I think it would be unfair if you don’t plan on using Ms. Crowell that much.
However, if you do plan on using such a promising character, then I would love to see Ms. Crowell shrink a student to keep as her own pussy slave and hide him inside her own panties. She could even hide him during the class if she wanted to. She could tie him up to prevent him from even thinking of escaping and she could even keep him snug up against her pussy held by her right panties trapping him inside. Even sexy teachers need some sexual tension to be released. This could be a new form of detention.
Well, I’m glad I stumbled upon this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hmmm, you’ve certainly given me something to think about. I really hadn’t intended Ms.Crowell to be the kind of giantess who would shrink someone for something outside of school based punishment. That being said, I also wasn’t expecting people to enjoy her so much since she had played such a small part thus far. I’ll tell you what, I certainly won’t rule it out if it turns out that people continue to request it.
I’m so glad you’ve enjoyed the story thus far, and this is exactly why I request people to leave reviews and make suggestions. If it’s clear that the readers all want something specific, I’m happy to do my best to make it happen.
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: January 21 2020 8:58 PM Title: Weekend with Camilla
You've been aluding to it, just have Camila finally shove Mr. Lanning deep up inside her asshole and be done with him. If you do, please relate it to all us POV readers who wish it were us being stuffed up Camilla's ass.
Author's Response: Patience is a virtue... and it’s going to be a nice and long story
Date: January 20 2020 8:33 PM Title: A Bad Decision
FINALLY! he he he
I am hopeful that Camilla is not only interested in a tiny guy squirming about within her panty; but also into a human as her dedicated butt plug.
I do have to disagree with the title to this chapter, "A Bad Decision", as teacher Mr. Lanning seems to have made "The Right Decision" no matter what Camilla does with him or where she puts him.
Having Mr. Lanning for at least three days, in anyway Camillia so chooses, was a nice touch to your story.
A suggestion, while Camillia is having her fun over the weekend, perhaps Miss Crowell can be having some fun too, maybe with a boy that truly did recieve five marks.
I love the psychological aspect of this story. Truly intriguing and addictive.
Author's Response:
This is going to be a very heavily ass focused story and Camilla is the sort of giantess who grows bolder with eavery tiny person she comes into contact with, so a human butt plug is certainly in the wheelhouse. And I'm glad you think Michael made the right choice :)
As far as Ms. Crowell goes, her use of the shrinking technology is restricted to use during school hours, so we won't see her interacting with tinies in the same way that Camilla does. At least not with the same intent.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 19 2020 12:02 AM Title: Lucky Break
Seems you are the one playing with your readers minds by keeping us in suspence. HA HA HA
Can't wait to read about Camilla's "someone else to focus on", especially on a Friday with a long weekend of no school coming up.
Hmmm, just what size will Adam be while giving Kerri her foot rub.
Speaking of Kerri, that slight movement Adam saw in the back of her jeans, still wondering if that was from her fart or is she keeping someone a secret hidden away???
Author's Response: I’m glad you’re looking forward to it, because I think the Camilla/Lanning arc is going to be a long one. We’ll get back to Adam’s time in the club, but Mr. Lanning will face karmic retribution for Adam’s future suffering. As far as the movement in Kerri’s butt, I was simply referring to her pushing her ass out before farting on Adam. She doesn’t have a tiny of her own.... yet. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 18 2020 9:04 AM Title: Conditioning
Daily updates? You may be onto something there... ;)
Anyway I guess I'm super biased here because I love stories with total mental domination, and tormenting him while also acting like her gf is exactly that... but anyway this is coming up really nice!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. I tend to mainly write stories where the giantess is cruel and the protagonist suffers. I know some people prefer a gentle giantess but there’s just something so appealing about a big bad goddess. Thanks for the support!
Date: January 18 2020 9:01 AM Title: Welcome to Science Club
No idea when or where you want it to end? Taking suggestions? Bad idea, you'll either drown in suggestions or get complaints that you're not writing commissions for free :D
Anyway, since you asked... I have some very unfinished plots for customs that I'm slowly (think of a sloth...) finishing and may or may not turn into custom videos before the 22nd century comes; one of them involves a student framing another student, who is shrunk, but then she is caught and gets away with it by saying she did it because she wants to become a teacher eventually.
Not that you should structure your story like that but... YAFIYGI :)
Author's Response: Haha I’m not too worried about complaints. If I see something that I think would work well, I’ll write it in. If someone gets mad because I don’t write something they want to see... them I’d just recommend they write their own story. I’m just happy to interact with the people who take the time to read what I write. That being said I think our stories are already a bit similar. Camilla is a star student who manages to frame an unfortunate boy and entwine him with a future of feminine torture. I’m glad you’re enjoying it this far!