A long time lurker of simple tastes, love vore, crush, boobs, micro, but mostly a good story. I love writing and helping growing writers, I'll read just about any story, giantess content or no if it has a good hook.
Really love sci fi and fantasy and diverse and ethnic giantesses in my stories. Also a big fan of philosophical discussions of giantess themes. I'm also a writer of color, Black to be exact :P
I'm very long winded about things I care extensively about and if I have a lot to say, expect my reviews to be very lengthy.
Start of 2022 Edit: Yeah, I know. I don't have to add that. It's my bio after all but still. I wish to keep a record of how my tastes have changed in as much a fashion as I can. I am Zaximus Prime, First of My Line. I am a purveyor of all fantasy giantess writing (self proclaimed). I love worldbuilding and characterization especially. My general tastes have not changed much, still love me some good vore, barefoot crush, boobs and the like, but I have noticed I prefer giantess more to shrink. (Yes, there is a difference) Be that as it may, well written size content in all aspects is something I am passionate about and likely to keep an eye out for. So, please, SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT!
Erin never liked LeShae. But are the feelings mutual?
Wow, wow, wow. Won't lie, thought this story was dead. It was to my eternal shock, surprise, but mostly joy and delight to see a new entry entered into this series. As much as I love your renders (which are really good) I equally love your stories and hope to see at least a few brought back from the brink.
I've very much been enjoying the foot content and some of the more unconventional unaware content from the early part of the story but the switch to vore has been interesting for sure. It's going to be intriguing to see how (or even if) Erin gets out of this one! Can't wait! :D
Teagan is a young woman exploring a world no longer owned by humans. Indeed, her nation, as with every other, has been overrun by a horde of small but incredibly numerous people known as tomkins. Legend exists of a safe haven for humanity, undiscovered by the tomkins, a walled citadel known as Whitebreeze Keep populated by the last vestiges of humanity. Teagan sets her sights on finding this beacon of hope, but must transverse a dangerous continent filled with tomkins.
Oh, right, one more thing: Teagan finds few greater joys in life than the slaughter of tomkins by whatever means available.
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My sincerest apologies. I binged this story almost a year ago now and I am just now getting to reviewing it. I gotta get better at this. You don’t keep the same ideas when so much time has passed by. That being said, I shall reread every chapter of this story to review it the way it deserves to be reviewed.
First things first I have to get something off my chest that has bothered me since the first time I read this. I don’t know why, I think it’s because of the word “tomkin” the way it looks and sounds but every single time I think of a tomkin the mental image of a Tontatta from One Piece comes to mind. I don’t know why. It’s been that way since I started reading this. In fact despite no references to tails or otherwise and in more recent chapters they calling each other, humans implying there is no physical difference between them and humans it is still the first image that comes to mind. In my mind Sihil looks like Princess Mansherry despite being pretty much the complete opposite of her in appearance. I know Sihil doesn’t appear until chapter 2 but this has always been a thing with me and I just have to voice it now before I get started.
My mental image of tomkins aside, let’s get down to business; the beginning of a truly amazing story. I love this story will all my being. This is one of my favorite ongoing stories and one of my favorite stories, in general, within this community. Anytime I get a chance to bring this up, I will. This story is great.
Starting with the authors note, thank you! I think that’s one of the reasons I gel with this story so much. I absolutely love it when the victims in gts stories are more than faceless playthings, in fact reading some stories where they are just “the faceless masses” actually kind of bores me. Seeing events play out from their views, seeing the threats the way they see them, that’s what I want to see and one of the things this story does so well! Second, the character work is pretty phenomenal but the worldbuilding? Oh boy are you being mighty generous with “degree of worldbuilding”. There are subtle references throughout this story hinting at things, places, character, events that we don’t see that make this world seem so much bigger and lived in, I don’t know how to fully quantify it. I kid you not, you punch out some of the pros with the way you can just sprinkle in a line here or there that just sells your world all the more. Worldbuilding is a constant with this story and something I return for as much as the giantess interaction stuff or the character building.
And speaking of characters, man you have some complex ones. I’m getting ahead of myself. I haven’t even got past the author’s note yet. I’m sorry, I really really love this story.
Another peculiar thing about me reading this. For whatever reason I had always read her name pronounced ‘Tee-gan’. It was only recently that I realized it’s just like Reagan but with a T. Correct me if I’m wrong but her name is pronounced ‘Tay-gan’ right? It’s been an ongoing debate with me for some time now.
So now we’ve met our longform protagonist, gotten a bit of insight into her and her habits. We have also come to a persistent constructive criticism of mine. At times the story moves too fast. Granted this chapter may not reflect the writing now as it is the first of like 27 and growth from then is most certainly assured but something I notice a lot of how fast paced things can be, like this scene. Teagan patches herself up, eats dusky hair, sleeps through the night where we hear of trackers chasing her and then is awake in the morning already on the move in like less than two paragraphs. Like I said this is more to the early chapters but I’ve noticed it in some of the recent chapters as well. Hence some constructive feedback I would offer is to slow down a bit, smell the flowers. I want to experience these events, not just hear about them.
And then we’re done. The first chapter was a lot shorter than I remember. It doesn’t necessarily invoke the feelings of everything the story will become but it does enough to establish the main character, a few things about her (she hates tomkins) and her goal. All in all a modest beginning to a great story.
God I fucking LOVE this story!!! THAT. ENDING. I just....the pace of the this chapter was quite interesting considering it seemed pretty removed from our normal setting at first glance and of course the subject matter therein but that twist? I didn’t see that coming, holy shit I’m still reeling from it. I think I scared my co-worker when I read it! XD
I will admit to a little confusion. At the end I couldn’t exactly tell if Aelia had actually died as you use the words “might have died” in the last paragraph and I’m not sure if Volkhard was Adelhard (the last part of the name suggests yes) or was merely pretending to be him. Or maybe this was a flashback of his past he was having in the present. Like I said, it wasn’t exactly clear to me specifically but the simple fact that this seemed to be his backstory was enough to send my mind rocketing and I love it!
Also I noticed you said you were looking for ways to make interactions between Teagan and her Tomkin victims refreshing. Might I suggest more descriptions of the events as well as more of their interactions from the Tomkins perspective? Seeing what they see, feeling what they feel as they watch Teagan descend upon them and massacre their people, that could keep it fresh and bring a kind of frightening aspect to it that could help underline the nature of what’s happening. That or also describing the carnage through Teagan’s state of mind. It seems a lot of it is written in 3rd person (at least the last chapter I read, admittedly it’s been some months since I binged this story) but what if you used the time to have Teagan also reflecting on the deeds, what she felt, why she acted in the specific way she did to kill a particular Tomkin, stuff like that. It would help give us a deeper look into her psychology which I believe would be very valuable.
As far as the descriptions some of them seem to run pretty short, like “Teagan popped them in her mouth” and that being it to end that particular groups lives. Let it go on for a bit. Describe it, let us see it! Emphasize what is happening and why it’s important we should care!
You’ve got an amazing story here that I love to read and can’t wait to see progress! Excellent work!
PS: I got home and saw there was another chapter. ARE YOU SERIOUS!? 3 New Chapters in almost a single week!?! SQUEAL!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!!
Please keep writing this! At this point, if you write it, I'll read it!
Ok, so, first of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH for the tips. I will absolutely try to use them to my fullest extent, since while I think I'm an adequate writer overall, god, its just so hard for me to get the fetish scenes down right, since I've sadly never got to learn the intricacies of writing vore in my creative writing class
And yeah, Aelia definitely died. Volkhard is just in complete denial of the fact, and thought it was her talking to him while he killed Adelaide. Originally I wasn't going to include a name change from Adelhard to Volkhard, but I figured it would fit well here: Volkhard means "strength of the people", and is a part of the mantle he took unto himself after he joined tomkin society. He also, of course, abandoned Adelhard due to the similarity it had to his sister's name. The name change was a figurative act of sorts signalling his change from human to tomkin.
I guess I have to keep writing chapters anyhow, since if I stop writing, how will I continue having the absolute definite undisputably best end notes on this website?
God YES!!! I can’t tell you how happy I am to see this story continued! My heart literally stopped when I saw the words that meant we had a new entry! I’m very sorry I haven’t reviewed this story yet but this is one of my absolute favorite ongoing stories at the moment. I binged the entire thing close to the beginning of quarantine when new chapters were dropping like hotcakes and….wow…..just wow. I’m going to work my way through and try and review every chapter, which admittedly will take a while but is totally worth it. This story is just….please PLEASE don’t let this die! Life without the story of Teagan and Sihil is too bleak to bare. I swear I’ll get to you a more detailed review, just please continue writing it!
I'm right there with Laeron, feeling what he's feeling. There are those moments.
Loved this chapter, absolutely brutal. Volkhard is becoming quite the interesting character. I also love some of the little moments with Teagan, her sparing the kneeling soldier and the mini speech she gives to Laeron after her rampage were particular favorites of mine.
You have been consistently getting me with this Author Notes and Chapter End Notes. Man I really thought there were pumpkins in here. I really wanted that skin. :'(
Nearly six years after a devastating and unprecedented tragedy at the hands of a massive, cannibalistic woman, the world seems to have recovered. But the tremors of the giantess' footsteps are still felt by some. And as these people are pulled together through mysterious circumstances, they find themselves buried deep in a plot with ties to the attack...
Ah, it has been so long since this came out and I'm so late in getting this review out I fear this story to be dead. Nonetheless I would like to give my thoughts.
It has been a while since I read this, (I read it at it's release date) but I remember liking this story immensely. It had the classic giantess rampage aesthetic which I'm been hurting for fiercely.
Secondly the personal reflection narrative device. I love stories set from the perspective of the people experiencing the rampage rather than the giantess themselves. This feels like a post apocalyptic world where giantesses have attacked and now people just have to get by. I love the support group feeling of the first chapter and the essay of the second delving into the history and implications of what's going on in conjunction with real world events.
Speaking of that, I love the realism with which this story is depicted. The idea that what is populated in giantess fiction is just not accurate, how terrifying something like this would be in the real world? It's just great all around. I very much enjoyed this and hope to see it continued one day. Full marks.
A collection of stories centered around the newest member of AnAlternateUsername's Titaness setting, the Crimson Goddess Kara. The stories within will focus on all manner of rampaging, conquering, and wanton destruction, showing the perspective of the Goddess herself, and the lowly subjects beneath her!
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It's awesome to see the best giga writer return to grace us with another story! XD
Glad to get to read your writing again!
Thank you very much for reading, and the extremely kind words. They're beyond appreciated. Hope to not take too long between more uploads of this and other tales.
In the fantasy world of Pastia. Giants are notorious for their massive size, cruelty and their insatiable cravings for human flesh, giant hunters are a common occurrence. They are often paid generously by villages living in fear of a potential giant attack.
But rumour spreads quickly within closely knitted guilds or orders of hunters and word of a mysterious giant hunter who hunts without charge and without anything in return is the topic of conversation everywhere. This woman is known only by the alias: “Artemis” and everyone to have encountered her agree on only one thing. Artemis is not only a giant hunter.
She is a giantess herself.
Hoo boy! This looks like it’ll be a good one! You’ve already done the first hard part and got my attention. I’m loving this premise so far. It reminds me of some of my favorite giantess stories coming out right now.
For a first attempt this is pretty good, you’ve kept my attention longer than most first time writers, now let’s talk writing and places you could improve. As I said, your concept is solid, it’s different enough and yet fantastical to inspire the imagination. There are a few key points I noticed through reading both chapters I wanted to address.
First, pacing. Slow down. You seem to be zipping through this pretty fast. Pacing can make or break even the best stories. Slow down and give the reader time to digest what they’re reading. Describe the settings, the scenery, the people, take some time to revel in where you are and what's going on around your characters. Give them memorable introductions. Artemis has a pretty alright one in the first chapter though it didn’t seem to give her much of a presence. The deuteragonist, I’mma call him “Little Man” just kind of showed up without any kind of introduction. So my main advice on this point, slow down and use descriptions. Describe what’s happening and what’s going on. Show don’t tell, let the scene be felt.
Second issue I saw arising the most was tense. It’s a small point but it has big ramifications. The tense was all over the place, though I mostly noticed it in chapter 2. This can be fixed with a little bit of proofreading. Decide whether the story is happening, in the past, present or future tense than proof it to make sure all of them line up. Like I said it’s small but it’s sneaky. Even I find myself slipping up with it now and again.
Last point I’ll make for this review here is a little touch and go. Try and find ways to explain your worldbuilding without outright explaining your worldbuilding. What do I mean by this? Instead of telling us how the world is set up, show us the world and let the reader infer the rest. Use dialogue and character interactions to let us know what is going on. So like for example, instead of outright saying Artemis has a coven of sorcerers in her hometown or that giants don’t often use magic, if she tells Little Man her secret next chapter they could have an interaction where he says something like, “Giants don’t use magic.” And she corrects him, and mentions she learned from a coven in her hometown. Stuff like that.
That’s what I have for now. I hope that helps. If you’d like me to go into finer detail or explain some of what I mean more just let me know. I’ll be looking forward to new installments of this story. From chapter 1 to chapter 2 seemed like pretty quick turnaround on chapter releases. Would love to see a regularly updated story with a premise like this coming out.
Wow, I was not expecting this kind of attention so quickly! I'll definitely take these points into consideration.
The rushed pacing mostly had to do with me expecting most readers to skim through until a giantess does something sexy but now that I know someone's invested in the narrative the pacing will be worked on, as well as the exposition. With this in mind and the fact that chapter 2 is relatively short I may or may not go back and add a few more details to make it flow more smoothly.
The window between chapter 2 and 3 will likely be a bit longer given that I'll be taking this advice into account. Thanks for the review!
Yohoho! I have returned! Despite my silence I have been keeping an eye out for new chapters to this story. Apparently a blind eye as you've managed to sneak quite a few chapters past me! I plan to leave a further more in depth review once I am fully caught up but suffice to say, I am still watching this story and still expecting great things. :)
Hannah returns to her home in the Midwest to spend Christmas with her family. To tide herself over until their traditional Christmas Eve dinner, she decides to snack on some cookies and Vortex tinies, unaware that one of the shrunken people is an old friend of hers...
This is an erotic story that is aimed at mature adults with macro- and vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological violence that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Furthermore, this story is entirely fictional and all erotically portrayed characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Hard Vore, Human, Insertion, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Violent, Unaware
Wow. Wow oh wow oh wow. This has got to be my favorite Vortex story to date. This story has everything. Intense characterization, amazingly descriptive vore, sympathetic prey, and a pretty good setup. While I’m more into the more fantastical settings and premises, I’ve been following the Vortexverse for a while now and might I say: girl going home for the holidays and enjoying some human treats is pretty fitting within that theme. More than the others though, this story feels like it has purpose. It feels like it’s going somewhere and it's trying to get to something and I’m all here for it because what it gets to is just amazing!
Hot DAMN that is some great writing
At the risk of actually killing me I’d like to break down my absolute favorite scene in this whole piece, if I may. This single scene stole my breath away and I do mean that literally.
“Oh Arty…” Hannah began.
Pity. Even still, even now she pities him. She pities his fate, she pities him as a person, and she pities knowing him.
“swallowing the build-up of spit in her mouth, panting.”
But she wants it still. She doesn't care. She wants to do it to him.
She heard that her voice was shaking, and felt a single tear running down her left cheek. “I’m sorry.”
The first part of this you can dismiss as her noticing her own reaction from the before line, but it's the immediate text in the same line that paints the context differently.
"A single tear running down her left cheek"
That's what gets me, that line (and another but we won't jump ahead). A single tear runs down her cheek? She actually regrets this. What she's about to do? It's too cruel and even she knows it. Despite the fact that she thought about it, no that she fantasized about it, it's painful, painful to do this to him.
“I'm sorry.”
Now for me, I don’t always like Hannah to be honest, like a love to hate her sort of way. I feel she’s a lot more vicious than even Tanja in certain scenarios. I feel that she says a lot of things she doesn’t mean as a way to cover her own ass. However in this scenario I believe she's telling the truth.
Those two words? Those solidify her statement. She does mean this. She is sorry.
‘The tiny in her palm was quiet for a few more moments, noticing that the giant hand holding him was trembling. “I-It’s okay, Hannah. You recognised me, right? I’ll survive.”’
Dammit Arthur! You're too good a person for your world! He knows, instinctively but he doesn't believe it. He's not just trying to convince Hannah, if he's trying to convince her at all. He's trying to convince himself. This is salvation. This is how he's saved. It can't end for him like this, being eaten by someone he knew, someone he talked with, someone he called friend...someone he loved. Still disbelieving, trying not to believe despite all he's seen. No it can't end, not like this. It'll be fine, after all, the hard part is over. She saw him, she recognized him. He's done. Out of the millions of odds he got put in the right box, bought by the right person and ended up here, just to be saved! He gets to live now, to survive!
“No.” Hannah whispered, gently shaking her head and panting. “You won’t.”
Those. Final. Three. Words.
The nail in his proverbial coffin being Crypto? No. The words that will be written on the little matchbox that carries his bleached little bones after they're carried through her digestive system will be "No. You won't".
Damn. After coming so far, after almost coming so close to winning, you lose all the same.
so much so, she can't lie to you. She can't treat you like you’re stupid. She has to tell you, she needs you to know. You’re not going to survive. This is where your story ends.
For me this truly is the greatest of the Vortexverse stories so far. I love this to death and cannot recommend it enough. Great job! Can’t wait to see what you do next!
Thank you so much for your extensive review and the high praise. It means very much to me and really brightened my day! :D
Hannah is an interesting character to write, and I have ambivalent feelings about her myself. Unlike Tanja, who is an unapologetic sadist, and most of the other preds in this universe, who are indifferent to the tinies' plight, she is a good person gone bad. Someone who used to have high moral principles, but was corrupted by a society that constantly appeals to her dark side, and rewards her for indulging in it. On some level, Hannah continues to struggles with that, and tries to justify her actions to herself. I'm not sure if it's evil or sad, probably both. But it makes her quite dangerous in her own right, since she keeps telling herself that her behaviour is morally "good". Tanja, on the other hand, has more of a "might makes right" approach to what she does. Not that that is much better, mind you!
Anyway, thanks again for leaving such a detailed review. I hope that the next stories will be received equally well.
A girl of above-average height gets a little too rowdy at a party and causes some unwanted damages, much to her, as well as the entire population of a city's, dismay.
Oh...my...GOODNESS!!! YOU'RE BACK!!! I'm so excited!!! I remember loving your stories when they came out! You always had such a particular style of writing, that always kept me wanting more! I was devastated when I went out to read some of your stories from This Job Sucks only to find my favorite ones gone! It fills me with immense joy to see you back and even more so after reading Labba's review to hear that my favorite of the TJS stories is coming back with a retouch! But that's for that, this is a review for Wasted so let me continue on with this one.
I love this story. I loved it when it came out and so scrolling through the Most Recent's it immediately caught my eye that it was back again. I've always had a particular fondness for the Swiftverse with the likes of Brobdingnagians, Liliputians and Gulliverans. It's one of the most consistent size scenarios that really just does justice anytime it shows up. I think you managed to do that very well here.
As I mentioned before, your writing style particularly lends itself to the feeling of wanting more. You write like a tease (and I mean that in only the most sincerely best way) tantalizing your audience with concepts so interesting and intriguing that are just out of reach. For example while there is a small level of worldbuilding it lends itself to so many questions. If Jean is hightailing it from police, what kind of police? Brobby police? Gulliveran police? Jean also carries pepper spray which means that even at her size, a Brobby girl can feel threatened. It's these titillating concepts that are weaved throughout with such subtly that really elevates the setting.
Not going to lie, I have a weakness for barefoot giantess so this story hits a particular chord with me as well. And owing again to your talent to withhold just enough, there is only enough interaction to give the reader a sense of what's going on, yet leave them wanting more. To be honest, I would have liked to see more of her destruction but from the narrative perspective that this is all her point of view I believe this works to amazing effect.
I think it also cannot be understated you are a master of the eye catcher. Your premises always have something, some air of originality or nuance that I feel a lot of stories miss. It helps your writing stick out. So while blackout drunk giantess may not be in its own way a wholly new idea the way you have not just written it but also advertised it makes it feel new. Reading this again, with fresh eyes in a fresh time this hits all the hallmarks for me, of stories in this vein I love.
Again, I feel the greatest weakness of this story its its brevity. Considering this is a reupload I do not take that on you as a writer now. But in some ways though I do believe the brevity does it justice, especially with that ending, that kind of dream but no it was real, kind of twist. I think (a note for past you as it were) strengthening the middle, as she's trying to reckon with the destruction she has caused, and how much she's trying to avoid any more damage would make the ending hit all the harder and more impactful. But those are just my thoughts.
All in all, happy to see you're back and happy to see this story again! I hope to get to see many more promising works from you and look forward to what you'll produce with great interest! XD
An Orc adventurer from a medieval fantasy world steps into a portal to a human outpost, expecting to find a meal, a bath and hopefully a good time.
Instead she finds herself 800ft tall and outside a major military base in our modern world. How's a girl supposed to unwind in a situation like this?
Hmmm....this story intrigues me. I love fantasy giantess stories and a fantasy giantess coming to our world is a pretty great idea. Not to mention a giantess that doesn't conform to the normal picture perfect image most giantess stories have? Good stuff.
You have some really great descriptions in here, a very strong point that will always keep me coming back. Mostly they're gathered around the vore scenes, which I have no problem with, love vore after all.
Not really a fan of stink and fart stuff but that's just me, not a critique on the story itself. Will admit, liked the first chapter more. The second chapter started strong with descriptions but began tapering off near the end and feeling kind of lackluster. Again, not necessarily because of the stink/fart stuff but more just lacking in descriptions which I feel is one of this story's best assets. Either way, would like to see this continued and am ready for whatever Shel pulls out next.
A 20 year old university student travels by a strange chain of events to the planet of Mykonia. Unbeknownst to her she causes unfathomable levels of destruction, until she is made aware of the situation.
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I very much enjoyed this. Unique setting, unique premise with good execution. Could use more descriptions of what she's doing to make the action last longer. Other than that seriously liked the world and setup. My favorite part was getting to see the Mykonians perspective near the end. Barefeet also always a plus. Will be watching for more stories from you.
Thank you for your feedback. It's harder than I thought to come up with varied descriptions without becoming too repetitive. I will keep your advice in mind.
A woman finds herself with no memories in a world where no flames can burn, and uncovers her true nature and what happened to her.
(Setting and characters created alongside Hotherus-the-Blind on DeviantArt!)
This was great. Unconventional for me in that it wasn't a straightforward giantess story. By this I mean it wasn't just sexy destruction for the sake of sexy destruction there was purpose that manifested from the characters. the focus wasn't so much on the mortals and what was being done to them but Crevalle's frame of mind and what drove her to it. This served to make her feel like a character rather than just a giantess destroying things (which I usually don't like getting the perspective from) which in turn made this pretty interesting and satisfying to read.
Always have to give props to personalized mythologies. I love the uses of different goddesses, Metario, Talcalai, Crevalle, Perihili, to serve to flesh out this world and give us an insight into it's goings on. It also gives us a look into the dynamic between these divine forces, like Metario having power over Crevalle or Talcalai not really interfering. On that note, loved that last line. A very powerful note to go out on. All in all, great work, a fun read.
Thank you so much; I’m incredibly glad to hear this is how you feel about the story! This is basically what I always try to go for with my stories—I always enjoy dramatic action and spectacle way more when it has weight to it. So I’m definitely glad to see size folks feeling the same way, and I’m honored to have successfully pulled it off!
A giant woman wakes up at the outskirts of a city. Tiny people are working quickly to strap her down, but she has other ideas. In a fit of rage she breaks loose and causes mayhem in the city. She heads towards a netball court full of people who she wants to get revenge upon, in multiple ways... the humiliation will be theirs this time!
Warning this story contains: 50ft Giantess, Naked giantess, Tiny Women, Tiny men, Vore, POV, giantess entrapment, handheld, city rampage, anal and pussy insertion
Mmmmm.....this is a fascinating one. Ah, the classic giantess rampage in a city...a lost art form these days. Good to see a return to form. Love the beginning with a Gulliver's Travels setup and hints that there was more to this story than we're lead to believe going into it. Thought that was really nice and had me wondering about the conflicts and setting that lead us to the beginning. This only heightened upon finding out she wasn't always like this and had a group targeted for revenge.
I believe there was a line about her hurting herself on a tree? Love that. Great detail you don't see very often. Still flesh and bone after all just at a bigger size. Really pulled me in. While normally I'm not a fan of giantess stories from the giantess perspective there was enough cutaways with accompanying descriptions of what was happening to the people she was terrorizing to offset that. Good stuff. Can't wait for another chapter and to see where this goes.
Thank you Zaximus, I enjoyed reading your feedback and your detailed breakdown and analysis of the story. I'm glad those themes and aspects I added into the story added some layers of interest for you. I expect there will be a second part soon. You can enjoy more work like this on my Patreon, check out my Dawn of the Giantess Book series on there which has both shrunken and giant protagonists.
Thank you for taking the time to respond to my work.
A typical suburban mother named Kristen lives her life as a busy and active woman, caring friend to others, and loving mom, but she also keeps dark secrets away from her young daughter until she grows up, the hidden mysteries locked behind a pair of doors in their picturesque suburbia home.
Behind those doors, Kristen lives her other life as a judicious goddess ruling over millions of tiny micro people who find themselves existing in her household, occupying bustling micro cites and lands, holding the fate and future of the micros within her hands and at the whim of her absolute power.
Disclaimer:
Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences. No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental. This story will not contain incestual or underage sexual content. All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.
The return of Panzer. It's great to see new stories from you. For the most part you're probably the leading writer in the Giga genre right now so every entry you put out is just valuable in itself! :D
I apologize I don't have much to offer in the way of critique but I did want to let you know I'm keeping up with this story when it's updated. I also will say, I've very much been enjoying the POV of the cities under Kristen. The descriptions continue to be great, a nice carry over from Grove View. Please keep up the good work.
Thank you, Zaximus! More city and tiny POVs will come as I bring the story back into where we all left off in chapter 2.
Should have stopped by with the last Interlude/all multi tiny perspective chapter but c'est la vie.
Anyways, wanted to voice that I love these tiny perspective chapters (and tiny perspectives in general) and would love to see more of this in the future. Very much enjoying this and excited every new chapter I see uploaded.
I'll always tell my audience that writing the tiny perspective is always the hardest for me, but I'm going to keep trying my best to write them! Thank you for stopping by!
A group of fairies sneak in to a tavern only to end up trying to save their friend from a drunken adventurer's gut.
A neko, an elf and some pixies go into a bar. Only two come out. Short and sweet. A few errors here and there but ultimately a return to form that's good to see.
Oh my goodness! You're back! I absolutely will review this story properly when I get a chance to read it (probably in just a few days) but I wanted to jump in real quick and say, welcome back! I love your stories and I'm so glad to see you uploading again! I can't wait to read this one! :D
Thanks! I had creative slum for the past two years or so due to some stuff IRL, but I'm hoping to share more soon.
Faelyn, A mage from a faraway kingdom, came to the remote city-state of Idosa to extradite what she perceives as a criminal, but she has a surprise waiting for her.
I'm sorry it's taken me this long to drop you a review but I wanted to let you know someone is reading your work and hoping to see more from you! XD
I love your fantasy stories and will be reviewing this one more extensively when my schedule clears up a bit more.
Thanks, I have more stories in the works and I'm glad you're enjoying them :D
This was a fun little story. It's so good to see more fantasy giantess stories. The opening alone had me interested to see what would go down.
I very much enjoyed the opening setup and characterization of Faelyn. I think the opening and her little moments of racism really spoke to the character we were going to get and I really enjoyed it.
The reveal was pretty well done and the cerulean elf was very unique. We don't get many multicolored giantess these days so seeing a blue skinned elf with a blue lined interior? Definitely my favorite part. X)
All in all an enjoyable return, glad to see you making more stories and hope to see much more in the future!
I'm glad you liked it, there are going to be more stories in the future!
