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Summary:

     Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...

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Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.

I absolutely love reading and responding to your reviews, so please keep them coming. Tell me which parts are your favorites, or something you think can be improved upon. Post feedback (suggestions, criticism, etc.) freely, though please be polite and constructive. Enjoy! I looking forward to hearing from you all!


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150108 Read Count: 252852
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: August 24 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: August 12 2021 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28: A Little Game Of Hide...

Great story. I wonder who will find Nick first.



Author's Response:

Well, wonder no more, because the next chapter is here!

Also, congratulations on being my 100th review!

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23: A Little Aftermath

Good chapter and good writing. I like how we are seeing how Nick is struggling with the relationship between Cassie and Jenny. it would be hard to change how one feels to someone you love for a long time for another person, it will take time. It will be intersting to see how Jenny tries to show Nick that she will love him the way he needs to be loved when small. 

 

for a thought of why he shrinks uncontrollably, He associates women to shrinking. He train himself to shrink so he could fulfill his giant woman fantasy. once he obtained the ability to shrink and use it with his wife, it created a link in his mind to associate women with the need to shrink. Everything was good with his wife for awhile with the erotic shrinking relationship they had while doing it, creating positive reinforcement of the link in his mind to associate women, in certain situation, like lewd or erotic things, to shrink. With such a strong association in his mind about feeling good when small around women, it made it a habit that he shrinks when he sees, dreams, or thinks about women in a sexual way. He can prevent himself from shrinking in those situations if he is preoccupied with something else or emotionally not in the mood but can shrink if caught off guard. That is just my idea of why he can't control his shrinking.



Author's Response:

Yes, Nick certainly had a lot on his plate, and he’s finally coming to terms with how much his shrinking is affecting those around him.

You certainly provide some very good insights on why Nick tends to have his unwanted shrinking spells. When I chose to go this route, I’ve had to do a lot of research to find a commonality that I could use as an explication. I’ll have the results posted in the next chapter.

Thanks for the review and your support!

 

Summary:

Phillip's parents go on vacation leaving him with his younger sister. Her friend comes over with a mysterious board game. Phillip may no longer being in charge.

 

He is losing control as the girls grow into the most beautiful women

 

First story. I appreciate it if you all had any suggestions.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Scat, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123783 Read Count: 408653
[Report This] Published: October 09 2020 Updated: September 23 2022
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Into the thick of the game

Great story. love the adoration that lily is getting from philip and she knows it. She keeps getting bigger and him smaller. I am glad that judith got some action but I want more lily with the big pussy.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I plan for more action with Lily's pussy. 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Take every shot you can to play the game

Great story. The missing text made it hard to follow but now I can.

I like Philip being inside Lily's pussy. Hope to see more of that.



Author's Response:

This is for @SciFiCrazy. I accidently responded out of order. Sorry

Please read your response in his one above yours

Thank you very much glad you are enjoy it.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Every game has winners and losers

Great Chapter. I like that Lily keeps getting bigger and bigger. Does she get even bigger? I am cheering for Lily and Phillip to get together. I am happy that Judith got something out of this round. I hope that Lily will be kind to Phillip.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I am leaving some of the growth and shrinking of the next round in the readers hand so it is up to them. I am seeing that Lily is a little mean, I want her to have something of a dominating personality but also be kind.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: October 19 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: It is dangerous hunting for big game

I like how Lily actual has a heart. If you are taking suggestions for another round of the game. I suggest Judith getting older and taller, Lily getting taller and younger, and Phillip getting smaller and younger.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response. I will try my best to put these in.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Foreign Game

Great story. I like it when more people grow bigger. Does Phillip get smaller at all? Mulan is a great character. I hope that some more stuff happens with her. For another character, I can't give an full opinion yet. if he ends up with Judith, either he gets into the hands of author who visits or Judith meets with other moms and he is in the hands of hot milf situation. if it is Lily, A neighbor finds him, maybe one of the kids, or she meets a new person. 

 

Either way great story keep up the work



Author's Response:

Thank you for your input. you have to wait and see what happens with Phillip. Thank you for your honest opinion about a new character. I listen to input and put it into the story. if it goes in one of those situation I will try to use those characters designs.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Trickery is not a good strategy for the game

Poor Phillip. That was terrible thing for Judith to do. I hope that things either get patched up between the two or he stays with Lily.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the response. it was a terrible thing for Judith to do. You have to wait and see what happens.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: November 12 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Game

Loving the interactions with Phillip and Lily. I hope we get more growth soon. I have to say that the beach sounds like a good idea for Phillip to go to. That is my opinion. Hope to see more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank your for your opinion. They are now at the beach and more growth will be coming soon. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The game you always come back to

His mom used him like a dildo and got pregnant. That is great. will the mom ever figure out that she and her son had sex or that she grew becuase of it? It is funny that Guinevere lost Phillip in her pussy for two months. don't you think she would have known if her lover was missing for two months?

 

Either way great story. Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

The mom will not figure out that Phillip got tiny because of the board game. She will just become tall like all the other women of the world. Guinevere got so busy with taking care of Sarah that so totally forgot about Phillip because he couldn't help at all with Sarah. She had to take care of baby like a single mom.

Summary:

Adam is a loving single father with 3 beautiful daughters: Lucy, Tara and Lily. A strange condition will soon put him in an uncomfortable situation where medical treatments and love for his daughters will help little.


Categories: Lesbians, Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4667 Read Count: 23351
[Report This] Published: October 28 2020 Updated: September 22 2022
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03 2020 Title: Chapter 1: begginig of problems

Good story. I hope you keep it up

Summary:

John has detention at a wizardry school. he is surprised to see that the most beautiful professor as the supervisor. Will he survive her punishment or will she take him over

 

Side story of "Board game not for the family"

 

The story is written from two perspectives. one chapter will be one the students views and thoughts of an event and the next chapter the teacher's views and thoughts over the same event.

 

John's epilogue is out and we have over 10,000 views. Let us make it 20,000

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. This is fanfiction and no money is being made from it

 

This story is inspired by Marushamo's "Secert Play with Friend's Mom" You should check out his work.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Challenges: Nipple Vore
Challenges: Nipple Vore
Challenges: Nipple Vore
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24365 Read Count: 53643
[Report This] Published: October 30 2020 Updated: November 19 2020
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3b: Second Lesson- Artoria's view

Love the story. I like how Artoria keeps teasing John with hope. I hope he gets smaller. I wonder what she will do if he does.

 

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the response.

Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.

The story is complete. We have two endings for those who prefer one over the other.

 

 

This is orginally Sm7in story but I found it on writing.com as an interactive story. I tweaked a route and created a new option.

All the credit is to Sm7in for this story.

 

Bonus chapter out.

 

I take reviews, suggestions, and comments and try to add them into the story. so if you want something to happen, review.

 

 

Disclaimer: This is the original authors work and property, all character and stories are his or her property. This is a work of fanfiction or tribute to the original author. All other characters or scenarios are properties of other authors. No money was made from the creation or continuation for this story.

You should check out this author, Sm7in, and his stories elsewhere

You can also add your own routes and options at writing.com

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129478 Read Count: 558065
[Report This] Published: November 10 2020 Updated: October 14 2021
Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2021 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: A Summer Gone

If I had to chose an option for Steve to experience as a tiny, it would be the last week of college. I like your writing and love to see where you take Steve.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. it is possibility this story arc will be chosen. I am holding off on adding to this story so people can review and vote for what story arc they will want. So please be patient. I try my best to see what the readers want.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2021 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86: What is the overdose doing to Steve?

I would vote for the merging. I would like to see Kady become a sexy beauty where Steve provides everything she needs to become it. Absorbed into her without a trace so that she can begin her life as a goddess. Kady then feels powerful once she realizes she has her son with her forever.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. There is a path that went down the merging path. She becomes a star icon of beauty becasue of it. Thank you for following along.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: May 20 2021 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: A nightmare beginning

My vote woud be Allison or Alesha, maybe both. It would be fun to see the girls try and sneek in and have fun with Steve.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am going with Allison as that is mention on two reviews for this chapter. I hope you enjoy the chapter

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: April 26 2021 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Home is where this began

My vote would be the first choice. Allows Steve to trust his mother more before she decides it is her turn.



Author's Response:

thank you for the reivew. The Aunt will play with Steve to create more of a scenario where Steve trusts his mom a lot.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 26 2021 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Womb to Improve

Good chapter, A litte fast pace. I like how Kara is using her husband to train Steve inside her. 

 

I say for the idea for the next part of story. My vote is for Kady. I would like to see the mom get more motherly with her son.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. it is a little fast pace as we move to the next arc. I will count this as a vote for Kady

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: To play with your dream

For an idea for Kara to do with Steve is first have her play with him in her mouth since she doesn't know about Steve being first shot inside there and have her play with him with her tongue. followed by her sticking him in her asshole to use for later.

the other idea, have Kara stick Steve in her shoe so that she can feel very powerful and dominate and then move Steve to her pussy for some love later that night where Steve is shot into the womb.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am going with Steve going to enjoy some feet followed by pussy. the womb action is coming up soon.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2021 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Mountains to learn from

I go with Kara finding Steve. So she could live out her fantasies for a little bit before sticking Steve in her womb. Mabye have Steve trapped somewhere on her body for little bit to give Kara some empowerment. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Kara has found Steve and will have some fun with Steve before he goes in a womb.

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Time to go Noodling

Great Chapter! I would go with warm.



Author's Response:

Warm it is