Well Miranda sucked just as bad as others, so sad for Natalie to, man these bitches deserve death and I would hope something happens to them but I know it won’t, I hope at least Miranda is haunted by there ghosts for the rest of her life

it Was a good story but I think I will be done with this verse for the time being. 

Yay glad this is back, poor Becca can’t catch a break.

Plz oh plz continue this interesting and well done story.

     First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened.  I am glad your health is getting better.  

     So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot.  Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her.  So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.

    Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary.  She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the  daughter in front of the father, damn that cold.  Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold.  Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on.  I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.  

    Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.

     SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do  that to students deserve what ever happens.  Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.

      I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish.     But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.

So I will be leaving a review for the latest chapter, but for now i am rereading this story, and i have a question. If at all possible can u plz kill the parents, ( particularly Mollies parents)? Also in a very gruesome manor, I don't usually ask that but i just got to Mollies chapter again, and every thing I said the last time still stands, but yea I want Mollies mother in particular to suffer a very bad end.  Believe it or not I am actually ok if the girls live, i actually like them, (as characters, they are still terrible people).

Hope everything is ok

    Well this was an interesting chapter.  So instead of out right domination, she went for straight manipulation, yea u get a choice, ( as long as its the choice i pick).  So then we go to the governor and he is about what I expected, caught me by surprise though with the other tines though.  You also caught me by surprise with poppy looking to the governor as a candidate (can i just say that Poppy has very lousy taste in candidates).  I liked toe jam a lot, I really am interested to see where you go with her. 

     Now i really hope the next chapter we see a lot more of Leah cause I was really looking forward to her and we didn't get a hole lot with her this chapter.  I am very curious to see what she will do to establish that Poppy is hers and that her father has no place in that relationship. She should have known that Annabelle would never where that collar, so i am really curious to see what she does.

     You also caught me by surprise with Byte and his return.  I didn't expect his return until after the 4's chapters.  Also I really hope that statement about killing shrunken who have been exposed to her blood doesn't include Rachel, hopefully its worn off of her by now, but we will see.  Also yea u keep teasing this commander ( who is totally her sister).  

     So the governor is now in play, cant say i saw that coming.  You have made a very interesting villain with him, I want to say he is probably a sociopath, and also a little unhinged to with his messing with Anne's mind on her mother, also the way he went after that one guy even beating him after he admitted to the raid.  I get a kind of Joker vibe from him, which is good cause I love me some joker. To bad i doubt he has a Batman counter part. 

     So yea I see where Leah gets her attitude from, though she seems far more stable then her father. This is per speculation on my part but i have a feeling that shrunken would be better off ( for a given value of better) with her in charge of the BSA as opposed to her father.  Also plz don't have let her have eaten kids ( i know that might be asking for to much) I don't know if i can stand her being redeemed if she ate kids to.  I know there should be know difference from eating kids and college students and killing shrunken in general, but damn it there is, if your going to kill some one don't be sadistic about it, just do it.  From what we have seen, yes she has gotten off on domination she hasn't been down right cruel except to Nich and Amy.  SO she can be cruel but doesn't do it very often.  I really like Leah and I don't know just want her to be better.  I like how she was handling Toe Jam, they seemed to have a some what decent relationship ( if still massively wrong and messed up).  I know that's after years of indoctrination though.

     I am very excited for the next chapter and then Naomi well.

    So first off thsi was another great chapter.  YOU go Molly and tell your bitch of a mother ( use that term very loosely) off. I loved that she defended Poppy ( Annabelle), it does so some serious growth on her part. That talk at the end did really show that she has grown, cause she's right earlier in the story she wouldn't have cared why Annabelle was being disrespectful, only that she was.   Now she does actually care about Poppy ( not Annabelle, not yet, but I do think she will in time).

     I love that discussion at the end about why the giantesses think the way they do about owning a pet person, its fate/ the universes/destiny/God, if u weren't meant to be a slave/pet you wouldn't be, but since u are in that position u are meant to be that way, it finally clarified what harpers parents said both in the initial meeting ( because they can) and what they said in The Abbots first chapter.  That reasoning is as old as time and very human.  I really liked it, it helped to humanize Molly and by relation the other giants as well.  That scene was sweet to, because Annabelle was right Molly was actually treating her like a person for the first time in this story and i loved it, i really hope this is a trend that will continue when we catch back up with molly.  

     Now on to the dream sequence, I loved that dream, i loved the spicy scene even if not as blunt as some others, also yes Molly's butt does need some screen time.  I really have enjoyed these dream sequences for the fact that it allows you to show ( instead of tell) us her in psyche.  This one was very poignant that Poppy is the dominant right not, and that ending was very scary, and I do think Molly was some what right about why the dream freaked her out, cause she does care about the 4 even though she hates them.  Poor Annabelle is in trouble.

     Now i do think Leah is next, would prefer Naomi because I cant wait for Leah but i think she should be the last.  I am also excited for Naomi and to see how clingy she will be especially with her sister around, so this should be fun.  Also i am in trepidation for the parents of Naomi, and of course the Governor. Naomi i think will be clingy and very sweet on Annabelle.     Hopefully her parents arent as bitchy as Mollies but we will see. 

     I think Leah should be last because it fits her to have the last word I think, and also it will build her jealousy that she will not have had any interaction with Poppy at all, so i think she will feel very threatened by that, and she will have missed poppy to.  Honestly i don't know what to expect from the Governor other than emotional manipulation.

     Now some thing i have been thinking about is your proposed what if, (plz yes)  I have a thought, i ahve two areas that i would like to see a what if on, the first is how would things have played out if on that first night she had left before Harper stopped her, and two how would Harped have reacted if Belle had chosen not to come that night.  My main thing is if she didnt have the initial massacre to bring back up, i do think bell would have been so love starved  that she prob would have attached to one of the 4.  ALso my other big what if is if Zoey had scene her at the house.  THat one I have no idea how that would play out.

     SO yea still loving this story and i cant wait to see where this ends up.

P.S. How proud were you of that line in chapter 22 i think where leah stills thanos's line about not taking pleasure in killing shrunken.  ( THat was a great line and i loved the delivery).

Plz do not take my last a review to heart, that woman (refuse to call her a mother) really pissed me off, your writing is superb as ever, and u made a very real character there, I just absolutely hate her and I think she may be the single most hated character in this story except for maybe leahs father depending on how he is presented.  

I love the story and I will continue to read and love it.  I just realized my last review may be a little to harsh.

So I have had more thoughts and my first is is that i love your long chapters.  At this point it would be wierd if they were short so plz continue making them long.  

     NOw then, like i said I love what u did with Harper, u turned her from a nympho airhead bitch to an actual human being (whos still a bitch to any one she doesn't actually care about), She is intelligent , if not school smart, i do think she might be real world smart, she is cunning,  and she can be very sweet when she wants to be, that date she had with Annebell at the end was very sweet and caring.  So yea you did an amazing job with Harper and i cant wait to see the others. 

     So now about the imprinting i have reread that scene alot and the bear scene from the previous chapter and i am still not completely sure what the trigger is but i am not convicnced its the smell, or at least not the smell by itself.  There is something else going on there i am trying to figure it out, cause like she said she has dealt with there smells from pretty much the start. I did like that Annebell was still herself for the most part, but damn if all she can think is to plz her owner, than damn, thats why i am rooting for Annebell staying herself but still with one of the girls.

     Now the next girl will prob be Molly, and that should be interesting and fun,  Molly was the one who had the least interest in Annebell except as a pet ( her ideas were fun though, i loved the ice water dunking) but she has come around, but like Harper she has insecurites but unlike Harper Annebell already is aware of at least some of them, so she wont be surpised by them and there for she wont be as vulnerable to Molly i think as she ended up being to Harper. THis should be interesting.

     I am looking forward to both Naomi and Leah, I can't decide between the two who will be last, I agree with Mr suit that Leah likes the last word but so does Naomi, and while i am rooting for LEah, I have noticed that Naomi i think will suprise us, she has had in my opinion simultaneously the most important scene as far as imprinting goes and the least amount of screen time with Annebell, we have never had a real alone time with annebell and Naomi except for chapter 20 when Annebell made out with her after Bennet. I also think that she may be no where near as much a hardass nor a bitch as she acts.  I think she be very vulnerable when we get to her. She wont have really interacted with Annebell for weeks by that point and i think she will be very cleangy, and very affectionate.  She will also be fighting for Annebells attention from her sister, ( weather she wonts to admit it or not),  I like Nell but i am far more interested in the 4.  I also really want to see another vore scene by you, seriously u prob did the best vore scene i have ever read, it also helps that it was survivable by our protagonist.  So yea i am really looking forward to Naomis chapters.

     I am still very much a Leah fan and i cant wait for her chapter, she is going to be so freaking threatened by that point since she wont have really interacted with Annebell for weeks that yea she will be very dominating and in charge, and i cant wait to see those scenes. I really like when she put Annebell in the vase and shook it around, i liked how she said she likes to just stand above the shrunked and just totally dominate the poor bugs, ( sorry people).  I look forward to her chapter as well. 

     So yea see u in the next chapter.