Penname: Edgedej4 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 12 2022
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Likes Giantess content. (Prefers F/m and F/F, but M/f is sometimes good.)

Mainly likes growing rather then someone shrinking, and being at least somewhat Loving to the smaller person. But shrinking stories are still good. 

Likes: Buttcrush, loving and gentle, fantasy, domination, Playful crushing.

dislikes: feet, Strong Emotional cruelty.

That being said, I still like both gentle and non gentle. Just not the emotional stuff. 

Have recently started my first story, so I guess I’m an amateur writer now. 




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Reviews by Edgedej4
Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 558108
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: October 08 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

The action is very nice, and there’s a good use of pacing and flow in the story, as you used multiple perspectives for that. I would just like a bit more description for the action scenes themselves. 



Author's Response:

I'll try to be more descriptive. Thanks!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great stuff, happy to see so much detail given beforehand and world building. Helps immerse into the world. I like how it’s a bit more of a slower burn into the story too, it really feels like it’s setting up for a grand tale. 
I know you’ve gone way past chapter 1 by now, but I do think for this chapter specifically, a bit more description per scenario after they landed would have been nice.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks! Yeah, I was a bit overeager to get into the action in the beginning. I didn't know it would become such a long book at the time. 

Summary: Feature

Andrew is a simple office man, seeking a hassle-free, organized life. A marriage to a brash, hygienically-challenged giantess proves to be an imposing situation. Yet, in a way, opposites attract, and Andrew finds that his devotion to his marriage, and his wife, outlives his own personal sense of cleanliness.

This is an episodic tale of fluffy one-shots, of differing scenarios Andrew finds himself in.

Previously called "Welcoming Home".


Categories: Slave, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Muscle, Odor, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Massive Mutagen
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100479 Read Count: 112207
[Report This] Published: February 18 2020 Updated: October 30 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: March 27 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home

Well this story has also gotten my attention. It’s a simple take on husband and wife Slice of life fun. However it’s written well with strong enough characterisation and descriptive language that makes it special in its own way. I think it’s a little small to give a proper star review, but I’m honestly loving this a lot. Hence My one criticism would be that there isnt enough of it… which if, let’s be real, is the only primary criticism then your doing a great job. 

Would love some more tags added in tho.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, there's more where that came from. My release schedule may be a bit erratic because I do not have a steady rate of output.

While some of these large overarching story arcs are enjoyable taken as a whole, and I'm actually brainstorming on a chronicle I'd like to put to paper on this site, Slice of life allows you to just jump in with little prior investment. Doorstoppers like "Deliverance" by Kardo tend to suck away hours of the day because you need to read the whole dang thing to nail down all the plotpoints (and bookmark where some of the more ... scientifically informative scenes are). Sooner or later, you're going to bed at 3am and there's work tomorrow!

TL;DR, slice of life allows proper scientific research in a 15 minute timeframe. 

I might have to tag these chapters more clearly, so people can jump to the relevant parts of my research paper and extract all the good data they need for their PhDs. You tend to not have that luxury for a grand story arc because mystery is part of the enjoyment.

Summary:

James is eager and excited to learn about his new promotion! But when he goes to learn what it is, something goes awry leading to quite an adventure to place far far from home. Thankfully a new friend he meets is there to help him get back home and protect him along the way. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48002 Read Count: 87681
[Report This] Published: September 23 2020 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Promotion

The fetish content or anything hasn’t started yet, but the plot, writing prose and level of description to action are all near perfect. This is written to be gripping, to hold the readers attention and it does its job well. There are no errors that I could find in my reading session of chapter 1 either. From what I can see, this looks like it’s going to be really good!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: September 25 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Accidents Happen

The dynamics between these two are very much so a pleasure to read.

Summary:

(Formerly titled "Giantess/shrinking & farts - Beach day (Lillian's route)")

One day, for reasons that escape your comprehension, you shrink really small (ranging from about 1/2 inch to 1/10 inch or 1cm to 1 millimeters approx.), and you don't really know why. Did someone do it? Did something cause it? Who, or what? Unfortunately for you, you won't get many chances to find out, as you have to try your best and survive as you're not alone. The girls that you were just hanging out with or happened to be around are now seemingly impossibly gigantic. You might try to alert them of your presence, but that might not end up being the best idea.

[This story is sort of a spiritual successor to TinyMan0001's 'Giantess/fart shrinking' stories, though not intended to be a carbon copy of it. One difference is that whether farts shrink you is up to whoever is writing, though I at least chose to leave the cause of shrinking mysterious at the beginning, and also because it slightly contradicts some backstory (I also left open the possibility for a girl to intentionally shrink you). However, like it, it's largely focused on the shrinking side, though I guess I can leave a branch dedicated for a giantess/growth route if anyone's interested on adding to that. Also, similarly, the girls may be aware or unaware of your shrunken form. Usually, I'd say they should progress from unaware to aware, depending on the girl and the situation though.

This story is a more user-friendly display for the interactive I made at Writing.com, though here we have to do away with the ability to have other people directly add chapters, and instead I'll be posting the more relevant routes done so far.

Original link here: https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2234425-Giantessshrinking--farts

PS: The Giga tag was just selected in relation to the main character's perspective, this is mostly a shrinking story, not growth focused, though a growth route may be done in the future.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Butt, Odor, Crush, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39891 Read Count: 125498
[Report This] Published: October 15 2020 Updated: January 20 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Back To Reality

Wow, this was amazing. I do hope to see more of your stories in the future. You have a knack for writing very detailed and descriptive stories which is something I personally struggle with, and only make me appreciate your works more. 

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Apologies for not responding to this until now, but thank you so much!

Summary:

Tim finds himself in a situation not exactly unwanted but unexpected at the hands of a cute blond.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11829 Read Count: 12288
[Report This] Published: November 06 2020 Updated: March 11 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: May 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting setup. Of course the meat of these stories come from the relationship itself, so am looking forward to seeing more.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Darkness

Alright so, from the first chapter I can say that description has been massively overhauled. Sometimes in other stories you feel like it’s the same old same stuff, here there is similes and analogies and stuff to make the writing itself interesting. Perhaps it’s a benefit of this type of story where the writing itself is tested more-so than plot or characters. But regardless, it’s safe for me to say you nailed this aspect. 


Your narrative voice is really well done, it feels natural to read through. Again, something smashed out of the park.

You’ve asked for goods and bad though. So for improvements, I think you need to be careful about “word vomit”. A case where there’s too much description and it’s not adding anything as it’s not relevant. Now, you haven’t actually fallen into this trap this chapter, but there are moments where the reader may feel tempted to zone out as some sections may need greater emphasis as sections feel like word vomit, it’s just something worth noting for the future. However, to this extent, is only such a minor issue. You’ve honestly done an amazing job. I do hope to see more on characters soon though.

Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 97446
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: CH1. Evicted

Only read chapter 1 so far, but I’m a sucker for gentle stories and this seems like the diabetes I need in my life. First chapter is written very well with fairly consistent actions and dialogue, with a balanced mix of both. I’m looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Oooh, not another person getting diabetes from this! In all seriousness, I'm glad you like the first chapter.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 06 2022 Title: Chapter 2: CH2. Roommates!

I do think this is the ideal length of a chapter of this story. Very gentle and casual, no rash sudden implications or anything. Some sexual teasing and stuff here and there but it’s very nice. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

They both love each other, and love to tease one another, its only reasonable that it would be a bit sexual at times!

And, yeah, whenever a story just goes "whoops, sex" ya gotta suspend your disbelief, which can work in a lot of cases. Still, I wanted this story to force the reader to stumble along with Lena and Ryan as they figured this whole "love" thing out :)

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2022 Title: Chapter 5: CH5. A Day Like Any Other

Best chapter so far, am a big fan of their relationship. This has definitely become on of my favs In this site.



Author's Response:

High praise! This one technically took the longest, so I'm glad it turned out well in the eyes of a person who wasn't left waiting as long!

Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley concludes! Brian’s innocence has been proven to the world, and he is about to reveal that he is actually alive, but only one inch tall. Now that Allison and Brian no longer have to live in hiding, they must adjust to a brand new world - one that owes Brian a lot of apologies. This becomes even more difficult when they are reunited with faces from the past, such as Brian’s little sister. However, their relationship is stronger than ever. As such, they’re confident that they can overcome any challenge, so long as they do it together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Couples, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52028 Read Count: 49031
[Report This] Published: April 30 2021 Updated: February 13 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Real Talk, Part 2

Wow, what’s this. An update, and the writing is as good as ever. Glad to see more of this, and if you still need a break then that’s all good. But am definitely looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it! I'm glad I was able to make some progress too, and I'll try to keep it up. Thank you for the kind words, I'm very glad to hear that you're enjoying the story! I hope you enjoy where we go from here, and good luck with your own story as well.

-Pluto

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

-Chapter 57 is now up-


Notice: No longer on hiatus!



 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 282420 Read Count: 118018
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: April 15 2024
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: March 20 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?

It’s a very interesting premise, or well one that is highly detailed with lots of room for many interactions. Am excited for more.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 20 2022 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Trying Is All We Can Ask

Alright, I’ve now caught up. And I have to say this story is written quite well. To a great detail and full of a good balance of when to have plot or fetish content. 

The characters I was a bit shaky on at the start, but they all grow on you. Especially 6, Maya, and Maya’s girlfriend. Or the main trio I guess you could say. Cruelty is obviously a focus on this story, especially the emotional kind. Which even while I personally am not the biggest fan of, I can easily see it’s written well. No complaints there. 

If anything the biggest complaint I can give is the same complaint I would give myself on my own stories, which is to watch out for spelling and grammar errors. I think I can identify at least a couple per every 2-3 chapter. Though if small grammar errors is the biggest issue we have, then we are still far in the green. Anyway, hope to see more. And am especially loving the more balanced relationships of the main trio. 



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you think the story is well written, even if it isn't something you're a fan of. Grammar continues to be an issue I deal with but I like to think I'm improving in that regard. It's nice to see that you enjoyed the story and the relationships. I hope that I can improve further to make the story even more enjoyable!

Summary:

Just a short little fun story featuring college couple Ellie and Derek. They're a pretty normal nineteen-year-old pair with one small exception: Ellie is an all-powerful goddess who has the ability to kill and resurrect people at will, and loves using that ability to toy with her boyfriend Derek.


Categories: Body Part, Insertion, Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Vore, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2011 Read Count: 5616
[Report This] Published: September 26 2021 Updated: September 26 2021
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing, it’s the perfect mix of gentle but not over the top In cruelty or being too gentle. I like that it’s nice and simple. 

Summary:

Simon has Regressor's Syndrome, rendering him and all other sufferers on the planet around two inches in height. Normally, he lives in a specially designed colony with other people of his height and disposition, but this week he's visiting his normal-sized sister, Milla, who's just out of college and living on her own for the first time in her life. Simon's ready to cut loose and enjoy the big-person world for all the delights it has to offer... but he didn't count on one factor: Milla's roommate Beck, who seems to have a strange fascination with our tiny hero's size...

But Simon is an optimist. He can make friends with anybody, especially somebody his protective big sister loves and admires. Will he win Beck over? Or does another fate await him?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Gentle, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35190 Read Count: 75538
[Report This] Published: November 05 2021 Updated: April 04 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: SIMON SAYS... THE PLEASURE'S MINE!

love this story. Something about gentle, gore and mouth play goes well. The descriptions are written in great detail and affection from both main characters just radiate off the words. Honestly a gem of a story. Keep up the good work.




Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying! Stay tuned... there's something really special coming up for longtime readers!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: February 27 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: SIMON SAYS... FACE THE MUSIC!

Looking forward to more of this delightful tale.

Summary:

Two girls want to take a break from their stressful everyday lives. However, what happens when their trip takes a drastic and mysterious turn and they end up in a world not like the one they are used to? Journey with Liz and Vicky as they try to figure out what is going on and whether they can make it back to their world!

**Gullivera-type story**


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Lesbians, New World Order, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30087 Read Count: 29531
[Report This] Published: December 01 2021 Updated: February 28 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It’s a very interesting idea. I hope to see a positive relationship between our male lead figure and the giantess. But that’s more speculation then review.


for the actual review portion, you two have done an amazing job at having a good amount of detail occur without too much or too little. The dialogue is nice, sometimes a bit much but overall done well. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much man. Glad you are liking the story so far. We will try to dial it down with the dialogue as you pointed out but stay tuned cuz we going to be picking up the pace in upcoming chapters ;)


thanks again for the review! Hope to hear from ya again!

Summary: Jack was going about his life as normal, until one day his best friend did something to him that changed everything. His life had just changed forever.
Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33391 Read Count: 53319
[Report This] Published: December 02 2021 Updated: December 21 2022
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: December 27 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Shrinking potion

Very cozy feeling to this chapter. Am wondering where this story is headed, I’m guessing we’ll be getting more into the actual fetish stuff or story/character dynamics soon.



Author's Response:

Hi, glad you liked the first chapters, you'll definitely find more in the following ones

Summary:

So this is my first mega giantess story that I am writing simultaneously to a mega couples story. This one follows the antics of Jessica as she explores her new size and the city. It will get progressively more sensual as it goes so reader discretion is advised


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Crush, Adult 30-39, Destruction, Growing Woman, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135528 Read Count: 123278
[Report This] Published: December 16 2021 Updated: August 04 2023
Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed
Date: January 27 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Lovin’, Touchin’, Squeezin’

Great chapter. A little hard to follow at some parts though, might just be me.



Author's Response:

Thank you, most of these chapters were written in December '21, I tried to get little more thorough in editing as I went, but also sparsed them out more over time. I swear I am finally putting the final chapters together now but as usual the real world beckons.