Dick and Ronnie were huge pluses for me these chapters. Ronnie's inner thoughts were a great touch and helped flesh out how determined she is to get what she wants (i.e. the Feel of that Dick), and I loved the few interactions we got to see between them. Really curious as to how the size stuff will play out between them, especially with how nervous Dick is towards making advances. You mentioned there will be some M/f, and considering he's the only male character so far, I think I can confidently assume where this is going, and I'm looking forward to it.

Don't have much to say on Kim and Jen. Kinda confused why they're just friends struggling to find romantic partners while also mad horny for each other, but I trust that'll make more sense as the story goes on.

I hate Victoria, a lot, but in that intended way of she's the villain (or at least an antagonist), so I'm supposed to be rooting against her. That's the impression I get, anyway. So, good job on that.

I liked that you went into some of the science of how the shrinking serum works. You didn't have to because I just buy that sorta thing when it comes to this kind of content, but taking the effort to rationalize it is appreciated.

Great chapters, can't wait to get to the demonstration!

Haven't read the latest chapter yet, but I wanted to get my thoughts down on Ch. 5. 

A lot of interesting backstories going on here. Ronnie and Dick are still a delight to see. The details of Ronnie's background certainly add an intriguing layer to her character (was not expecting her landlord's grandson to be extorting her). Dick continues to be great, with his past mistakes heavily shaping his mindset and motivating him to be very respectful of Ronnie (sometimes more than she'd like). Though, perhaps his mistakes aren't as egregious as he believes them to be. Or maybe they're worse, I dunno. I like that we only know about what he did wrong from his perspective, so it's currently unreliable as to how he should be judged.

Kim and Jen's situation makes a lot more sense now. Also an unexpected development, these backstories are really creative. Their flirting (or whatever you want to call it) was also a treat. 

I think it speaks volumes how hard I'm rooting for our protagonists against their opposition. I hate (in a good way) manipulative characters like Vanessa and Stella doing so much to undermine all our protagonists hard work. I can only hope they both have some sort of comeuppance coming their way, but great work on the antagonists.

A small criticism: some of Kim and Jen's dialogue felt heavy-handed, specifically when they were revealing details of each other's past. I like that you revealed most of that stuff through dialogue (for the other characters as well), but a lot of details seemed like things the two of them should already know about each other, so the way they explained it came across as if they were talking to the audience directly about their backstories. I noticed this with Elise in the last chapter too, it's just a bit awkward having these big chunks of dialogue expositing information the person they're talking to should already know. Like, it's clearly being said for the reader's benefit, not the character's. This wasn't so much an issue with Ronnie because Dick didn't know about Crusher, so her explanation came off more naturally. (Sorry if this seems like a lot for a 'small' criticism. I over-explain my point to make sure I'm getting it across clearly. Honestly, it's mainly noticeable because of how good your dialogue and banter typically are).

Very excited to see where things go from here! I hope to have the next chapter read before 7 comes out!

"[Titania] licked her lips and around her mouth, extending the tips of her tongue around her mouth far enough to go past her chin..." Jesus Christ! Wow! Damn! Giving Larkin Love a run for her money.

Loved getting Stella's inner monologue. She honestly has every right to be freaking out at what's going on around her, specifically since no one informed her beforehand, and as much as I (and our main characters) would love to be in this position, it's refreshing to get the "normal" perspective of not wanting to be shrunken to absurd proportions.

Jen was also really well characterized here. Her somewhat nervous enthusiasm serves as a great contrast to Stella's extremely nervous repulsion, and it was so satisfying to see her mentally shut down and disregard Stella's preaching. That brief moment with Kim where she reassured Jen she'd be safe was sweet, and I enjoyed the conversations they had with Claire.

It'll be interesting to see where the story goes with Elise inserting the forbidden protocols into Aidra (assuming she succeeds in doing that, which feels likely). The whole "the Fab Four are to show the investors everything mentality, including glitchy beta builds, is a huge oversight on Elise's/Vanessa's part (though it may very well fit into Vanessa's master plan, I'm still working out her exact angle). The thought of the Fab Four's hard work being sabotaged (potentially to disastrous levels) by their corporate overlord is frustrating and makes for a compelling narrative.

Criticisms for this chapter: The story gets difficult to visualize once it gets techy (namely, the ring and bowl around Dick's dick, and Elise activating the spider bot). It took me a while to figure out what was going on with Dick. I understood what the shapes were and where they were going, but having no clue as to their purpose (especially in relation to Ronnie) had me confused about what was happening until Dick started shooting. I got the impression you were being intentionally vague since this was from Jen's perspective, and while I loved that a couple chapters ago with Ronnie, here it just made it hard to parse what was happening as opposed to leading me to want to fill in the blanks. With Elise, I think some analogies/similes or more plainspeak description of what the drone looks like, what it's doing, how small it is, etc. would help (or it could just be me being dumb, it wouldn't be the first time). Also, there were quite a few typos this chapter. That's not something I'd normally note, but there were enough here to distract me from an otherwise solid chapter.

I think it's commendable that you kept up a consistent release schedule for as long as you did, and please feel free to break those deadlines with a sledgehammer. I could never be that orderly with my releases, and if I were, it would lead to a noticeable drop in quality. I respect that you've been really consistent up to this point with few signs of rushing. Personally, I find keeping a less strict timetable (something like once a week or so vs. every week on specific days) helps keep me on track without stressing me out, but I know everyone writes differently, so I hope you can find a schedule that works best for you. And yeah, this stuff does not take priority. Do whatever you need or want to do instead, the smut can come after. I will wait however long you want me too, so keep up the great work!

Clever premise and well-executed. Growth from gorging makes for a satisfying read, and you nailed the descriptions of both the food and the growth/destruction. And I liked how everything came together at the conclusion. Great work!

While I'll admit that a lot of the tech/sci-fi stuff goes right over my head (not your fault, it just isn't my field), these first two chapters were really engaging and the concepts you're using are clearly well thought out / researched. The plot has me hooked.

The down on his luck, blue collar worker begrudgingly teaming up with the crook kidnapping him is a fun dynamic, and I'm excited to see where you take these characters. Martin being tricked into crawling into his coworkers' orifices is a particularly funny detail. The pang of guilt Tenebris feels at the end of chapter 2, along with how polite and gentle she was washing Martin in the sink, is an interesting wrinkle to her otherwise callous character that we'll likely see developed on over the course of the story.

A cool thing with space fiction is the infinite potential of the settings and characters, especially when size stuff is involved. Looking forward to seeing this universe fleshed out through our protagonists journey!

Another good chapter. It was neat focusing on Tenebris' perspective this time, and getting a closer look at how she interacts with her technology. I think Martin's POV might work better for the "fish outta water" effect, especially when entering new locations, as well as depicting differences in scale (whether that's to benefit the narrative or the smut), since everything looks way bigger for him, but it would be intriguing to flip between different perspectives for different chapters if that's what you're inclined to do. 

I'm enjoying the dynamic between our protags: Tenebris growing attached to Martin while still adamant in selling him off, and Martin very much not wanting to be sold to someone for obvious and justified reasons. Her allowing him to veto on a sale leads to some fun interactions, and it'll be interesting to see the offers made to her in the future. I doubt Martin's going to find any potential buyer agreeable, and there's probably going to be an offer too good for Tenebris to refuse, so I'm looking forward to how this dynamic continues to play out. 

As for the format, I prefer the wider spacing between paragraphs in the prior chapters. Here, it's near impossible to distinguish one paragraph from the next (I read with the text zoomed in a bunch, so that could be on me) and it all looks like a huge wall of text. If you want to keep the narrower spacing, I'd at least suggest indenting at the start of each paragraph, just so there's someway to tell when a new one starts (or when someone else starts speaking) beyond seeing the white space where the last sentence ended.

Excited to see Edo and whatever hijinks ensue there!

The description of how Martin connected directly to Tenebris' senses from within her rectum was cool. I love the specific details of how her emulated voice sounds different because there's no breathing involved and the stuff about actual eyesight being different from how a person's brain processes it. Little things like that are a pleasant reminder of how smartly written this story is (sometimes too smart for me lol, but that's very much a good thing).

Also loved Martin noticing a small scar on Tenebris' butt. Like, it's such a minor thing to point out, but it feels fitting that he'd make note of it anyway.

Also loving bodily orifices fulfilling their true purpose of storing and carrying tinies. Always a good time and somehow less grotesque than living flesh elevators.

The conflict between the two leads and Tenebris' continuous internal conflict continues to be engaging and I'm excited to see where things go from here.

I'm really loving the different dynamics between the bigs and tinies each chapter. It's all very playful, and there's this underlying energy of everyone being into the power dynamic even if they won't openly admit it.

The prank chapter was a lot of fun, especially them getting caught by HR and her being secretly into it. The description of Jennifer sitting on him was really good too. I think the brevity of it was to it's favor, just a short and sweet episode in the office.

Chapter 4 was good too. It was cool seeing how Sasha and Marcus both depend on each other. I love Marcus' enthusiasm for fulfilling his duties as operations assistant/stress relief/ fidget toy, as well as how considerate Sasha is in juxtaposition to how she physically treats him, which just loops back to my praise regarding the office dynamic. 

You did a great job emulating the game's storytelling through your narrative structure. That alone had me hooked on this story, but you also nailed the game's writing style. I could effortlessly hear the narrator and Shadowheart's voice speaking their dialogue, and it perfectly matched the lyrical and witty style of the game's descriptions. Also loved the use of the illithid powers, giving Kada and Shadowheart a glimpse of each other's perspective of the other. That's an element from the game that was executed so perfectly in a size scenario like this.

Beyond that, this was also solid size lit with a short, fun plot. I'm always happy to see more giantess Shadowheart. Great work! 

This was a fun story. I liked the slow buildup with all the hints regarding Cassie's affliction, and the entire premise was well thought out. You did a good job of expressing important details and the characters' personalities succinctly without ever getting bogged down by it. There were some awkwardly phrased sentences, and the last full sentence felt oddly abrupt for an otherwise great ending, but the content was great throughout.

I am curious if the parole officer, who has the same curse, can be shrunken by Cassie (and vice versa)? Like, if they were together without their meds, would they both shrink or are they both immune to it since they're both cursed? I don't know if you plan on doing anything else with this setting, so maybe it doesn't matter, but having the cursed people stay together seems like a better solution than solitary confinement if they are in fact immune to other people's shrinking.