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The Shrinker Games by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Ash has been waiting for her friends to arrive all morning, but just as they arrive she is struck by a fast acting genetic disorder which reduces its victims to the size of a cockroach.

Based off of a 'New World Order' style concept where certain people are genetically susceptible to sudden shrinkage, these people being immediately stripped of their common rights and privileges are reduced to basically sub-human property for whoever finds them.

::This is likely to be quite a long story for me as 1: i'm enjoying writing it in detail, and 2: there's going to be quite a lot of body play and each segment is likely to get its own chapter.::

Hope you like it ^_^


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12563 Read Count: 42349
[Report This] Published: March 27 2014 Updated: June 17 2014
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Games Begin

That breast scene was awesome, I don't think I have ever scene it explained that way, the pure torment that would actually be felt if someone were really subjected to that. Fantastic job!

Love the overall helplessness you have conveyed of Ash, to be regulated to a game piece, she's completey at their mercy. Can't wait to see what fun they have with her next!



Author's Response:

I do like bringing new light to previously poorly-thought-out situations lol :P  Benefit of being female and writing about females i guess, we know how much we 'move' lol!

Seems like i'm only writing this for about 3 or 4 people now, no-one else seems to enjoy it, but i guess they can go fuk themselves, i enjoy writing for my friends anyway ;)

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2014 Title: None

This is a really good story, the slow build up will make it so much more worth it when Jennifer starts imposing her will on Olivia, like settling her breast onto her. that was delicious! I think Olivia deserves everything she gets from Jennifer, she used another person and then wanted to throw her away like trash when it no longer suited her needs, hope she gets it back in spades. I always root for the giantess anyway, so a tiny thatis deserving of it is even better *weg* 



Author's Response:

Ohhhh man. I loved the boob thing. I also love it when the GTS are playful with their size difference. Olivia is not going to have a good time, but I’m not giving away any spoilers! Thanks for the comment, by the way. I’m always happy to hear other people enjoying my stories.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2014 Title: None

Wow, I'm loving this story! Glad to see that Nick hasn't escaped blame in Jennifers eyes either, she has them both wrapped around her finger now, Olivia litterally! 

 

I like how Jennifer is becoming more and more confident of her position over Olivia, shes definitely in control now. Great stuff!



Author's Response:

I love Jennifer. But she's still human and will make mistakes like anybody else. But yes, I do love the power play between her and Olivia. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2014 Title: None

Ok, that chapter threw me curve, didn't see that coming. I thought Olivia was in for a world of abuse but can't see how Jennifer will carry on doing that now, seems they bonded at the end there. 

Nick seems to have grown a set too, he's been pretty spineless but was showing some asseriveness in this chapeter, even know he still succumbed to Jennifers charms again but who can blame him, she looks like Jennifer Lawrence :)

Kims a total bitch and if anyone ends up in her possesion, they are in deep shit. 

Interested in seeing what happens next, I'll be tuning in again. 



Author's Response:

Nick is a guy after all. If you haven’t had a relationship with a full-sized woman for years and all of a sudden a woman like Jennifer shows up…well, yea.

Kim is a bitch and I think you know where this story is headed. Thanks for commenting and reading!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25 2014 Title: None

Uh oh, things just got real, can't wait to see how Kim treats Olivia! This is a golden opportunity for Jennifer to get Olivia out of the picture but doesn't look like she wants to part with her, I guess she is liking this 3 some stuff, good scene by the way ;)



Author's Response:

Jennifer isn’t that cruel after all! Maybe she feels bad for moving into Olivia’s life and then getting her kidnapped? I don’t think that’s something that even Jennifer could live with. Thanks for your continued support!  

Micro Inc. by Senital2011 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When shrinking tenchology revolutionizes the world... Lives are forever changed to fufill the desires of others. Follow the tales of Keyla Renolds as she's rented out to random people.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22702 Read Count: 71700
[Report This] Published: April 30 2014 Updated: January 24 2017
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Exposition anyone?

Wow, missed this story too, glad to have found it! I love durable concepts, makes for a lot of fun and the fact that they can be killed is a nice touch and keeps you guessing as to what might happen. 

 

Awesome stuff, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see this continued! Great concept, Jasper is my kind of Giantess.

 

Would have loved if Jasper had decided to abuse Keyla out of her suit, obviously she couldnt go as hard but I think it would have been a great power trip for Jasper.

 

Great stuff!

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Princess Gwendoline, or Goldilocks as she is known, is a spoilt girl who has too often been used to pushing her subjects around and getting her way. What she is about to realise however is that messing around with a family of Giants will never end well when a Mother's Son is put in danger...

(This is Not a furry story!!)

This is my own version of a kind of "Grimm Fairy Tale". Most of the "hardcore" (eg, violence/humiliation/vore) stuff will not be until the last couple of chapters, but the story revolves around the interaction between the Giant family and the humans and how they try to co-exist.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Adventure, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24544 Read Count: 39317
[Report This] Published: June 19 2014 Updated: September 11 2017
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Princess

Nice introduction, I like the feel youve given this world and it's inhabitants. The size and genre aren't up my alley but you being my favorite author, I'll be tagging along for the ride :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking by it hun :)  Not to worry, though Bram may be essentially the main character, all of the 'good stuff' will happen between his wife Catalina and Goldilocks, I'm just throwing my hand at telling my own version of an Epic :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2015 Title: Chapter 2: No Idle Threat

Good to see you, Emm! Your writing has been greatly missed :)

 

Ohh foolish arrogant Goldilocks, entering Catalinas home unattended, tsk, don't thik you will be coming out, at least not the way you entered it *weg*

 

Superbly written as usual, loved the world you crafted here and of course, I know the fun stuff will be delicious when it gets here.

 

Thank you for continuing this story!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for continuing to support my writing so earnestly ^_^

I've been loving writing like this, its so much fun hehe, but i get a little carried away, you should see the pages (literally, PAGES) i had to edit out of this to stop it turning into an odd kind of extended Novella lol =P

As it is, this 3-part story is actually going to be a 4-parter now :P

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Treading Carefully

I didn't see that coming, I didn't think the princess would walk out of that house again but I suspect she may just be foolish enough to return there alone once again *weg*

 

Great descriptons as usual, the brushing of Catalinas hem just above Gwendolines head, patting down her dress with puffs of smoke, you paint a very vivid picture of whats going on. Love it, great work!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Collateral Damage

Aww, poor Mary. I think the poster below me missed the reason behind it though, it wasn't to keep thier plan intact for the Princess, but ratehr to avoid the troubles that would have befallen them once the King found out what has been going on. 

 

Very interested in seeing what Catalina has in store for Gwendolyn! 



Author's Response:

yeah, most people got that, thankfully, but oh well...

I might put a "graphic content" warning up at the start of the next chapter lol. Catalina has a lot of pent up agression to take out on Gwendoline ;)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Remembering the Past

So glad to see this again! You have a gift for writing, you really do. The story just flows and great character development. Very nicely done. Lookign forward to the next morning! 



Author's Response:

Yeah... this was something that had bugged me for a year to finish, I'm in love with this story and it was always at the back of my mind as something i desperately wanted to keep doing :)  I know its not perfect, but i'm so glad other people have become as invested in it as I have!

Last chapter t ogo and its already half done, so I will have to ready for the weekend :)

Determination by wildcatman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 189]
Summary:

Based on the life of three space travelers that were pulled into another planets atmosphere and thrust into this strange new world.  Upon realizing that himself, and his other crew members can't ever get back home.  They're forced to overcome some of the worst, and best happenings that could ever be imagined...  However, this planet is very much like their own, only one thing is actually different....


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, BBW, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146270 Read Count: 505154
[Report This] Published: June 23 2014 Updated: February 27 2015
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13 2014 Title: Chapter 18: 'Devoured'

Holly crap, dude, that was freaking awesome! I don't know, not looking good for him, thats going to be tough to survive. But heck, if he does, hope she just continues to wear him in her panties and use him just as she has been doing :)

Fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Much appreciated man,.... always look forward to your view!  ;`)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2014 Title: Chapter 19: 'Ann's Little Surprise'

Glad to see that Ann has a devilish side too! Some good old foot domination, can't complain about that. Don't know if you plan on having any of the crew perish but I'm putting my money on Bill being the unlucky one, he seems to be in the most dangerous situation. 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2014 Title: Chapter 20: 'Jus' Another Sunday Morn'

Rats! Was hoping Juli would keep Jim, oh well, we'll see what Marie has in store for them now that she has the 2 of them back. That Jim is one tough hombre!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2014 Title: Chapter 26: 'The Rescue Mission'

Ha! Nice touch :) Something tells me the women there are going to have some new toys soon!

Fell behind, Jane on the Couch was awesome and my most favorite recent chapter but of course you knew that would be up my ally :)



Author's Response:

      Yeah, Janie's a real Charmer, she's the 'block', that Julianna was 'chipped' off from. ;`)

 Just a heads up; the coming chapters are mearly a set up, for what's going to happen 'after' the ship arrives on this 'new' planet earth.  Some of the crew will seem to be a pretty tough bunch, but,... we'll see what happens when they finally realize 'just where', they actually are!    _"*.*"_ 

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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2014 Title: Chapter 32: 'The Next Day'

OOooh, Max was captured by beautiful Zena MAXwell, yum. Can't wait to see how that plays out :) Looks like the rest are being rounded up, things are going to heat up soon!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2014 Title: Chapter 35: 'Zena's Little Secret'

I'm loving Zena! Can't wait to see what she has in store for Max *weg*

 

So many tantalizing storylines going on, I want them all! lol. Love the style you inject to each scene. Keep up the great work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  I hope I'm getting 'somewhat' better at this,...

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2014 Title: Chapter 28: 'Crashing at the Park'

I love the casual touch you add to your stories, like how she simply stuffs Max into her pocket, it always drives home the point just how helpless the tinies are to them. 

 

Also, if I haven't said so already, thank you very much for the character homage! 



Author's Response:

Thank You, kind Sir.   Character Homage?  Why, I don't know what you're refering to,...   ;`)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2014 Title: Chapter 29: 'Unknown'

Oh hell yeah, shes definitely has to do that again! Been waiting for someone to get eaten since the cake batter scene :)

 

I agree, it was necessary for poor Tim to meet his end, the story needed a little more edge, the danger didn't quite feel so dangerous anymore because you pretty much figured theyd survive whatever was happening to them. Now you've intorduced a whole nother level to the story. Good work!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Now that I've crossed over,... This is going to get a whole lot, Hotter!

 

;`)

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