A slow shrinking story, about a man who has nothing left to lose.
Now that's more like it! Sorry for ever doubting you, gentle stuff just makes me grumpy! Thanks for the explanation as to why you had Wendy fall in love with him.
I can understand what you were thinkin', Wendy's dominating first impression had you caught-up, but- I had to figure out a way to form a situation that would involve the entire 'COVEN' of ladie's that were in the book club. Secondly, but perhaps most importantly, trap Tom in his shrunken state, and keep him at their mercy....
Great chapters! The ass scene in the Dungeon was awesome and Jackies use of him on her foot this chapter was hot!
I have a suggestion though, it may just be me but I find the use of the adjectives "rubbery and leathery" to desrcibe the giantesses skin distracting. Why would it be rubbery, are they amputees??? I always find womens skin to be very soft, I don't think at a reduced size that would change to rubbery or leathery. I would think it would be something like "the soft pads of her fingers wrapped around his body". Just my two cents.
Great story, looking forward to more!
Thanks! I 'used', rubbery, and leathery- to set-up an image of the "middle-aged"-woman/ then, when switched to her daughter there would be some 'Softernessssss"..... A little 'contrast', there, but, maybe your right...., it wouldn't be so much differance, but I thought I'd try that just leading up....
Much more, on the way,.....Thanks Max!
Oops, forgot to rate!
This story is awesome, wildcat, great job! The way your giantess treat the little guys is perfect, you nail the whole helpless toy aspect, how the giantess can just lose themselves and go wherever their lust takes them, fantastic stuff! And definitley continue! Also looking forward to the edited Shack version.
Thanks! Max, glad your into it,.. I decided to just let this little fling carrie-on for a while, slow it down a bit, and just let Sara have her own way, for a change....
Loved the foot scene! Love how a simple act of just placing her foot onto him can totally domiante and smother him. Great mouth scene too, wish she did eat him! lol, of course the story would be over then and that would be bad.
Hey you're back, thought you took your toys and went home, all your stories are gone. Good to see you writing again, like this new story as well. Always like the casual handling of the tinies in your stories.
Yeah, gonna do some editing on the others, and repost them , later.. Almost finished with the revised version of 'The Shack' should be done in about a week or so, not sure yet. P.S. your gonna love the new ending....
Oh hell yeah, I vote Goddess Wendy keeps him! She broke Tom down in a hurry, loved that chapter, great job wildcat! If you do let sarah get him back I hope Wendy has a lot more fun with him first! Hope she wins though, she can just keep breaking him down more and more until he's a totall puppet of hers.
Wendy gets everything that she wants! In contrast, Tom, has nothing left to lose!
Arggh, fewer things I dislike the an escape! Hope he doesn't get far, love how Wendy treats him. Off to the next chapter, great job wildcat!
Nice twist! I didn't see that coming, sold for 200 G's! Phew, lot of dough. I'd imagine that would buy him security, at least from Linda, I'm sure she wouldn't want to throw that kind of money away by snuffing out her little man, can't say the same for her pool sluts or goth daughter! Great story you are spinning here.
Tom is swimmin with the be-oche's, NOW! Ha!) (Hopefully, not the fishe's!) Thanks for reviewin' Max!
Loved how Wendy got him high! Great idea, just another example of how helpless he is and that they can do anything they want to him. The only down side to that for me is he was in too much of a haze and not fully aware what was going on, reminds me of the unaware theme some stories have and I HATE unaware stories, I think it's so much better when both parties know exactly what is going on. Good stuff with Twilla though, one down and several pool hunnies to go!
I just love Wendy! Love the way she got him off! I hope he ends up with her, either as her slave for life or she snuffs him out, it should be her who gets him!
WHAT!?! Why, why would you do that! lol, ugh, another thing I hate along with unaware stories is when the little guy gets revenge! Tinies are meant to suffer at the feet of big powerful women :) And now Sarah is coming with more powder *sigh* don't think I am going to like where this is going. That said, still a great story and you should never allow myself or any reviewers to sway your stories, stick to your plan, the fact that your stories can move people to care about the outcome is a testament to your story telling.
Oh, and licking a guys feet? Really? That's gross! ;)
Hang in there man, There'l be some wild twists and turns in this one! I do have somewhat of a general story-line. But, it's kinda cool to drift around and try to touch on a little bit of everything,.. Maybe Weny will realize that she has a foot fetish?
Well, guess I'll have to find a new character to like, you killed Wendy for me. Not only did you turn her into a sappy gooey love struck girl, you threw in the animal torture stuff. Sorry but I've seen too much of that in real life, just kills the vibe for me when I see it in a story. The reason I can get behind the whole dominating mistreatment of the shrunken guys is because it's not real on any level, total fabrication, there's no tiny guy anywhere in the world being victimized. Even I have limits on that though, I don’t get into the gory or heavy torture stuff. I don't know why you changed her character anyway, if I have one critique of you, it's that you are all over the map with your characters. You already had the nice loving giantess in Sarah, don't know why you felt the need to do that with Wendy too (even know she is unstable and could revert back) but she was perfect as the dominating giantess who so easily enslaved Toms mind in their first encounter, you totally abandoned that story line, I thought we were going to see a lot of that type of slave interaction between her and Tom. If you wanted another gentle character, you should have just introduced a new one, you're good at inventing giantesses. Your readers aren’t going to all like the same things, so they should be able to have certain parts of the story or characters that they can look forward to. Oh well, maybe Sandy will get her hands on him, I don’t think she would fall in love with him.
Without Angering the Goddess 'Pandora', I've thrown Tom into her box.... Linda own's him now, and Wendy has ' locked-him-in', with her twisted love. He can't escape being 'miniature-sized', as long as she is in love with him...
The incremental, decremation, is slowly desending into the depths of servatude, and domination....
Linda, (his owner/Mistress) has dominated him, ultimatly, by casually renting him out. The plaything that he has become is about to be subjected to everything on the scale.
His only hope, is Sarah, and she just got a pile of cold, hard, cash! Don't rush it, Max,... Wendy's not done yet!
Hahaha, like mother like daughter, love this family! Begging to be released and she asks if they still have the bird cage, hahaha, classic. Don't know how much longer they are going to have him though, 44 mag can be very persuasive. Loved the ass scene too!
Thanks Max! Like mother like daughter, that's what I have always said. Linda's gonna keep him for a while, she 'really', likes tiny Tom! Ha,ha.....
A look into the journal of a madwoman.
Tinyone, your Giantesses are so deliciously powerful and mean. Simply holding her in her fist underwater was such a casual way to dispose of the shrunken one. Simple and powerful, loved it!
A Shrinking story. Your suggestions will be used in the next chapter. Just review what you'd like to see happen to tiny Dan, but, nothing too crazy.....
Sit on him! Come on man, you know I love butt action ;) Smother scenarios are fun and several ways you can do it, sitting on him works obviously but also in her armpit or behind her knee or lowering a thigh down on top of him or have him on one of thier stomachs and then another one lowers a thigh on him. Lots of ways to smother him!
Big-time Wrestling! Only he's double-teamed, and greatly outsized! These girls are going to be a bit 'Timid' at first though......
A shrunken girl has become useless now that her owner has found a boyfriend, but maybe there is one more use for her...
WARNING: Contains bodily violence and sexual violence. Its X-rated for a reason!
Ems! You're awesome! You need to write much more, miss your stories! I'm not much into giant interaction but this was a hot story, the only thing I would have liked better is if Leanne had put Sarah on him. Still a great story, thank you.
Hehe thanks! Matter of Taste will be updated with its first choice chapters very soon. I think having the giant putting the girl on translated better with the original because i had to adapt this to be able to post it (making it non-first person form the SW's perspective and adding names etc). So probably a little bit of inexperience with this kind of subject matter on my part. Thanks for the rating/review ^_^
On a recently discovered Island mice have evolved to look like humans. Scientists took them to the western world however, due to their human-like intelect, large groups of mice-people escaped and quickly found gaps to live and thrive in. This is the story of a girl who is suddenly confronted with mouse-people in her home.
All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
This story I uploaded first on Giantesscity but I feel confident to expose it to a larger audience now.
I've been givng this rave reviews over at giantesscity (different handle), don't worry, not everyone over here is into the gentle, plenty of us like the more hard core stuff but I don't consider this gory at all, gory to me is pulling arms off, blood gushing every where, things like that, this is just a good old crush story with some other flavors mixed in, it's a perfect story and couldn't be written any better.
Great chapter, I'm enjoying this story. Curious though as to why you skipped over the juicy part when Lori pleasured herself with Ann? That was a little bit of a let down as you were building up to it and then just skipped to the next morning.
Not the end of the world though, the smothering and crushing her with her foot was great. Have no idea how you will finish this story but I can see Lori getting carried away and ending Ann. Lori definitley gets drunk on power!
Hi Maximus,
Sorry for the let down but as a writer sometimes it’s better to leave scenarios to the reader’s imagination. This gives the reader a chance to fill in the holes ß-(No pun intended) that is more pleasing to them. In this case, you may want Lori to do something with Ann different than what you read; which also could be a let down. I’m confident that as an amateur writer that I can’t be as descriptive as your imagination.
Second reason was because the chapter was WAY longer than I wanted it to be. I know, that was lazy of me. I hadn’t been able to write and post on this story in months and I didn’t want the readers on this site think that this was going to be another unfinished story. Also, since I like to put chapter teasers at the end of each chapter, I had to write another chapter after this one so I can have one prepared for you. I’m WAY behind schedule.
Third reason is because I had written some juicy scenes in previous chapters and I didn’t want to sound redundant.
As for how it will end…I’m not sure either. Although I have a completed outline, it changes as the store evolves. I have alternate endings on my outline to consider.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Dee
There are all sorts of things that the rich take for granted.
This a really great story, very well written and laid out. I think I have figured it out now though, I wasn't sure at first if this was the workings of her mother but now I am. I don't believe Nancy was killed, Holly didn't actually see it and the "blood" could have easily been something else, Nancy was a plant to further transform Holly from and uncaring brat to a compasionate caring person. The only thing now is I'm not sure if Susan will want to give up her pet or not when the lesson is over.