This is going to be a story centering around a changing world, a cautionary tale of where our society is headed...Be Warned.
wow slow down man. Youre making way too many stories at the same time and i love them all except total destruction, but you should focus on finishing the best (this one) first before starting another one. I am trying to write all chapters to my story first so i can post them all at the same time.
Author's Response:
Im like the joker in the sense that I have so many ideas in my head and start something new and not have an end plan for it. I know this is not a good trait for someone trying to tell a story but alas here I am. I have the groundwork in place to finish my stories my friend,it just may take me a while.Thanks for the input.
oh yeah shit just got real
Author's Response:
Yeah buddy,im going to be introducing other storylines soon.
good to have you back pal. Im sure looking forward for the next chapter.
you could make a sequel centering on Alli's and Ron's son and his ordeals with his cousin jennifer only that she's much more gentle with him as he's just a kid around 10 or 12 and she is also much more mature.
hey i got an idea. How about we do requests to each other? I ask you to do my request and in return i could do yours so you dont have to do it yourself and we only update if the other updates too. Deal?
youre shitting me. You answer almost all of your other reviewers but you ignore me completely even though i actively asked a question and rated the story 5 in all of my reviews including this one? Do you do that on purpose? !B(
Author's Response:
totally not on purpose, deathshinigami! sorry if i came off as ignoring you, but the truth is that i'm currently so enveloped in this story.... i post a 3000 word chapter almost everyday.... i saw your review about requests and realized i couldn't possibly do requests as well as keep continuing this story.
i intended on answering you when i could give u a good answer, when my story was done. it's still a very good possibility we could work together! so don't rule it out as a possibility my friend. let me finish this (very time consuming) story, and we can hopefully work somethin out. glad you like the story my friend!
'kay sorry for the outrage. But my first request would have been a sequel or spinoff to this one so i would have waited for you to finish it anyway XD. Btw anyone can join into the request thing if interested.
Author's Response:
sounds good friend, never done one before, but im open to ideas no doubt!
aw now i feel kinda sorry for jess.
Author's Response:
She can be mean, but she's still a human... somehow. thanks for reading!
you know what? This reminds me of pandora hearts. Glenn would be intimidating if his name wasnt glenn. Its like the most unintimidating name after leslie. My apologies to all glens and leslies in the world.
wait...what did jacks last line mean?
Author's Response:
He was being sarcastic in the last line. Unlike Ron, who sometimes explores his side of "enjoying" the torment of giantesses, Jack absolutely does not like it in away. But that'll be all the more fun, once he's play with some more...
Check back soon my friend
i noticed you wrote a very short chapter this time. Not complaining just pointing it out.
great! I started to miss Jessica. Glad shes back. And i hope ron is wrong about her being mean but hopefully shes still mischievous.
Author's Response:
It's hard to tell about the mean department, but her mischievous side definitely has not gone away :)
i hope this is the last arc so we can finally do that request thing. Still great.
Author's Response:
thanks a lot, deathshinigami. it willl certainly be over soon
i wonder if jessica would become more friendly if a tiny person actually asked her for help. Like a kid for example who got in contact with the drug and pleaded her to hide him from his abusive mother or something. What would be more satisfying for her? The power over the kid or the gratitude and trust the kid shows making her feel needed?
Author's Response:
This is interesting to think about, death. I believe Jessica's energy is clearly misplaced, like many young people. They need hobbies, interests, passions and such. Jessica may just need something or someone she can focus on in a positive light, so your suggestion is a good one. I'll try to touch on this in the future, I'm glad you mentioned it :)
Hello, I am just your adverage college student till one day a classmate has shrunk me, now this is my journal with my new goddess.
sweet. This is a great first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the first review, I was debating on the chapter format, with this post, eventually the current day will catch up in the story line as it's been hinted in the story line.
oh my god it finally happened. A disgaea gts story. Im a huge fan of those games and your work especially this and asagis storys. Can i ask you a favor as a fellow nippon ichi fan? Would you please write one where laharl gets shrunken by marjoly or etna so flonne has to find a cure but doesnt find one so laharl ends up being marjoly's/etna's toy forever?
i demand you include flame princess and marceline in this story
Author's Response: I have included Marceline but I don't know about Flame princess yet, it would be little hard to incorporate her into the story because Shes completely made out of flames and will burn Finn so I'm not 100 percent sure about flame princess yet
i only hope you dont include treetrunks and lumpy-space-princess. That would be disgusting even by adventure time standards. Just leave finn with princess doctor until flame princess arrives.
i'll say at the flame princess's
Author's Response: I have decided that I was most definitely incorporate her into this story, just not now. Be patient though. She will probably be in chapter five or six.
Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.
loved it but i hope you get back to gentle sometime as i liked that much more.
