A high school senior with no future is shrunken will he find an opportunity for a new life or a quick route to death.
I love how paige doesn't even have to threaten him she just is really, really persuasive..
Thats one of her best qualities, rather than threatening Kevin when he disagrees she instead uses kindness and patience in addition to her physical power to mentally dominate and manipulate him into a position of submission.
Dont think that nobody is interested cuz I am VERY interesting in this story...I WANNA KNOW WHY KEVIN/JOSH'S GENES ARE A THREAT, AND I WANNA KNOW NAO!!! *huff* *puff* *wheeze* Im sorry about that...Im done.
Such enthusiasm!
anyways I can't quite reveal that information yet, but rest assured it's going to show up either in an upcoming chapter or the sequal to this story.
This story is awesome, recently raed through it to finish.
I'm glad you enjoyed it Gadget I hope I can count on your support for the sequel
A love story between a boy and a girl of different proportions in a multi-sized world.
This chapter was awesome, maybe do something like that with the main cast?...
Hallo:
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked the chapter. The main cast is taking things a little slow, since their personalities aren't as... "fiery" as the ones of these girls. But don't worry, they'll get there. Thanks again for reading.
Wholia.
This story is about Chris a high school geek down on his luck who moved to a small town from the city. His mom, dad and younger sister have just moved into the house his grandfather left them and now must try to make a new life here, but has he ever really had a real life?
Will Chris end up going down the path of light or be swallowed by darkness?
Find out in the Classified zone. :)
Nice update, hope to see more from this soon.
A Shrinking story. Your suggestions will be used in the next chapter. Just review what you'd like to see happen to tiny Dan, but, nothing too crazy.....
I agree with some of the reviewers here...When it comes to writting good smut most writters on this site cant even hold a candle to you!
Good start but no telling if this is gonna be gentle or not yet, so its kinda hard to suggest anything.
Gentle, mean, sour, or sweet... It's up to you, just tell me what 'you' would like to happen to you/ (Uh,uum) Dan, I mean....Ha, )
When most of the student body and faculty of Hayes High School are inexplicably shrunk, what will happen to them?
Chelsea Dewinter, finding herself still fully sized, knows the answer.
It's her.
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Congrats on finishing, not a fan of cruel stuff too much, but this was pretty well written, good job.
Not gonna lie, I still dont think Erica had any right to kidnap that man, I mean he was GONE, gone from their lives, it wasnt like he was sticking around and beating them every day...and even then...
The guy below me is right though, Erica is pretty creepy, she has a really messed up way of justifying her actions, and I can believe Ron of all people thinks this is okay! This story is getting very interesting again.
Ron may have a change in opinion, you'll see in the next chapter! Thanks for the great insight, Erica definitely struggles with what she is doing. Ron'll begin to wonder if he's done the right thing. Check back soon!
I don't know why but I feel like Allison is going to take Erica's side on this and they're gonna double team on Ron.
You really understand the characters, gadget. Well done, and I hope you like the new chapter
It seems to me that if Ron does try to save Jack they'll both turn on him, at least from how Allison has been acting, it seems she has a lot of beef with this guy as well.
Allison and Erica seem to really be ganging up in these chapters...
also, gadget I was adding a new chapter while you wrote this review. make sure you don't miss it my friend
Jessicas back to her old ways, she has her own tiny now and she, s still bothering Ron. Cant wait to see how bad Cassie is, I mean jessica is her friend so yea...
haha i think youll like how she is, gadget. Cassie has a twist to the way she treats little guys... shes got a bit of jessicas traits in her, but with her own unique views.. stay tuned!
I really like this story, yeah I hear the criticisms from the other reviewers on here, but I really have no real qualms with this other than the fact that Allison and Erica almost never listen to Ron until its too late, I would think they'd have learned their lesson by now. But here's the thing, Allison DID believe Ron about Jessica, but the way she believed him seemed kind of forced, after all this was the person that had doubted him sooooo many times before and she's just like "yeah I believe you"...I think it should have taken a bit more convincing from Ron to get her to believe him, its a bit inconsistent. Now that I read my review, it seems kind of contradictory, but I hope you can find some use from my criticism. Anyway, dude this is a great story and it has amazing chapters and "meh" chapters but for the most part its an excellent story!
thats great to here you are very much satisfied with the way these ever changing characters are being handeled, gadget. but its also great to hear your criticisms!
i've always had this problem hahaha. ill be writing it and ill be like fuck.... how is this going to be able to continue, when allison and erica are obviously gonna find out?
as a result, ive left them skeptical. ive used the "family" thing as a result, but its true, it cannot be excused away by love for a niece. shes mean, and they should certainly know it.
i too got tired of her not believing him, so i decided to let her believe him this time. i agree in that it was very quick, and very sudden, whereas ron in the past has tried OVER and over to convicne her, whereas now it took no effort. i wish i had gone about this better, and hopefully i will be able to in future chapters, perhaps even regarding this specific instance.
i hope you continue to be satisfied with the story my friend, i write it for you guys. check back tomorrow!!
Cassie is an awesome breath of fresh air for this story. She is sexier and gentler than Allison and truly seems to love Ron, I hope we get more chapter of her, even though Allison is bound to find out.
i think we'll see her again, gadget :) i hope she sticks around too
i guess it all depends on how ron will live now that jack is around.
check back soon my friend, ill try not to disappoint
Im starting to fear Cassie more than Jessica, she's really scary, a total yandare. At least with Jess you know what your getting into. This is a great chapter and Im loving where this is headed, it looks like Cass and Ron are going to be together for a while..
Yandare, i've never heard this before. I guess its cuz I'm not into anime, but the term can apply to many interesting characters in culture. I like that it has a name.
I can't confirm whether they will stay together or not, but they will definitely interact a lot in the future :)
I'm glad you brought this insight to me, as it really describes Cassie. Thanks for the review, gadget, and enjoy :)
In all honesty if I was Ron, Id be far more concerned with Jessica than Glenn, I mean she was threatening to eat him! Glenn only gonna call the cops.
you're right Gadget, between you and me, and whoever reads this review, he should definitely be concerned about her...
I guess I shoulda known that allison would do that to ron...it must boil him inside to think his own wife betrayed him like that...Great ending though a bit sudden...I suppose its only natural youd want to endthis sometime! Great job dude its been a wild ride! Nice way to add some cliffhanger at the end there...Im looking forward to whatever you have planned next!
thanks for following so closely like you have, gadget :) it helped a lot to know you guys looked forward to new chapters!
I'll try not too keep my time in between this story and the next too brief, cause I'm eager to hear you guys' response to my new stuff :)
Thanks so much again, my friend!
It looks like things are ramping up again!
you know it, gadget :) check back soon for more my friend!
This chapter was great, and she was very nice and bubbly to Ron despite doing it against his will. The scary part is that it happened shortly after she killed a man with no remorse and a big smile on her face...Despite what she did to jack Im enamoured with her character, shes really loves Ron and is super playful with him, now comes the good part...she was willing to kill Jack how long before she does something horrible to Ron as well! Great chapter man, I loved every second of this one!
So glad to hear it gadget :). You're right about everything you said, and I hope I conveyed this message well enough in the chapters for every reader to also notice and feel. You really understand the characters I've noticed, so please continue to read and review, I enjoy your insight :) Thanks again and enjoy my friend!
Wow, I dont think Jack deserved that...Holy crap Cassie became an evil monster in such a short time.
You're right, she did. Cassie really plays the "inferior" best friend to the popular girl at school, in that she'll do a lot to maintain the friendship. But really, Cassie isn't inferior, and it's too bad high school can drive people to feel pressured by their so called "friends". Not saying every insecure high school girl would kill a little man if their bitchy friend asked them to haha, but it's a very VERY extreme example of the pressures of high school bullshit.