I love where this is going. Unaware, feet, and a story that is interesting. Please continue writing this.

Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Beautiful chapter.  Not enough authors explore how injuries can occur while tiny.  I love where the story is heading, with the protagonist out of luck and out of hope.  Keep on writing!

Beautiful writing style.   A lot of the stories on this site are written so poorly, but yours is a delight to read.  Keep it up!

Do you know what amazes me and impresses me the most about your writing?

No need to guess; I'll tell you.  It's your ability to write  both story like A Fly on The Wall, with its humor and Douglas Adams style jokes, and this story right here, with powerful emotions and palpable terror.  I'm not afraid to admit that I'm extremely envious of that.  

Everytime I see a new story from you, I can't help but think, "Oh goody!  Sickpuppies updated!"  Please, keep up the good work.

This is incredible. You make being small and unnoticied so real to me. I just love how well you use characters and details to the fullest, keeping Mike in perpetual hell, and the reader in perpetual bliss.

I've loved every single chapter here, and just cannot wait for the next one.

Such a good story. I love your style, and it's always nice to see a writer do something unique and interesting.

Woo, you're back!  Of all the authors on this site, you're the one who writes exactly what I'm into.

A good first chapter. Established the characters, the situation, and the conflict without boring the reader. I'm excited for whatever comes next, because with you I know it'll be great.

Woah.

When I started this story, I wasn't sure I care for it. I'm not a big fan of playthings and it was a rather sudden start. But within sentences the excitement ramped up, and it never let go.

This was a ride. I've rarely if ever read such a detailed yet well paced insertion story, and despite the idea of repetition that you presented, it never got boring.

My only complaint, and this is a personal preference more than a blight on your writing ability, is that I'd prefer it to have stayed unaware. That's obviously not where you took it and I still think you did an incredible job, so don't take that as any sort of actionable criticism. You did extremely well.

I'm loving it so far, and I'm excited to see where it'll go from here.

Do you plan on keeping it unaware? I absolutely adore unaware stories, but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea.

WOW.

Such a cute story, it made me dust off this ancient, forgotten account just to tell you how much this story warmed my heart, and even made me feel a little bit seen? I'm tall and trans too, and it was so nice to see you treat Sophie as a person and not just a fetish object.

If I'm being completely honest, this story isn't the kind I usually go for; I prefer unaware, and I usually enjoy stories where the tiny is having just an awful time. Yet, despite the fact that this story is the polar opposite of my usual tastes, I couldn't put it down. The characters were so human, the relationship was so sweet, the dynamic was unique and fun, and it all came together to make something I loved.

I'm looking forward to more of this!