Penname: TarTar [Contact] Real name: Taren
Member Since: June 25 2013
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Lollipop by whahuh7 Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

An overly curious college girl finds a strange box on her roommate's desk that, unbeknownst to her, is filled with thousands of tiny people. If only she weren't so clumsy....


Categories: Crush, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7196 Read Count: 108733
[Report This] Published: February 12 2008 Updated: February 19 2008
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Face Time

Awesome story. I hope it gets finished.

Summary:

A girl keeps a tiny city in her room and uses it to satisfy her own carnal desires.  She lets her friend in on her secret and worlds change...


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10113 Read Count: 265062
[Report This] Published: June 15 2011 Updated: August 11 2013
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome! I'm really glad you chose to continue this story.

uTopia by gerald Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

The last attempt to save humanity has become hell for its inhabitants. See how three woman friends are trying to alter the balance of powers for the greater good or their own benefit.


Categories: Crush, Gentle, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169493 Read Count: 157007
[Report This] Published: May 08 2013 Updated: November 18 2013
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 25 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Nicole – request and reunion.

I like chapter 29.



Author's Response: Yeah, me too - it really shows the emotions and experiences of those firsts, while touching on some mothers plans and exposing parts of the Erica's...

Wait a minute - You meant the 19th chapter, didn't you!

Summary:

This is the first new story from me in a few years. This story is dedicated to all the Star Trek fans who may be out there. I think Star Trek fan fiction on this site is severely lacking, and hopefully this will help to somewhat address that problem. I understand that this is not for everyone, but hopefully it will at least appeal to some. If you are a Star Trek fan you might be able to understand where I'm coming from with this. I also hope that in doing this I might help inspire others to create similar works of Star Trek fan fiction here with size changing and all that. So anyway, check it out, and let me know what you think.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Mature (40-49), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Maternal, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Challenges: Startrek story
Challenges: Startrek story
Challenges: Startrek story
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2183 Read Count: 12146
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: June 25 2013
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Why would they be different? And how do you know we'll be safe there?

To be continued...?

To be continued...! Fixed that for you (just kidding). I agree that this is not a common story. Star Trek, Tera size, quality of writing (it is good :)), all of these things make this story quite rare indeed. Which is why I believe it should be continued! Though I understand if you choose never to come back to this. I've never written anything myself so it's not my place to demand anything. But if you are ever thinking about coming back to an older story, this one has my vote!

Summary:

Many years into the future mankind has developed the ability to space travel to distant solar systems and collonize new worlds. The Aura solar system, the first system collonized by man, has been having some slight troubles with their sun which will soon be going nova, destroying their planets. However, the plan designed to save them goes very wrong and ends horribly for trillions of people.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4655 Read Count: 135612
[Report This] Published: April 17 2014 Updated: June 29 2022
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: SOA (Save our Aura system)

Are you kidding? This story is definitely worth continuing. There are far too few stories like this around, let alone stories that are written this well. I'm sorry to hear about christiawi, but please keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I’ll keep writing. This story is so wild with its scale, I find it amusing and entertaining to imagine and write. I’m having fun at least. Yea, it sucks that Chritiawi won’t be adding to the story any more. I was really hoping to have some fun with the improv that would come with two authors writing, but whatever. At least he gave me the chance to expand on his story. Thanks for the comment TarTar!

Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: November 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: SOA (Save our Aura system)

He deleted all of his chapters, which unfortunately is all of them but the first one. Not sure why. This story is one of my all time favorites

Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20967 Read Count: 177778
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures

Amazing! I wonder... is it possible for Nina to vary the sizes of the people as she pleases? I'm thinking like.. maybe would it be be possible to make them so small that there is, say, an entire city in the box? Also, I may have missed it, but how old is Nina? I caught that she's younger than the senior, but by how much?



Author's Response:

I havent written it as such yet, but once I've made it past the story outline I have so far I could certainly make it so. The idea crossed my mind, and I think it would be a good way to expand the story scope. As for her age, I haven't exactly pegged it down anywhere other than being on the lower end of the age category. Tis the sort of thing I'll leave up to the reader's preference and the story's progression. 

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Passion In Common.

Thank you.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Snack

Planets, awesome! I'm glad you came back to this! I think Nina's first idea in round 1 was pretty great, and the pudding idea was cool, too. Also this is a little random but I just had a thought that it would be funny if Nina imagined Hime's brother being on the next planets... Hime would never know haha

Summary:

A petite woman from Brobdingnag agrees to housesit for a friend who is out of town, and she discovers a room that usually is off limits. She is not petite to the Lilliputians in this room.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4548 Read Count: 22087
[Report This] Published: June 27 2014 Updated: June 27 2014
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Ariadne and the Lilliputians

Thjs is great! The massive size difference between the two races always makes these stories fun to read. The end of the first chapter has "more chapters" written all over it!

Invader by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

A giant girl stumbles upon a planet previously undiscovered by her people and decides to explore. That planet happens to be Earth. 

I am so terrible with writing summaries.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 897 Read Count: 8726
[Report This] Published: August 03 2014 Updated: August 03 2014
Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: August 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't let your other stories stop you from writing this one! I'm curious to see what she does in addition to the shoe thing you hinted at.. And as for her size, I say the bigger the better. I look forward to your future chapters; it has a good start so far!

Summary:

A bus full of high schoolers shrinks


Categories: Feet, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7585 Read Count: 49024
[Report This] Published: August 28 2014 Updated: September 09 2014
Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: August 28 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I agree that a little more than feet would be nice, but it's your story. What you have now is already really good.

Summary:

The world of Erya is populated by billions upon billions of humans but despite their numbers they are subservient to a group of Goddesses. Some try and resist while others simply forfeit their lives to service; either way, it doesn't end well for them. This story follows the Goddesses themselves as well as the poor mortals, who are little more than playthings to the whims of the Titans.


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19840 Read Count: 43474
[Report This] Published: October 03 2014 Updated: August 24 2016
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is cool cool cool! (Sorry, I had to..)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to respond!

Summary:

In the near future, the United States goes into social and economical collapse, but a group of 50 wealthy families and individuals decide to leave and live on 50 manmade planets while taking from the earth to support themselves, but it turns out these planets are nothing more than tiny spheres in a bunker and things become grim when they are discovered by a teenage girl who has devilish and sexy ideas for the tiny planets. Living in the boring slums, she now finds a way to have fun and enact her revenge by subjecting billions to her whims and to make things worst she is not opposed to having friends and family join in on the fun. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, BBW, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42619 Read Count: 180140
[Report This] Published: January 16 2015 Updated: May 20 2016
Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2016 Title: Chapter 10: The Tomboy Gets Her Revenge

  Soo glad you finished this! I will start off by saying I thought it seemed a little rushed the closer it got to the end, but overall I really really liked this story. The Planet Count sticking around to the end was a nice touch. Mass-shrinking micro stories always have my interest because the events of the story can affect literally billions of people, but remain a mystery to "the rest" of the world. It really makes me wonder, if an ordinary person were in the situation that these girls were in and they could do whatever they wanted with no one possibly knowing, would they behave as they always have? Or would they reveal a totally new due to the circumstances? Your story is a good example of this, and the sad fact that these shrunken-planet stories are so few makes me like this story even more.

  Anyway, I hope you keep writing, either another story in this genre, another story involving Raquel and friends somehow, or just whatever the hell you feel like writing. I'm glad you stuck with this story to the end like you said you would. You're pretty good at stories on the micro-planet scale, and that's something you don't see that much.

  Cheers!

Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: November 10 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Susan's Foot Massage

Really looking forward to the next chapter, especially after that cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am currently working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2015 Title: Chapter 7: From Germ to Giantess

Darn door bell!

I like how Raquel just grabs a planet and tosses it in her mouth like no big deal haha.

As always, looking forward to the future chapters! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am already starting on the next chapter and I hope to bring it out soon.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chloe vs Emerson

I'm glad that Chloe is the type of character that really wants to have some fun with the planets! I'm sure that she would love for Raquel to let her have some more planets of her own.

Also I wonder if Raquel actually had some candy in her room, or if it was her plan all along to let Chloe find the Elite 50 ;)

As for Raquel, perhaps she needs some more alone time with some planets after being interrupted before... Maybe she should get some tips from Reika and her experience? hint hint ;)

Anyway, do your own thing. Please don't stop doing what you're doing!



Author's Response:

Making Chloe have fun was what I was going for. I didn't want her to be like the other girls and destroy the planets for cruel and/or sexual reasons, since I didn't want a character this young to be sexualized. This is why I decided to make her just as destructive, but make her reasons more out of sheer enjoyment.

If you are hoping for Raquel to have a similar experience with the planet, then you will be happy about what happens in the future. I hope you continue to support this story till it's end and I will try my hardest to make this story enjoyable.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: May 28 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Reika's Ritual of Pleasure

Also I thought I should add that chapter 5 is my favorite so far. I like the way Reika thinks..



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. It wa one of my favorite chapters to write since including insertion and sexual acts is a pretty new thing for me to include in my writing and I think it turned out ok enough for someone to consider it a favorite chapter.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed
Date: January 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

I'm liking the start. Personally, I'd rather have it be more convenient than drag on forever, although that's not necessarily a bad thing if it is done well. Also, I agree that Raquel should be figuring out what the spheres are soon. Keep it up. I hope you can stick with this story to the end!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment and Raquel will know what the spheres are next chapter, which is when the real fun begins. I will try my hardest to keep this story going, while trying to keep a decent standard of quality. i hope you enjoy what comes next and that you stick with the story to the end.