Penname: Cloud [Contact] Real name: None
Member Since: September 21 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just a fan, not an author.


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Summary:

Edit (2/24/17): I'm sorry to say that I don't think I'll be updating the story here any longer.  I'm already updating it on another GTS website (I'm not sure if I'm allowed to say which, but I'm sure most folks reading this probably know of that one also), and with so many chapters, corrections and changes are a pain in the butt.  It seems silly to bother with both, so feel free to check it out in the future on the other major GTS site.  Thanks for reading.

Synopsis: You know the drill.  Pandemic story; men are (largely) untouched but women grow to 9-14' and have increased sexual appetites.  Where I've tried to set the story apart is in building a deep relationship between the two primary characters, Alex Gray and Elise Pierce.  My goal is a nuanced approach to revealing the impacts of the changing society on that relationship and others as the world shifts radically from male to female dominance.  Lots of detailed worldbuilding and a pretty heavy dose of romance.  Slow growth through much of the first half(ish) of the story.  This is primarily a New World Order story in the Mini GTS realm.  There is (limited) BE, multiple sexual situations with characters of various ages (none are minors), and most encounters are gentle.  There are some violent/slave encounters toward the latter part of the story, but if you're reading for these, best look elsewhere, as they're not going to be the primary focus.  Expected length is around 90-100k words. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing Woman, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83648 Read Count: 242816
[Report This] Published: February 24 2015 Updated: February 22 2017
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: July 01 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Dinner Date

I really enjoy your world building chapters, even more then the sexual ones. I say a mixture of Alex, followed by Elise, and maybe a little from the third girl for a change in pov.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to know how the various POVs are received.  I've toyed with adding a third "misc" POV from time to time.  Maybe I could work that in.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: October 03 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Penance

I await your return, I'll just go into hibernation, and I'm sure another chapter will be out by May or June. In all seriousness, a long time coming this chapter, and it was almost worth the wait, if it wasn't for this gnawing that happens at the end of every chapter.



Author's Response:

Haha!  I deserved that.  I will definitely be releasing a few more chapters soon.  I'm hoping for the conclusion to this two-parter within the next couple days - its about half written now.  Seriously though, it's definitely motivating to know that someone cares about the story.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: May 29 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - New Life

My hibernation has ended. Many chapters have been added, and each one seems to be building on the struggles the separated couple will face. Elise and her desperate sexual urges, resulting in a lack of work ethic, yet leading to more aggressive behaviour. Alex and his forced servitude, the possible erosion of his humanity, and definite destruction of his self-control. What if one day he is taken off the drug, yet its effects have permanently addled his mind. Or perhaps Elise joins the Matriarch to find Alex, and becomes warped by their practices. The desperate tragedy of their story has so many different spirals. That your ray of light, your happy ending, seems like sunlight trying to shine at the seafloor.

 

Tl;dr

Nice updates, cool tragedy so far, can't wait for the happy bit.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  Yes, it was always my intention to have a bit of a rough period for the two of them.  Like you said, I've promised a happy ending, so I hope it delivers.  Sometimes you don't realize what you have before it's taken from you...  and all that.  The couple's trials won't last forever, that I can say.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 15 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

I haven't read your update yet, but I just want to say, that on every story I've ever reviewed, most of them have stopped writing after I review them, and I always felt like that curse would never be broken.



Author's Response:

Sorry Cloud! I do feel like a dirt bag when I let people down that actually enjoy my work. I'm really sorry it worked out that way in the past, bit I can assure you I've already started to write the next chapter, and have outlines for the remaining 6-7 chapters until the conclusion. After so many let downs, I probably shouldn't *promise* that I'll finish it this "go around", but that is my goal, for certain.

 

I have ideas for another story is really like to get to, but I don't want to start a new story until I finish my previous work. 

 

Thanks so much for reading, and sending word. It really makes it all worthwhile. :-)

Summary:

 

  A love story across time and space, four couples from different universes are thrown together. All of them must make sense of where they are  and why are they even there in the first or risk being trapped forever.  

 

 Lancealot501 is the true author but due to account problems I'm uploading it for him with the pair of us as co-authors. 


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5390 Read Count: 18756
[Report This] Published: March 29 2015 Updated: June 08 2016
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: April 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait for the next chapter of this story, I don't even have the patience in me to sit and review it, I'm too hyped.

Summary:

Vincent finds himself awakened in a strange new world in which not only does magic exist but the men are winged and the women measure their height not in centimeters but hundreds of meters. This isn't the only difference between the men and women of this world as he discovers not only are men the much smaller of the species they're also greatly outnumbered. Now he must try to adapt to this new culture and not only wonder about how he could return home but whether it's worth the risk to himself and his world.


Categories: Sci Fi / Fantasy, Giantess, Body Exploration, Gentle, Adventure, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72818 Read Count: 90308
[Report This] Published: April 25 2015 Updated: June 23 2015
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: May 06 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see more of this story. You've brought out so much life in your characters, and the world building has been superb. I love ariels current behavior and attitude, along with their interaction. Please write more of this story!

Omega: Touch by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A college student discovers her three-inch-tall best friend is in trouble and decides to take matters into her own hands.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8746 Read Count: 43299
[Report This] Published: June 02 2015 Updated: June 26 2015
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: June 02 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Attention

Ah, what a way to introduce a blind character(right?). Ackbar said we'd enjoy this story, and he couldn't have been more right. Thank you for the chapter, it was awesome reading it.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it. And yes, Lucy is blind.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: June 16 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Mission

Some random text at the end wanted my comment; I feel wanted b25;. I hope the backup is omega company of one sort or another, it feels like it is.



Author's Response:

Always feel wanted! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: June 22 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Back-up

Ooh, a character from another omega story, I love the reference. My heart pounds at the drama this chapter! Lucy displaying the fury of one thousand suns here, and I can already feel 2 endings. The first is a happily ever after ending with love and cozy cottages, and the other is tragic and heartbreaking yet fitting nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Glad you appreciated seeing Lexi and Bridget. And you'll see which ending is correct in the next chapter.

Summary:

Dean's happy highschool life is over and he has to grown up faster than he planned, while his friends are off to college he must stay and work to help the family. When he upsets the wrong girl he quickly finds that his friends leaving is the least of his problems.

 

It's a slow shrink, but it's immediately unaware which I hope makes up for that.


Categories: BBW, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10812 Read Count: 95149
[Report This] Published: August 01 2015 Updated: May 30 2016
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: August 26 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Sleeping Rough

I hope you don't give up on this story, it's a very fun read, with a type of unaware I've never read about. Please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: June 01 2016 Title: Chapter 6: A touching moment

Keep going, I like the way it's progressing so far.

Micronauts by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

In the not so distant future humanity conquers the speed of light, but at a cost. Anyone wanting to travel in hyperspace must shrink to nearly microscopic proportions. A deep space flight program is created and the new Micronauts are humanity's most extreme explorers. This story follows one Micornaut's journey to the stars.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184302 Read Count: 377879
[Report This] Published: May 26 2016 Updated: August 11 2021
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: January 11 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Executive Decisions

Tommy the control freak is finally finding out what it means to be completely helpless. His lack of any control is so thrilling and upsetting at the same time. Marias dominance and at the same time, helplessness against Bill was gorgeous, I was in bills situation the entire chapter. Just about to get laid, when I'm cockblocked by someone smaller than a cock. Tommy just isn't smart enough to be a micronaut. He's obviously socially inept beyond any of his peers.

Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 471082
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: September 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Daughter's Graduation

Your story has realistic dynamics, and an enjoyable cast. Feels trp, but could just be your amazing social abilities.

Summary:

Chris is an average teenager except for one small detail, he stopped growing at a very young age. Now a 19 year old boy who just graduated high school and only 3 feet 1 inch tall, his life is about to change forever when he gets a babysitter.

Note: No growing or shrinking happens in this story. Things might start relatively G and PG, but might evolve into more R rated situations so I'll put an R rating now just in case.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26907 Read Count: 54398
[Report This] Published: July 25 2017 Updated: January 03 2018
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: July 26 2017 Title: The Babysitter

This story was already on this site previously, I don't know if you're the original writer, but this is where the story was last time. Will you be releasing newer chapters?

Summary:

An inventor looking to get ahead in life accidentally helps create a phenomenon which will rebalance the world of men and women, and in the process, turn him into the perfect slave for his terrifying and beautiful boss Ms. Hoshoku.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25622 Read Count: 151624
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: October 04 2017
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: September 23 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

When I opened up the site today, I was hoping to see a new chapter of this story. I like that there was another. I like the focus on ass in this story, relative to the feet that I often see in your works. I hope it continues in this direct, with more interaction between ben and other co-workers. I can see a future where men are the more vied for gender. With fewer of them around, at a lesser stature. Becoming second class citizens, yet, the minority.



Author's Response:

The action focus of this one is definitely much different than my usual. The rest of the story will focus a bit more on solely Ben and Hoshoku, however, though we will get a bit more of the societal alteration as well

MAJOR/minor by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Izzellah Ivory struggles to cope as a minority in a world of superior beings.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99115 Read Count: 99661
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: May 18 2018
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 12 2017 Title: MAJOR/minor

Like every good writer on this site, I'm happy to tell you that you've passed initiation. You can now be officially admitted to the "Left unfinished Army". A ttruly formidable force filled with beautiful and alluring writing that will always have a cliff hanger, and will never truly be a completed work. Welcome my friend, your unsatisfying ending will rank you in with other legends of your craft in a splendid display of your cliff hanger arts.



Author's Response:

Uuuummm. *looks at MrSirk's profile and sweats* I guess I got in twice! 

Seriously though I have experience with unfinished stories. I'm kind of trying to hold myself to not doing that lately. MAJOR/minors not over I actually stiill have the itch to keep writing. Just stopping for a bit. Problem is I have a ton of other ideas I want to do but I can't do them at the same time or I'll get distracted. MAJOR/minor, the sequel to Small (who knows how long that will be?), I have an idea for actual giantess story with destruction in it. Well there are a couple of ideas for that......You see my problem here. I'll probably complete MAJOR/minor first because I don't like the taste of having two stories going at the same time. I'll be deciding this in the meantime.....probably. 

Summary:

Based on NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe; some characters may or may not appear in both stories :)

Old friends return to Old Creek and Alejandro his put in a burning dilemna. He'll have to decide how he stand sexually, mentally and what he see for his future, all while dealing with the most massive woman he's ever met....


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Maternal, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100306 Read Count: 133120
[Report This] Published: December 07 2017 Updated: January 22 2018
Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 08 2017 Title: Chapter 2: So good to see you !

Very nice story. I'm deeply interested to see how Alejandro and Shannon develops. We have Shannon, who seems like the type that would be unaware of the deeper emotional range minors can have. I hope to see some discovery, conflict, but most of all, some gentle giantess stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Chapter 3 will come out this evening, perhaps with the fourth, and our two main characters will begin their interactions. So far, inspiration is here, which is great ! The proper giantess stuff will truly begin in Chapter 4.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 08 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Panic stricken

You weren't kidding, I just refreshed and chapter 4 was already out.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, it was almost over, really.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 10 2017 Title: Chapter 7: History lesson

Thanks for the new chapter, I'm always excited to see a brand new chapter of this story to read.



Author's Response:

You're welcome ! I'm glad your liking it ^^

Reviewer: Cloud Signed
Date: December 11 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Special : The Family

I was surprised, I didn't think the family had such a connection between each other.



Author's Response:

Well, in my mind, Ofelia truly is a mama bear, even more so after the Incident. Jules is also quite proud of his minor boy and has the utmost confidence in him. But the parents have a it harder to truly express it to their son. Sometimes, a parent may love a kid really much but still struggle to express it.