Here we see the other side of Shannon, her private side. I would never have taken her for being a sadistic hard to handle lover for Majors, she seemed dominant but never so much that she would harm others. To see a hidden side is interesting, it changes the way I'll think about their relationship, and it's future. I had to re-read the chapter to make sure I not only understood the twist but to make sure that I was reading her delusions right. She's so sure of their relationship, that she is already imagining the bond sex. Imagining it, and losing control was a great setup. This was a beautifully charged chapter, I cannot wait for how Alejandro will cope as well as what Shannon will do.

I agree with NoStory, pretty sure the elite will be the younger sibling. Hell, she might even ascend naturally and become mega.

A continued story, welcome back.

I wonder how info about his daughter slipped Shannons notice. Because we know t3 has a chance of dominating even the strongest wills. A major without experience can accidently give commands without noticing their influ3nce, what will a trained t3 be like? How will this become a conflict between the new love Shannon and Alejandro share? Will Shannons secrets be revealed through Alejandros mind? Will there be conflict between the daughter and the minor rights movement? School feels like a.way to keep Shannon and Alejandro apart, and new conflict to arise, but it doesn't feel needed. I don't really see what sort of character growth will occur in a school s3tting for our characters. It just seems to pull unnecessary conflict into the story.

Excellent chapter, I didn't even realize I hit the end until your end of chapter note hit. Im glad the bonding works out for you story wise. I know in its own way, bonding can eliminate too much story if its abused. It's still beautiful

I'm not a fan of the story

Lovely description of Ashley so far. She had her first, and I really do love a gentle giant.

This is great, I'm interested in seeing some incest, or what she does with the planet such as power plays. I think it'd be swell if she was super infatuated with her son, like she's shown so far.

Beautiful story Jacksmith, I was always a tad sad that we didn't see the romantic relationship between the beta and omega of the original. This fills in that void. I'm not really a big foot type, so I've had a lot more fun with this work.

I will be incredibly sad if this story becomes a cuckold/tragedy between Ben and Claire.

Ben made a mistake, but at the same time, can he really be blamed for being raped? Is it considered rape in this new worlds culture or do betas have less than human rights in legal cases?

I personally enjoy love/romance/gentle more than I do violent. I would be heartbroken if Claire falls out of love with Ben due to the size difference.