Hi FTH detectives!
I prefer gentle stories with lots of power dynamic fun, not a fan of violence or sociopaths. I love to chat about writing so if you want to discuss anything shoot me a line at realtime.k62@gmail.com.
When his father brings home an advanced piece of machinery from his job to store in the attic, Kyle and his friend John can't resist the temptation of firing it up and trying it out for themselves.
Well you've got my curiosity
Brad is an avarage 17 year old that lives with his 13 year old sister Ann, 19 year old sister Suzy, and his mother. One night, while Brad is watching TV, he hears a noise out side his window. When we goes to check it out he is flashed with a bright light and gets knocked out. When he comes to, he finds himself only six inches tall. The only help is Ann, but will she help or will she subject Brad to the Sister's Revenge?
I will not be adding any more to this story because it is beyond saving. Please enjoy what it does contain.
Hi, congrats on starting your first story. It's a solid start and I'll certainly be keeping my eyes open to see how it goes.
I enjoyed the level of detail and action that you included, enough to make it feel like a scene (as opposed to just a dialogue script) but not so much to get bogged down.
The only big suggestion I'd give at this point is to run your story through a spell checker before you publish, as there are a few easy to catch typos.
Ok thank you and I promise I'll do the best I can to add chapters quickly
The story of two police fellow guards that find themselves involved in an apparently routine operation. The story of Coco and Leo...and how they managed their lives after that operation.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Well written.
Thanks !! I hope I can make an interesting following
Angered by his girlfriend's slovenly ways and stinking feet, James decides to create a list of house rules. Abbey doesn't take this particularly well and decides its time for James to get a little perspective
Neat, great start.
A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking. Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …
Well you have my attention
Glad to hear it, thanks.
Really looking forward to the tipping point when Kyra becomes the taller one.
Well, she was already taller last chapter, technically, but I agree she hadn't really quite 'taken control' yet.
Getting really fun.
yup :)
Emily and Casey are two witches who are more like sisters then friends. Being bored, they decide to play a horrible game on a young girl where they shrink her entire social circle one by one until she goes insane. How will she fare in this mind game?
Huh, interesting. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
In a world where size determines what kind of person you are, what happens when an innocent person ends up the wrong size?
Love the Jaz dynamic.
Then you'll probably really love the next few chapters I have written out
Very well written, and a neat twist.
Hey, great chapter. Nice to see that society's attitudes on shrunk people seem to vary.
The story of a boy's life with his giant family.
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Cool first chapter, I look forward to reading more.
In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.
Really love the concept, this seems like a really neat dynamic. It will be a ton of fun seeing Jennifer watch her old life from such a pathetic perspective. Hope she gets to meet her friends.
Thanks for reading! This story is actually just going to be Jennifer and YouPet focused, but people seem to like the concept so far, so I may bring them back at some point depending on how this story is received and throw in variations like that.
I'm not a big fan of brutality stories, but this is a hell of a well done version of that genre. You do a great job of selecting which detail to focus on to really connect the reader to little Jennifer's experience.
I would love to see some conversations between the two Jennifers in between torture scenes.
I appreciate the review. And when it comes to conversations, the remaining chapters actually do just that.
She relished the sight of her fingers’ individual shadows moving and intermittently blocking out the light for the little copy of herself. So much power, and it was all hers"
God, I love this detail.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it!
Ash has been waiting for her friends to arrive all morning, but just as they arrive she is struck by a fast acting genetic disorder which reduces its victims to the size of a cockroach.
Based off of a 'New World Order' style concept where certain people are genetically susceptible to sudden shrinkage, these people being immediately stripped of their common rights and privileges are reduced to basically sub-human property for whoever finds them.
::This is likely to be quite a long story for me as 1: i'm enjoying writing it in detail, and 2: there's going to be quite a lot of body play and each segment is likely to get its own chapter.::
Hope you like it ^_^
Chapter 3 is a lot of fun, I really enjoyed Emma's conflict.
Thanks ^_^ I'm happy you enjoyed it, peer pressure is a wonderful thing ;)
In this direct sequel to Lucretia's Night Out, Lucy and her shrunken boyfriend Sam must deal with the aftermath of the previous evening, as well as new challenges presented by Lucy's power.
Wonderful conversation between Sam & Lucy in Chapter 4. It's very satisfying (and hot) to see Lucy embrace her role as Sam's goddess after the long ordeal.
Heck of a chapter 12. I was actually a little dissapointed when the kidnapping took place, I was much more interested in seeing the threesome develop than I was in reading about Kim the psycho.
But this was a great telling of the "lunatic torturer giantess" scene, and I think seeing Jennifer fight for Olivia really cements their new relationship. Very exciting and well told action.
The whole Kim scene was—like you said—a way to cement Jen and Olivia’s relationship. It was all planned since the start. The whole, ‘enemies become friends’ trope. Glad you liked the story. Someday I’ll finish it.
What happens when a low earning university student seeking a quick and uplifting buck signs their name on the dotted line for admittance as a test subject into an undefined and mysterious four month Cosmolex research program?
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Very well written, this scenario is really enticiing and I'm looking forward to the action.
Thanks! I appreciate that, and I'm glad you're enjoying it as well.
Likewise, I'm hoping the action will come soon! But I want to have a slight build up to it to help also get the proper atmosphere out there. :3
Thanks for the review!
