Paige should dip Darren in something fruity and let Laura suck on Darren mistaking him for a piece of candy. He would look like a grape!

Perhaps, Paige can mummify Darren and only leave his nose and limbs free. Then she gives the mummified Darren to Laura convincing her that it is a vibrator that you can insert in a vagina.

Maybe Paige wants to humiliate Rob even further by putting Darren in Laura's underwear thinking that Rob is still in there. Paige could pull the rear of Luara's panties and drop Darren in and use the excuse of checking the tag for Laura's underwear size.

Even better, we can have Laura and Paige have some contact yoga and when Laura is on top of Paige in some random move, Paige could quikcly open Laura's panties from the front side and drop Darrem in. Darren's presence would make Laura aroused and then Laura begins getting hot and Paige enjoys it thinking that Rob is stil in Laura's ass.

Lots of possibilites my friend.

That is so hot! Im so glad that Rob ended up in front of her vagina.

It reminds me of the threesome that happened earlier in this story, but this time, Rob has a front row seat of the action!

Hopefully Rob ends up inside her pussy.

If this was "the Wrath of Don" what is the next chapter gonna be, becuase it seems as though Don didnt do anything and the "wrath" is gonna happen in the next chapter.

I can picture Don doing Laura anal, and Laura in the meantime is gushing "lady fluid" on Rob, and soon, her throbbing vagina sucks Rob inside it!

Anyway, great chapter!

Yes! Thank you!

With your last story, many people wanted Ron to be trapped inside Erica while she was at work, but then she realized it was Ron before shoving him inside her.

Im glad that this time you went with this path with Laura's obliviousness and now Rob is stuck inside her panties!

I hope that Rob gets accidently inserted inside Laura's asshole or pussy. That would be really interesting.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

The last few chapters felt as though little time has passed. Paige captures Rob, Laura rescues him and they have sex. Then while having sex, Paige indirectly interrupts it. Either thats a long time for sex or Paige just got revenge with a few minutes of Laura rescueing Rob the first time.

To be honest, I dont like where this next chapter is going, becuase now Laura will be sad for a long time and thats not fun. Hopefully, she bonded enough to Rob, that she could tell that the blood on the floor is not from Rob and that Paige's immaturity is shown by believing that all tinies have the same dead bodies. Laura should be smart about.

Lastly, we keep seeing a back and forth between Paige and Laura. No sense in direction yet. I enjoy the chapters of a sexy MILF, and you like the chapters with a cruel teenager.

Perhaps to solve this, we can have Paige be cruel and literally tape Rob to Laura's panties, or laura's high heels, so Paige enjoys her cruelty by using her mom against Rob. Paige can put Rob in so many places that Luara uses. This way, we get to witness Paige's cruelty and the sexiness of Laura.

First off, this is my first review posted on this website, although I have been reading these stories for a while.

My favorite story was your Giantess wife story, but after reading this chapter, I think I have found a new favorite.

I love your theme of the gentle giantess, and I enjoy witnessing it through Lauren.

I would like to see Ron and and Lauren have plenty of one on one action in a gentle way. Keep it up.

Lastly, since this is my first review ever on this website, Im going to spill out all my ideas. (I hope this all involves Lauren).

For mouth, Sucking on body, perhaps for lubrication or as a lollipop, giantess kisses, maybe applying lipstick to Ron and sticking him to her mouth.
For breasts, tucking in between breasts, inserted in bra cup strapped to nipple, gentle breastfeeding maybe to complement Laurens caring instinct.
For feet, Placing them in shoes and shopping with him, trapped in lingerie or pantyhose while Lauren puts them on.
For panties, well panties are my favorite part. I would enjoy Lauren having Ron in her panties and working with him inside. Maybe she could tie him to her underwear. Shoving him inside her is nice, especially the details, like having his head stick out. Or you can surprise me since the panties are the sexiest thing I look for in these stories.

Thank you,
-TomSpeedy

Author's Response:

Glad to hear you like this one more than my old one!

Mouthplay and rubbing. I like it. I hope Rob goes through a similiar treatment that Gary had with Laura.

Maybe Laura can set Rob up. She can set him on a nightstand and put here underwear on the floor next to it. She recently used the underwear so it is still sticky. The. Laura can "accidently" knock Rob off the nightstand, but in her head she purposley knocked him down. Rob then falls into her underwear and gets stuck, he tries get free but fails. Next, Laura as clever as she is, playfully wonders where her underwear is and notices it on the floor. She picks it up and starts to put it on knowing that Rob is in her trap, but Rob thinks Laura is olbivious to his postion. Laura slowly puts it on giving Rob a little fear, but then Rob calls out and she responds acting as if she just noticed. Laura then playfully thinks Rob wanted to be in her pants and she accepts it by snuggly putting on her underwear. Rob still stuck in his position has to go through the day in her pants.

ThomThumb, you know you are a great writer if your stories give me all these crazy ideas. Maybe I should start my own soon. Anyway, excellent chapter. Im looking forward to the next.

Author's Response:

It sounds as though writing is up your alley, Tom! You have great ideas and the possibilities are endless when you write.

Excellent addition to the story. Tim seems smart and acts just like Rob unlike Gary.

Remember your "My marriage to a giantess" story? Well, one of my favorite scenes was when Erica misinterpreted Ron as her cruel husband and Erica put Ron through some punishents and she was unaware that it was Ron.

Perhaps a similar situation will occur with Laura? Maybe Tim escapes with Rob's clothes and Laura finds Tim and then.......the good stuff.

Also, It seems that always the main giantess in your stories dont have many sexy scenes. In your "My marriage to a giantess" story, Allison got fewer sexy stuff compared to Erica and Jessica. That was the only thing bothering me as I finished that story. However, in this story, the main giantess is the cruel one and Im glad she has few sexy scenes and the second gisntess Laura has the good parts. Hopefully it stays that way. I dont mind Paige's cruelty, I just hope it doesnt take over the story like how Jessica in your other story created a non sexy ending with those shrinking pills.

Paige just put Tim in her shorts. There was little description, but it was okay since it was Paige, haha. Im just not that attracted to her. However, as you know, I am all in for Laura. For all the detail you put in the cruelty of Paige, I would like to see that same detail in the sexyness of Laura.

Great transition! Im curious about Tim's experience and also how Laura is searching for Rob. That has to be must see! Love the back to back chapter submissions. Good work.

-Tom

I agree with gadgetmawombo and aaron. We just learned that Laura had Rob for a few weeks, but we dont know what she did during that time with him. Instead it fast forwards to when Paige captures Rob again. I feel like the good stuff got skipped.

By the way, I noticed that Rob's name is never mentioned in these chapters. I keep forgetting the main character's name! haha.

Well, I got a suggestion where Paige learns about Laura's secret and uses it to her advantage in her desire to see a tiny tortured. Perhaps, Paige finds one od Laura's closed toe high heel boots and drops Rob in there anxious to see her own mother crush Phil by accident. Or maybe Paige tapes Rob to Laura's favorite underwear and Paige watches her mother wear Rob as Paige is laughing to herself imagining Ron's torture. (Similiar to your "Marriage to a giantess" story where Ron gets taken as Erica's prisoner.).

In addition, Paige reminds me of Jessica from your "My marriage to a giantess" story". Jessica got too much attention in that story and I hoped that the gentle Allison had Ron for more time. Hopefully in this story, the gentle Laura has much more in store than Paige.

I enjoy reading this story so much! I hope you post your next one sooner, and I hope Laura gets more involved like from my suggestions.

Thanks, Tom.

Author's Response:

I've forgotten his name many his times when I was first writing. Funny how it never comes up organically when I write! haha.

Fantastic! Im glad he is going to stay with Diane; they didnt really do much together except talk, but I hope this chapter has set up the next one to be all action. I particularly enjoy the consistent action with Sandra and Jim, now I want Diane to have lots of action with Bob, only in a more slower, sensual approach.

Hopefully, this feeling that Diane has is related to him going inside her lingerie. Just a suggestion.

Also, I am impressed that you uploaded these chapters in quick succesion that I cant really complain since I know you work hard to complete these.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing Tom!  Yeah, I could have easily combined these last two chapters, but they contrasted so greatly that I just had to keep them seperate.  I was hoping that the contrast itself would build up Dianes sensuality to the full extent possable...

Interesting. I think this is the first story where I have seen a tiny person actually commit suicide without a sexy ending.

Also, since Bob is swaddled up and left alone, perhaps, we can have an "accidental" butt crush where Bob cant escape as he watches the gigantic mass of flesh form a shadow as it slowly descends on his trapped, helpless body. (Just s suggestion). :)

In addition, I noticed that you mixed up Diane and Sandra's names at the second to last line of this chapter. I bet that happens often when you write a lot.

Anyway, another great chapter as always and now Bob gets all the attention. Cant wait!

Author's Response:

It's been corrected,  Thanks Tom!   As far as Bob getting all the attention... remember, Chloe still has yet to use her 'dose', and Jenn has about ten doses left to use, and...  do you think that Sandra's done yet?