A young boy named Jake finds a tiny woman in a museum and winds up on the wrong end of a "role reversal" when he tries to help her. I may continue this depending on reader reaction. I've always been a big fan of this kind of scenario.
Ahhhh this is great. WOnderful chapter. I am very happy that Kelly and Jake are finally able to be together emotionally and sexually, despite being in their predicament.
The scene where kelly dropped the trenchcoat is one of the hottest I've read in quite a while- the image you created is perfect. perrrrfect.
13/10 best chapter in the story so far.
Also, heads up: this line seems to have a typo. ""I don't feel like much of a hero... I gazed down over Kendra's hand, ... Kelly gave me a warm smile as she kept me cradled in her hands."
Thank you very much (and yes, that was a clear typo, we can see I might've gotten a little over-excited as I wrote this one).
I definitely have been setting up for this chapter for a long time. I had it in the works for quite a while so it was very satisfying to be able to write it out and have it come to life. There is still a lot more to come though, and hopefully you'll enjoy those chapters just as much, if not more. I appreciate the unrealistically high rating of 13/10
Histoire en français !!
Présentation écrite par l'auteur : "Une sorcière encore inhabituée à ses pouvoirs est forcée de rétrécir son ami le plus proche. Il se retrouve désormais coincé dans un monde dont il ne connaissait pas l'existence avec le familier de cette sorcière qui demande au début sa mort, et heurte les règles de sa nouvelle vie. En même temps Julia se démène avec le fait qu'elle aie pris tant de choses à son ami et ses nouvelles responsabilités en tant que sorcière."
Bueno, pues, no puedo hablar francais, pero imagino que si habria poder, esta cuento seria magnifico.
chou, putamadre.
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If you don't speak french, i'm gonna respond in english :) I don't really understand why you posted this review on this story, because it exists in english ! This one is only a translation, but i can transmit your comment to the author if you'd like !
A tiny girl out on her own for the first time finds it hard to survive until she makes friends with a person of normal height. Features giant/tiny lesbian romance so if you don't like it get out of my face.
10/10 gayer than two guys double analing another dude
it only gets a lot gayer
A young woman with a fantasy has been acting on her fantasies in secret for years, but now, she's decided to take the object of her attraction to the next level.
Whyyyy has nobody done a review on this? This is gold!
Prose is top notch, satisfying, and smooth like butter to read. The kink aspect fits in well and Kanti is intriguing as hell.
You had me at shrunken guy during hot yoga.
10/10
Heartfall boasts high stakes with sexual gratification as the prize.
You, my friend, have a talent. Well done.
A woman surprises her boyfriend with the best possible anniversary gift: the ability to live out their fantasies.
Intense, but mighty quick. I'd really like to see this one shot expanded into a few other chapters- you've got the action down, but some advice- take your TIME while you do it- nothing's sexier than a well-written prose.
Well done.
Yeah... I'm not a very patient person. If I do another story I'll try to overcome that, though.
Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.
After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.
Just reviewing to be the 666th review. HAIL SATAN!
This story takes place in an alternate reality where an ancient civilization employs magic and potions in its everyday lives. The Metzakal Ritual is at the heart of the Huhmtakil Culture. Every year all men at the age of 18 are gathered to display their prowess and engage in a fighting competition to determine the strongest. Those deemed worthy become warriors and are given the right to mate with the most beautiful maidens. Those that don’t make it are assigned other tasks. Some, in accordance with religious beliefs, are shrunk and devoured by the maidens. This story follows Jumko as he gets ready for the most important week of his life.
The good
-cool and intriguing plot
-handjobs
-manages to build a somewhat decent society. tells a lot with few words.
-hand jobs for everybody
-each character's voice is distinct, a rare talent
the bad
-cool and intriguing plot for like 4 chapters
-tone is stuck in a time warp- cant make up it's mind
-so much cuckold its painful
-like form ch 5 on
-so much fucking cuck
-chicken goes cuck cuck cuck
-says right here that jumk is a lil bitch
-it's not the wedding wine you honking cock-snogging spunkchariot, its you, jumko the fuckboy
-hand jobs from mom
-freudian paradise
-did i mention that there's a shitton of cuck
the uncomfortably real
-i became physically uncomfortable at the testicle slaps
not the worst story ive read. its good for entertainment if nothing else. 2/5
When a shrinking epidemic has hit the world, a young brother has to live with his sister to survive. But he has to do his part too.
I know super late to the party, but here it is.
Pretty cute stuff. Dialogues a little wonky but you did mention that this was kind of a story for you to experiment with vernacular. Nice compassion from Daisy, with just the right amount of gts content.
Great stuff.
A Fantasy GTS Story
There is a tradition within Windermere. Every year the giant Alexandra chooses one person to become her personal Attendant. This year marks the 200th anniversary of this tradition, and she has someone very special in mind.
Ye outstayed was meant to be tenouttaten. But I guess you can take whichever of those. Or both.
Ohhhh I luuuurve it. Really great interaction between the two- and a verrryyy different tone from when Emil started. It's cute to see Alex get flustered like that.
I have really enjoyed this story, Asterisk- you've written (and matured) two wonderful characters. I hope Emil and Alex can still go forward and grow together.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. Still one of my recent favorites in... Like, forever.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear it. I'm still baffled people are so into this but I certainly won't complain haha
Not gonna lie, I was really nervous this entire week. Your Friday updates have been very exciting for me and something of a treat, and, for the love of God dont let this go to your head, I've been looking forward to this more than Sunday's Game of Thrones or Preacher premier. For perspective, I love GoT the way Jamie loves ceresi.
All that aside, I feel like you've written a great end to this. It's wondrously satisfying to see Alexandra let down her walls- which, in your defense, she had rights to put up, although I am dubious that her walls were caused by hatred from humans directed towards her, and not her alienating people and then them hating- if that made any sort of sense. You touch a tender spot, especially with Emils admission of his love (maybe if just him right now), one that I hope, according to my own preference, is eventually reciprocated by Alex (once she takes him out of her boot, that is). As far as the tone, it's a hopeful one- I don't feel like it's sour or unsatisfactory- in fact, it feel wry hopeful, which I think is what you were trying to convey. I almost feel like Alex is hopeful as well, jaded as she is. The ending, in my opinion, could not have been more sweet and lovely, and it had fit the tale perfectly.
Overall, I feel like you have done extremely well, and this has been my favorite gentle (if not gts in general) story in years. I hope our (Pixis and I) stronger reactions haven't discouraged you in any way- you are a massively talented writer and I hope you continue to post on the community. I cannot wait to see more from you, I truly mean that.
10/10, would get frustrated all over again
Author's Response:
I have to say, I'm genuinely honored you have said that. I'm way too far behind on GoT (I was like 80% through Book 5 before I stopped) but I think I get the comparison. That's pretty wild.
I never expected people to genuinely get invested in this. It started off as one idea that spiralled off into one stupidly lengthy story, one that I tend to nitpick to death at that. Usually I try to avoid long stories because I tend to lose interest, but damn if I didn't stick around for this one. Still, I do have ideas for future stories that might be interesting if I ever actually get around to them, including a possible sequel to this one. Not sure if I'll ever actually do them since 9/10 I prefer shorter one offs, but still.
Also, since you like this story so much you might be interested to know I plan on posting it to DA sometime in the future, with pictures. The pic part is what's been holding me up til now haha.
Asterisk:
"Though that's kind of the point of the story. To provide both characters with a chance to change."
So there's hope, then? Well that's exciting. Reading Alex's constant resistance to betterment was kind of like seeing Walt in Breaking Bad- just the same mistake over and over, and frustrating to watch. I suppose that was what my wall of nonsense was trying to get at.
Anyhow, if there's hope for Alex to change (i really do want to like her!), then I look forward to the next chapters. Heck, even if there isn't, I'm looking forward to the next.
Eeeeeeh. This is the first chapter I've had beef with so far, but I realize that it comes down to my own preference, so take it a grain of salt.
There's a lot of good in this chapter- lots of juicy exposition, a couple of good 'revelations,' if you can call them that (holy Jesus Emil held a special place in her heart, alert the no shit Sherlock squad), and again, top notch writing.
But. To me, Alex is becoming... Grating. Childish, even unlikable. I feel like there's a big push for her to change and then when presented with the opportunity, she just kind of squanders it. Granted, I get that there's a disparity and possible sadness in being friends/lovers with someone who will die much quicker than you will, but Alex's attitude still seems flippant, and I'd argue even OVERLY hedonistic. I get the drive for excitement, sure, but I'd say it's the opposite- humans because life is so fleeting might enjoy the fast pace life of 'fuck fight fly and die' that giants do according to the description you put out. To me, ageless (relatively) beings like Giants would find wisdom in age, etc. to me, my beef is that Alex seems an unbelievable character at times. I love her character, yes, and she does the job of being intriguing, but she does it to the point of almost beating a dead horse.
Two silly ones:
1. Why must you tempt me with your potential lesbianism???? I swear if Emilia is redheaded I will lose my shit.
2. Where is Alex keeping all those oxen?
3. 'Wait you're not tired?' 'Boy you're talkative!' '*rolls her eyes*'
Jesus. Alex was THAT girl in high school, huh.
Let me close this uncharacteristically negative wave by saying that I still love this story- it's heads and shoulders above 90% of what's on this sight for me, both in terms of fetish content and writing. No joke, it's like reading Pixis' Rowena for the first time again- just good, damn good stuff. You still get tenouttaten.
Looking forward to the final chapter and hopefully the epilogue. Also looking forward to your future stuff.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you for the feedback on this one. Lessee how I can respond...
You definitely raise a good series of points with Alex. Though I think it's important to note that while she is hundreds of years old and definitely wise. She is still flawed however, and those flaws are what lead her to do anything she does. It might be best to think of her as someone who is overly sensitive, and instead of being hurt she plays it off and tries to cut ties before she gets too invested. Least that's what I think. Stories are all about interpretation.
Also for your silly question. She hunts all the Oxen haha. Just goes on a march and comes back with a tree skewer.
man, this is the best. The dynamic between Emil and Alex is very poignant and sweet, if not loving. Excellent chapter, asterisk- great descriptions that don't come across as too heavy or too prude. tenouttaten. Can't wait for the next chapter!
okay... okay... im still way unconvinced that this is all going to be sunshine and roses for Emil. I'd wager net loss, even.
Excellent writing as always, you make great characters. tenouttaten
Well if you've gotta spend a year with someone before you die I'd rather she be nice. Haha
Glad you like it so far.
Wow! This did not go the direction i expected. Seems like Alex has known her share of heartache- could she just be a lovesick woman hiding behind a rough visage? Also, im not convinced yet that the attendants are all done away with. But, I'm probably wrong.
love this story, Asterisk. thank you for sharing!
Intriguing! Very intriguing. I really hope to see more of this.
geeeeetttinnnn hoooooooooooot. too hot (hot damn).
tenouttaten. really looking forward to seeing more of this!
For appearances sake, huh? Could it be that Alexandra isn't the only one of her kind?
She's starting to grow on me, but I can't shake the feeling that the other shoe, er, grimy boot has yet to drop.
Really looking forward to more. Great stuff!
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