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Caitlyn by SkullNoise Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When Caitlyn, unofficially the prettiest girl of all time, leaves high school and tires of the college lifestyle, she finds three guys to bend to her will to keep things interesting.

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Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12464 Read Count: 52019
[Report This] Published: September 05 2016 Updated: September 15 2017
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: September 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Prettiest Girl of All Time

This is very good. I like that she's more teasing and humiliatory than violent and sadistic. As a sadist myself it's nice to get a reprieve. Caitlyn is an excellent character. 

Summary:

So, I'll occasionally be posting little one-offs (Perhaps some with a few chapters if I feel like it) relating to the Class of Giantess series created by Silent One which can be found here: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6186

 

Summary: Gina Evans happens to be a student who attends a college where students heights are altered by their grades. Not the most dominate woman in the dorms, yet, hell hath no fury like Ms. Evans scorned. 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4716 Read Count: 21400
[Report This] Published: September 10 2016 Updated: November 26 2016
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: September 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A Quick Schedule Change

Nice! Good content, as a critique I would suggest working on your pacing. Spacing out your writing more might assist in that. I speak from experience, I used to have lots of similar issues. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the pacing in this felt poor in comparison to my regular writing. Thank you for the critque, I'll try to keep that in mind as I write next time. Anyways, I appreicate the critique as well as the review, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: December 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A Quick Schedule Change

The subsequent chapters have been much better in terms of writing ability and pacing. I very much enjoyed your writing of Jen, her power, sadism, and general cruelty was very entertaining to witness. Poor Gina goes through a lot!



Author's Response:

It's good to hear that the pacing and overall writing has improved. I hoped people would like how Jen was depicted, and it seems like that is the case. As for Gina, she ma go through a lot, but she can dish it out as well. Nevertheless, many thanks for your review. It is appreciated.

Summary:

Four young college girls discover shrunken civilizations and people in their new shared student apartment, each of their very different personalities determines how they treat the tiny inhabitants.  

The decisions the girls make through violence, sadism, passion, caring, and friendship affect millions of tiny lives, but their age, lack of maturity, and naivety might make life difficult and terrifying for everyone involved as they are forced to submit to the lives of the four giantess roommates.  

This story takes place from multiple perspectives and different characters both big and small but will focus on the main cast of women.  

 

 

Disclaimer:

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.  

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 371271 Read Count: 746808
[Report This] Published: October 16 2016 Updated: December 21 2021
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: February 27 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning

This is fascinating. I'm impressed by the scale of it; the various characters, the shifting perspectives. Multiple parts stand out to me - this is really good. Excited to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm curious as to what parts stand out for you.

Magnanimous by Rythmear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A young man ponders all the kinky things he's told his friends about... and all the things he hasn't.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1068 Read Count: 10116
[Report This] Published: November 07 2016 Updated: November 07 2016
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: November 09 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gorgeous writing style. I'm intrigued. more please! 

Summary:

Class of Giantess can be a petrifying experience for those who are ill-equipped to enter the semester. For those who struggle in their studies, they'll soon find themselves in a struggle for their life.

This is my first story, and I'll be storing my Class of Giantess shorts here! I'll mostly focus on females with the occasional male victim, and my core characters are Lily (narcissism is a fun thing), Michelle and possibly Madeline, she interests me~ Though I'm totally up for experimenting with the rest of the cast too.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6272 Read Count: 30453
[Report This] Published: November 22 2016 Updated: April 28 2017
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: December 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Heart-to-heart

That was really, truly, very good.  Your descriptors and conveyance of imagery  is spot-on. I liked your use of tildes to convey the upward inflection in Michelle's voice. Do you mind if I make use of your characters in my own CoG works? Lily herself is of particular interest to me because one of my stories is told from Dr. Northend's perspective.



Author's Response: I can't believe I missed this review. Please! By all means use my characters, I'd like nothing more than for you all to use my characters, especially Lily! I'm super happy you like my writing? And I hope you enjoy it more from now on!

Summary:

Class of Giantess shorts with some story arcs thrown into the mix. The subject of the shorts is my main OC, George Lutz. 

Whether getting into trouble with a nasty harasser, falling for a lesbian, or just hanging out with classmates, if I get an idea, there's a chance I'll write about it, and about George's take on it. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2966 Read Count: 8653
[Report This] Published: November 27 2016 Updated: December 11 2016
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: December 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Hallway Harassment, Prayer for a Partner & Diary Debacle

Not bad, not bad. I agree with WrittenVoreArt, more details would have been lovely. Looking forward to more



Author's Response: Thank you. The big problem with the details is, that I write it in a different kind of document, and it makes the font and paragraphs look larger, so I feel like I'm done dinner than I am.

Summary:

Valerie and Crystal are two good friends who just want to enjoy a movie together.  However, during the movie a shrinking epidemic hits the world, and the dynamic between these two friends changes as one's darker desires get brought to light.

 

Several months after the world was hit with the shrinking epidemic, private investigators Joey and Robyn are hired by an unknown source to investigate Infinity University, where Valerie and Crystal go to school.  Apparently, a lot of the shrunken students have gone missing, causing campus-wide concern.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fantasy, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Lesbians, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94049 Read Count: 237948
[Report This] Published: February 07 2018 Updated: May 28 2019
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: March 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: ACT 1: Intro

You know, I was on here looking for that divine inspiration, something to really call me back to writing this stuff after years of hiatus... This might have done it. I *love* Val, she's absolutely messed up in a very detailed and intimate way. I've only read up to... She just ate Anne and Steve. Delightful. Gotta go to work, but imma read more later.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Every comment means a lot to me, but I always feel especially honored when a fellow author comments on my story.  Even more so when it is a well-known author :D I hope you enjoy the rest!

Summary:

A young woman creates life on her computer and uses it for nefarious purposes.

Contains profanity, violence, mild sexual themes, and themes of fantastical existential horror. Inspired by media including The Twilight Zone and Black Mirror.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15617 Read Count: 22964
[Report This] Published: March 03 2018 Updated: April 23 2018
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: March 08 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Beginning

That was awesome. Great idea. Her role as a creator-destroyer deity is wonderful to read, a very obvious power dynamic. I'm curious to see what else you do with this idea.



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm hoping to do as much with this as I can ^^ I'm glad you enjoy the extreme power dynamic

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm hoping to do as much with this as I can ^^ I'm glad you enjoy the extreme power dynamic

Summary:

The interesting thing about trying to find a date at the bar is that you'll never really know what kind of person you're going to meet. 

A memorial to Silent-One, my favorite writer in the site, on the anniversary of her unfortunate demise. May she rest in peace. 


Categories: Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3044 Read Count: 6280
[Report This] Published: March 07 2018 Updated: March 07 2018
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: March 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent story! As always, your descriptions slay me. You have a level of detail I aspire to. It really comes from within. This was a very fitting tribute to a wonderful person. 

Summary: Recently I've figured I wanted to be more self indulgent in my writing recently so I came up with a series of short stories that I've decided to call Emma Episodes! They're called that because they star yours truly and, well, they're episodic. Every single episode is self-contained and packed with lewd content and stuff. So despite the very long chapter count, every single one is its own story!

And to make things even nicer, every individual chapters summary lets you know what to expect, as well as what tags it would contain!

If you like my stuff and want to support me, or are just interested in significantly longer, illustrated stories, then check out my e-junkie store! https://egsizestuff.e-junkie.com/

Alternatively, you can buy me a cup of coffee (I drink a lot to do these) via ko-fi! All donations are greatly appreciated! https://ko-fi.com/emmagear


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Futanari, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 332631 Read Count: 464167
[Report This] Published: February 20 2019 Updated: June 17 2021
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: August 08 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1: Here Lies Alexis

These are wonderful; your writing has always been amazing. Short stories are an underrated form for these kinds of things.



Author's Response: Thanks a bunch and glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: September 04 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Episode 36: Ms. Worldwide

Well that is a fun, very familiar scene. Deity ensnares a plaything and toys with him for as long as she deems fit. Great writing as always, Emma. I have this collection favorited and just... Periodically check if there's more to it. Always great when there is. 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Summary: A young woman in the middle of having a bad day is probably a bit more rude than she should have been to an older woman who was the customer in the store she worked. One thing leads to another and there's shrinking and a realization that maybe being nice will pay off.
Categories: Maternal, Feet, Slave, Mouth Play, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9151 Read Count: 7820
[Report This] Published: April 10 2021 Updated: April 10 2021
Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed
Date: April 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing as always, your descriptive narration is wonderful. Poor adorable Penny. Always fun to get to see what's going on in her mind, this time, she just wants to be owned! Seems like that's going well for her then.