A professor has an interesting way of allowing her students to get some extra credit.
I read the other reviews, and agree with them with one exception. This is also a transformation site.
Ms. / Professor Holloway can keep Jonas at his normal size, she could even shrink him; but she could also transform him. A replacement seat cushion, her T-back thong, her tight fitting nylons such as "those spandex bodysuits he saw people wearing at the homecoming game last Friday", or even those clickaty-clackity shoes she wears.
It seems Jonas is aroused by Ms. Holloways' asshole {where was she when I was in school?} and the title does imply Jonas' nose up Ms. Holloways' butthole, perhaps she could alter Jonas so he has a snout {perhaps more in private if it fits your story line better} that fits snuggly and deep up her asshole.
Hopefully Jonas is subject to more of Ms. Holloways' farts and asshole.
Regardless, please do continue no matter which way you take this story.
Thanks for your review! You've got some great ideas there :)
Bryce Dallas Howard plays Claire Dearing in the Jurassic World plot twist. Her boss Simon Masrani, decides to explore something else besides dinosaurs. He discovers that there is more profit to be made with atom shrinking technology. Simon also decides that Claire is the perfect unaware candidate for his erotic pleasure. He lets loose 10 paid Patrons to explore her body at their own risk. This chapter focuses on just one Patron while he explores his foot fetish and then ends up in her nose. The next Patron may end up in her ass, but it'll have to get voted through the Polls first!
Bryce Dallas Howard / Claire Dearing, nice choice for a main character / protagonist. I think every guy fell for her after watching "The Village", I did.
Good story developement; but too early to know how the story will play out.
One suggestion, you name Gates as the guy in Claires' slipper, which is fine; but it's hard to imagine oneself in his position if you define the character / player so specifically. We're all thinking Microsoft rather than "Joe Schmo, hey that could be me in Claires' slipper!"
Curious how this will play out. Oh, I like all the camera angles for at home viewers.
Thank you for your review!
Hmm I agree, next chapter I will leave their names hidden and call them Patrons.
I wanted to make this realistic and have everyone wishing this show existed in real life. Hopefully it worked.
My friend Tanya tricks me with the promise of sex. Now, her body is literally my entire world.
Nice! The only difference I personally would have made, but it is afterall your story, is that the town would be located either deep within Tanyas' cleavage or beneath one of her breasts {where her bras' underwire is under her tits}.
Does the forcefield allow the fragrance of Tanyas' breast, especially her sweat permiate the towns' air? Will Tanya shrink another town for her other tit?
Interested to read where this story goes.
I like those ideas! It would be hot (both literally and figuratively) to live in a crevice between or beneath one of her boobs, where it would be dark and humid under her domination. Right now the town is located about half way down the inner slope of her titty so she controls our access to light.
I do intend that scents and moisture permeate the forcefield and that will come up in later chapters.
Thank you for your support!
Great story so far; but it would be nice if the people in the town who dug the hole and ended up at Tanya's breast would eventually be able to harvest her sweat and dead skin cells as their only, yet substainable food and water source, thus surviving off of her tit.
Hopefully Tanya shrinks other cities to adorn her breasts, perhaps even one or two between her toes or in her ass-crack.
I know I mentioned it before, but a city squnched up under one of her breasts, where her chest meets her ribs (think bra underwire) and kept in darkness breathing in stale, sweaty air.
Perhaps she could creat portholes connecting the cities, so the inhabitants could experience her different body parts? That would be great if they all had to travel to the city / cities between her toes or in her butt crack for toejam or ass-crack filth to eat.
Keep it going. Excited to read where this goes.
Hi: Thank you for the review. Chapter 5 is foreshadowing that much of your suggestions are to come; you have great ideas with this.
If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know.
Another great chapter. I like the idea of Tanya shrinking a church full of worshipers to convert them to worshiping her.
I read your last responce and your offer to co-author. If you would like to, then sure, why not; even though you have very interesting ideas of your own.
I'm not sure how we would proceed, whether through these posts, an online forum, or email. Let me know what works best for you.
Some ideas to consider, as to targets / subjects:
- shrinking buildings like the Walmart and potentially the church is a nice concept you should keep going; but they don't compare to entire towns or small cities. Perhaps isolated farm towns {nobody visits or pays attention to}, coastal villages {self sustaining thus few outsiders to notice missing, plus can be explained away by coastal flooding}, indigenous and nomadic tribes {small in size, often moving to find new resources}, towns and cities in war zones {people fleeing anyway, plus who can tell a pile of rubble from a pile of left over rocks}. If Tanya decides to travel to add to her collection, these are all potential targets for her.
- as far as individual buildings, the sexual crimes center of a prison {if not the entire prison}, a bar full of criminals and thugs, a military barracks or entire base {probably best if a military of a third world country so as not to start a war, call it "Micronesia" (ha haha)}, perhaps even some large ships or even a cruise ship {"lost at sea during hurricane season" ha-hum, now floating about deep in Tanya's bladder}.
- perhaps a religious cult(s) and their "off the grid" hidden retreat(s). Almost ready made for her personal worship.
As to body locations:
- as mentioned before, between her toes, both in her ass-crack and for the truly devoted and those to be punished {e.g. churches, prisons, hmmm military base would be nice too} actually smushed a quarter or half inch up her rectum {total darkness, yet so close to being outside her asshole}
- in her dark, dirty, and sweaty bellybutton.
- perhaps a relatively large shrunk building, where the people are considerably bigger than the rest she shrunk, on her earlobe or just inside her ear so she can hear them scream and pray aloud to her. Still the size of a small mole, yet as a single building large enough and close enough for the inhabitants to be heard.
- there's always her vagina, which would be fun for a beach resort so the people could play and swim in her juices.
- of course under her breasts as discussed, deeper within her cleavage {perhaps zigzaging cities back and forth so when she squeezes her tits together a line of cities pass by one another to get pressed up against the opposite tit. Think zipper, only with cities}.
Possible games:
- the cities compete in games of sacrifice and worship. A lossing city can get swallowed, shoved deep up Tanya's butt, have their forcefield shutdown as she smushes the city into oblivion in her cleavage or inserted inside her pussy then grown bigger and smaller, throbbing Tanya into a city crushing, gripping climax.
- porthole races. People from each location compete in a race from city to city through portholes that connect them {similar to Stargate, also a good way for Luke to go to new cities / buildings and explain to the new arrivals that they have been shrunk by Tanya and now live on / in her body for her amusement and worship}. You could make the races interesting, perhaps by making them human equine races through a course / obstacle course set up in each location where someone like Luke is blindfolded and riden by Camila like her pony, completely controlled by her using riding harness reins and spurs.
Hope one or two of these ideas are interesting enough for you to use.
So many names thrown about in that last chapter, it is a bit hard to keep tract of who is whom.
Love your story so far, and am interested to read where it goes.
You asked in a reply to my previous comments if I would be interested "If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know."
First, I have a lot of time constraints, and can NOT commit to a lot of devotion to any story. Any collaboration would have to take place over an undetermined amount of time I can not commit to.
Second, the subject matter of such a collaboration would have to be determined between us; and most likely be altered as the story progresses.
With this in mind, and with your agreement, such a LONG TERM story would be a nice project to proceed with you.
Go to https://www.deviantart.com/hertoering and write me a message about the type of story you wish to write, including subject matter and participants.
Let's see where any collaboration goes from there.
A man faces his inner demons to become the size he was always meant to be. A size-reduction, crossdressing as a child story.
Being infant / baby sized to a full sized woman is a popular fantasy; just look up "Baby Sit" fetish videos.
I saw a comic strip years ago where a female employee had to pass off a shrunken male employee as her own baby to the companys' boss to account for the maternity time she took off.
I myself have a yet to be published story of a secretary that makes her boss and an employee {who stumbles upon their situation} into babies / small men.
My only concerns are that John will not reduce his size further and not realize he wants to be a sissy girl.
I am hopeful that Johns' wife returns home, for what ever reason, and catches him being a shrunken prissy, and perhaps insisting that she has had enough and shrinks him even smaller.
Another possibility, John drinks more "down" tea and accidentally spills the "up" drink over, causing him to shrink further and eventlually be found small and sissy by his wife.
Thanks for the review! Yes, babysitting, age regression or mock age regression stuff is definitely very popular. I am trying to toe the line between that and a more "serious" wish fulfilment story. As for what happens next, I cannot spoil just yet!
The ongoing suspence is a killer. Will she catch him and when???
My only complaint, the paragraphs need to be broken up into smaller paragraphs so it's easier to read; otherwise very gripping and well written.
So, I went back to Chapter 4, and realized that you are right. The ultra big paragraphs could use some breaking up. I will edit it. Thank you for catching that.
A thought occured to me while reading about the effects of the alcohol he had drunk. Alcohol can act as a catalyst, changing chemical compositions of drugs taken. Like drinking alcohol and taking barbituates result in a new chemical compond rather than the two drugs simply emphasizing the effects of each other, a new (usually deadly) chemical is formed.
Perhaps the addition of alcohol to his body under the influence of both the "down" and "up" could immunize his body from any future exposure / consumption of the drugs. With more "down" than "up" in his body, maybe he could shrink further while he sleeps.
If her were to become immune to the effects of the drugs, and only able to access the two drinks he left himself on the tray on the floor (which no longer have an effect on his size), then his wife could find the rest on the counter and sell them to restore her finances so she could focus on raising her daughter and taking care of her baby sized husband. I would think the company that made the "down" and "up" drug would pay a handsom profit to her for returning it rather than let a rival company research the formula.
Just some thoughts. I really can't wait for the wife to find out and see how she treats him.
Only complaint, again, very long paragraphs make it harder to read. Other than that, GREAT!
I never considered the effects of alcohol! That's an interesting point..
The rest of the drug, the wife's reaction, and some involvement with the company will eventually show up, there's plans for those for sure!
And thank you for the comment about paragraphs. The lack of dialogue makes it harder to break up, and I keep writing longer paragraphs in return. I will try to break them up even more in future chapters.
A scientist on a quest to invent teleportation makes a breakthrough, but ends up creating something much more dangerous and very hard to reverse.
One has to wonder what Rachel means by given him the nickname "Ride"???
Wonder indeed 🤔
Daniel and his friends make a deal with their genious friend Rachel.
If they helped her to make some test experiments with her new invention, they can go with her on a trip to the other side of the world...
It's gonna be easy and nothing out of the ordinary right? right?!
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This is quite the interesting and fun story. I like it a lot.
You mention English is not your first language, and to point out any grammatical errors. Firstly, you have way too many grammatical errors to ever try to note them all. Secondly, you wrote your story in such a straight forward manner that is easy to read, the errors do not get in the way at all and it's simple to understand your meaning and follow along. So don't concern yourself with any grammatical errors.
Hopefully Anthony will want to stay, or at least return to Rachel's ass. Perhaps in the future she can make him a suit that will keep him stuck up her butt and not get pooped out.
If Rachel ever swallows Daniel, assuming she makes him a suit to protect him from being digested, then perhaps he can pass through her bowels and then hang out with Anthony for a while inside her butt.
Please keep the story going.
Thanks for your review!
I know I'm not that good with English but thank you for that comment about the grammatical errors, even so, I'll try my best to improve that
And with all that suggestions you made here, those are really interesting, sure, but I don't think I will apply those themes (Kind of because I don't think I can write something related to butt stuff, mainly scat tbh)
But thank you for your honest opinion :D
Even though I just commented, and you state you want to make this a short story, if you do continue it a few comments for you.
The size of 1/8" is pretty darn small, especially for Rachel to feel and fully take advantage of. Perhaps 1/4", 1/2", or even 3/4" might be better for Rachel to feel her tiny body explorers, except for William.
If William wants to continue exploring Rachel's feet, then 1/8", the size of an ant, would be perfect.
Maybe Rachel can make any new suits so that the wearer sticks to her body. William, at 1/8" the size of an ant, sticks to Rachel's feet and inbetween her toes. Angela, perhaps at 1/4"-3/4" is able to stick to Rachel's breasts. Anthony, at any size is stuck to Rachel's bowels.
Daniel however, regardless of size, should not stick to Rachel so he may move around inside her mouth or pass through her stomach and bowels {eventually even out her asshole if that's where you care to take this} or be placed anyplace else Rachel wants him.
Is there any reason they all have to be the same size? Is there any reason they have to be so small, except for ant man William beneath her feet and toes?
What ever you do with this story, follow what you want to do. I'm just making comments more for my own self interest, and you have to write your stories for yourself first and foremost.
In my humble opinion, this is a story worth continuing.
Thanks for this review too!
Well, the point of this story was mainly micro and the interaction that Rachel has with the group at that size
I wasn't planning on let them be bigger than that because that was the whole point of Rachel wanting them to be that small
Also, I don't think I will continue the things as I put in this scenario
If I make a sequel of this, maybe its gonna be with Angela, Rachel and Daniel as the main characters and the rest of the group is gonna be out
Thank you for reading the story so far!
Not sure what to tell you abhout where this story goes as you seem to want to end it.
I'm sure you could continue it to all of our enjoyment; but if you prefer to begin a new story and end this one I have to say you did a marvelous job writing this one.
Well done. BRAVO!
Thank you so much for your reviews! :D
I'm gonna continue this story in some future though
First story, last story, who knows really!
One things for sure, this short story is for those of us with certain proclivities that revolve around shrinking and feminine feet.
So to those folks I say, "Enjoy!"
To others not into toes n such, "You may want to move along!"
This is a take on the ol'classic tale of;
Boy accidentally shrinks, unfortunate circumstances ensue while trying to be seen, and the girl ends up going about her business.
Two different approaches, "concept" versus "illustration".
Your concept is top notch, though fatalistic in the end. His constant enduring of her foot odor / fungus / taste is very hot and intrigueing. Most readers will find this alluring.
As to your illustration, just as you mention your descriptions are quite long and take away from the easy reading flow of your narative. Have you ever watched the shower scene in the movie "Psycho"? You never actually see Anthony Perkins {the psycho} murder Janet Leigh in the shower. It's a rather quick scene where a knife is shown, she screams, blood flows down the drain; but no murder is ever shown.
If you give general descriptions and ultimate outcomes, your readers are left to imagine the scenes in details that are most appropriate for each individual; thus much more relatable.
Just some sugestions for you to consider. That said, write for you and your intended audience first and foremost, not a critic such as I am being. Though I do look forward to your future works. Never stop writing, for anyone. Write for yourself only.
Critique much appreciated and thanks for the insight! I get what you're saying and was noticing it too, but had a hard time stopping myself. Over editing for detailed frameworks of time with links to previous moments for recognition to keep a person planted in the story was tiresome due to over description. I seem to fall into a cycle of inordinately applying my own, often too expanded, detailed listings of the current moment and will take that great example to heart on the next new new story if I ever get there. But again? I'm still debating on if it's totally a bad thing 'cause like you said, "Write for yourself only" and thats pretty much what anyones getting from this human. And hey, if others like what's on my "big screen" far beit from me to deny them a seat. ...prices may vary though! ;)
Sam and Ken are Back in the latest installment! It is the anniversary of Giantess Tours as well as Ken and Sam's anniversary together. They have plans to spend it together as best they can, but when Sam's younger sister stops by on her way to college, the size changing couple are about to be pulled in a backwards vore full tour!
This is truly a clissic shrink story.
Aside from a few grammatical errors, which are not even note worthy, this story is fantastic.
Please keep writting.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Averie is back home from college for the Christmas break and is feeling a little bored in bed. When she goes to use her vibrator for some anal fun, she finds her little sister's pet bunny rabbit Marshmellow has chewed through the charging cable. There's only one reasonable solution to this problem, Marshmellow will have to take the place of the vibrator.
NICE! Lucky Marshmallow.
We all heard the infamous gerbil stories. To do so with a rabbit, quite the idea {even if inspired by AlisaBlueBird as you so rightly give credit}.
Your story is well written. It's easy and enjoyable to read. Grammatical errors, none that I noted. Descriptions brief yet to the point. Very nicely done, bravo.
The only change I would make is Acerie's plans for Marshmellow. Yes, her initial intent is to keep him up her ass "allllllll day"; though walking down the hallway for breakfast and feeling the bunny up her butt, perhaps Averie could decide to keep Marshmellow. Maybe take him back to college with her, the idea of having him live inside her too much of an arousal for her to deny. Thoughts of walking aroud campus, sitting in lecture halls, going out with her girlfriends, and pleasuring herself at night all the while a cute, white rabbit named Marshmellow living snuggly up her ass.
Thank you for all the lovely feedback! <3
And yes lol, I've heard of the gerbil story. I've been terribly disappointed how few stories and hentai art of that type I could find online. I'm generally more into shrunken people as prey, but occasionally it's fun to play with other options~
I'm all flustered at the compliments on my writing. I try to keep in mind that I'm writing smut, not great literature, so it's helpful to keep the story moving at a fair pace without long detailed descriptions of elements that aren't arousing to think about.
With Averie's future plans, it's certainly possible she might change her mind and choose to let Marshmellow out to play with again. Alternatively, I expect the campus pet shop is going to be getting a lot of business from Averie~
Just wanted you to know, I just read AlisaBlueBird's story. I definitely relate to and agree with you being inspired by her story. What a great and, in a sadistical way, whimsical story.
Oh, one quick thought. When Averie had Marshmellow's tail and legs still sticking out from her asshole, looking back at the camera it would have been funny if she either commented to the computer camera or noted to herself that the sight reminded her of a Playboy Bunny with their bushy cotton tails, only unlike theirs fastened to the back of their panties, Averie's was an actual bunny tail. She literally has a bunny tail. HA HA HA
Yeah Alisa's story was great, it was just over a little too quick for my tastes. Hence why I had to write my own version to satisfy my craving.
Oh yeah a little comment about the bunny tail would have been fun~ Averie will have to keep that in mind for next halloween, dressing up as a bunny girl and a bunny up her ass with just its tail sticking out. As a party tricky she could squeeze her ass cheeks to make the tail twitch.
Goddess Valis feeds the tinies that she keeps in her special cage.
Love the "quick wink" at the fact "his manhood was rack hard". Interested how their relationship will transpire.
This is a story about a sociopathic highschool student with a blossoming desire to dominate those she feels are inferior. After getting a taste of overwhelming power, she quickly becomes addictied and searches for a way to keep the high going.
I've noticed some formatting issues where certain chapters are now riddled with question marks. Trying to fox it now, so I'm sorry if this puts the story back on the "Recent" page.
Fantastic story. Who doesn't have a teacher they had a crush on, and wished to be used by in all sorts of ways like Miss Crowell?
You have a few typos. If you reread your story you can easily see them. That said they are nothing that takes away from your story in the least.
The overall premise is great. I myself have been slowly wokring a story called "The Trilogy Of Teachers", basically the story of three seperate shrinking episodes all happening at the same school.
I really like how you followed up with teacher Micheal Manning and his intensions with Camilla.
One has to wonder about "a slight bit of movement form Kerri’s butt" {notice "form instead of "from", that's what I meant by a few typos}. Is that movement another student being punished by the girls in Science Club? Perhaps, just perhaps, it's a teacher being rewarded inside Kerri's jeans / butt since freshman year; a teacher who helped Kerri with her studies and is now being rewarded and happy in his / her new position.
Looking forward to Camilla being a total bitch, abusing Adam, and hopefully using that remote on Kyle. By the way, you wrote "Did you just swear Kyle?.......but Mike just quietly apologizes", see the typos I mentioned?
Looking forward to finding out more about Camilla's toy, and perhaps Miss Crowell's toys as well.
You have a great story going on, please keep it going.
"Conditioning" is certainly an appropriate title for this chapter. Camilla is a master of both physical and mental domination.
Can't wait to read about both Mr. Lanning and Adam succumbing to Camilla's manipulations.
One quick thought, Camilla is obviously very intelligent to be Science Club president, so why doesn't she build her own shrinking remote while she has Miss Crowell's to copy?
Looking forward to the next chapter.