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Summary:

Chris is an average teenager except for one small detail, he stopped growing at a very young age. Now a 19 year old boy who just graduated high school and only 3 feet 1 inch tall, his life is about to change forever when he gets a babysitter.

Note: No growing or shrinking happens in this story. Things might start relatively G and PG, but might evolve into more R rated situations so I'll put an R rating now just in case.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26907 Read Count: 54046
[Report This] Published: July 25 2017 Updated: January 03 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Decision is Made

Cloud is right, this is where the story left off before.  Is there a new chapter? {fingers crossed}

Summary:

Paul's love of all things Alice in Wonderland sends him down the rabbit hole when his entire family discovers his fetish and decides to do something about it.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9182 Read Count: 52350
[Report This] Published: August 23 2017 Updated: August 29 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 23 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start; but his mother and sisters???  Still, plenty of other women in the room.  Regardless, it will fun to see where this goes no matter who gets their hands on him.  Please continue.



Author's Response:

Hehe. The story beats, relationships to other characters, etc, were chosen by the commissioner. There will be several hands on him before the story is complete.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 23 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 31 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As odd as a son-brother versus mom-sister story is to me, this was written in a rather intriguing fashion.  One was always wondering what would happen next, and next, and next.  Ignoring the family relation aspect, well my personal hang-up with that, it was quite entertaining.  



Author's Response:

I can understand how this may not be everyone's jam due to the family connections. Glad you liked it despite

Summary:

Dr. Angela Ziegler must resort to invasive procedures to rescue a wounded man.

 

Based on Blizzard's "Overwatch".


Categories: Breasts, Body Part, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Odor, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6915 Read Count: 10730
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: August 25 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: August 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Paris Incident

Very nice story; but also kind of freaky as I have one not quite the same but with a few similarities so close I'm hesitant to post it someday.  If I ever do, I'll let you know so you may compare.

I like the ending and how Duncan came to accept Angela shrunk and saved him, and now held him in the palm of her hand.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't think it's too surprising that we came up with similar stories. If your goal is to write a vore story featuring Mercy as a pred and have it be in-character then the scenario I came up with is kind of a no-brainer. Even without the vore, linking the shrinking with some kind of healing is the perfect way to set up giantess fetish shenanigans.

As to the ending, I'm a sucker for happy endings and gentle giantesses comforting scared or distressed tinies, so I don't think I could write it any other way.

Summary:

Vera has recently been fired from her position as a university teacher, and what is a wealthy middle-aged woman with experience in the pharmaceuticals industry and a vendetta against college aged-students to do?


Categories: Mature (40-49), Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Vore, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3413 Read Count: 13177
[Report This] Published: October 27 2017 Updated: October 27 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really great story.  I hope there's more to it!!!  

You paint a vivid image of Vera as a sexy professor.  You also did a nice job of describing the students and their fates.  The romantic dinner and sweaty cloths are a clever touch.

My only complaint are the huge paragraphs.  They make it a bit difficult to keep one's place while reading.

 



Author's Response:

If I did this today, it would be better broken up, but as it is a reupload I'll keep it as is.

Summary: Latest story I've made a start to. Little Daniel is sent to stay with his aunt to help him with his foot fetish.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3450 Read Count: 11841
[Report This] Published: November 06 2017 Updated: November 06 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of those stories you just want to go on and on and on.  I sure hope you add more chapters, especially what happens to Dan when Aunt Nancy is talking with all those clinets; is he still on the floor or is he in some secret compartment within the sole of her high heels, or perhaps scrunched up beneath her toes within her nylons?  If they are female clients, will they step on Dan too?

The biggest problem I have with this story is that you start out by saying his mom is comong back in a week.  Hopefully it will take a lot longer than that to rehabilitate Dan.

Will Dan ever come to appreciate his Aunt Nancy's foot odor enough that the stench alone will drive him to ectasy, or even Goddess Worship of his Aunt Nancy? 

Summary:

What happens when a science experiment goes wrong? Will the result be permanent?


Categories: Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Fantasy, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6427 Read Count: 43040
[Report This] Published: November 07 2017 Updated: November 21 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A Rude Awakening

Very nice so far.  A bit tricky to read with no paragraphs nor spellcheck; but the story line thus far is one of those classic fantasies we come here for.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Great work! 



Author's Response:

I do apologize. I only have wordpad on my computer and I had all the correct spacing for paragraphs, but when I uploaded the story file it would only let me if it was in text only format. That changes any special editing I have done. I will go back and spell check though. Thank you for your review.

Summary:

In a small city outside of Pittsburg, the disappearance rate of adult men is higher than anywhere else. Even those who dare to search for the truth are at risk.  At the center of it all, an old house with a dark secret


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16643 Read Count: 32383
[Report This] Published: November 12 2017 Updated: December 18 2017
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a terrific opening chapter.  I don't know where this story is going; but a selfish suggestion on my part is that if a guy is killed, the giantess retains his soul or reincarnates him as someone or something (e.g. her clothing).  Can't wait to find out what size coins are-do.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The plot actually uses an element similar to that. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 16 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Assuming what they do, I was wondering about someone, just one guy getting all the size coins to go toe to toe with her.  Now I guess I'd be the one to make that rookie mistake.  The handheld and toss of tinies is nice.  Surprized there aren't more stories where a woman juggles tinies or plays hacky-sack with one {or perhaps a few tied up in a small balled up net like soup greens}.

I like how you worked that "you'll wake up just in time..." in there.  Sounds like maybe, just maybe Deziree keeps her playtoys alive afterall.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  It gets me motivated to write faster because I really want to discuss my concept with someone.  Probably 1 or 2 more chapters before anything is thoroughly explained. 

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1508 Read Count: 11994
[Report This] Published: November 15 2017 Updated: January 17 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The story begins

I like the start.  Sumayya can pretty much do anything with Marcus if Sumayya still has some of the brown vial shrinking potion left {along with the green, obviously}.

Like to see where this goes.

Cheerleader by Trawis Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A cheerleader takes a disliked teacher into her own hands... 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7455 Read Count: 33671
[Report This] Published: December 22 2017 Updated: February 05 2022
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: February 09 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is more a comment regarding your past three chapters than just your last one.

Fantastic story.  I love the easy control yet total dominance of Ashley over her teacher "Bunny".  Though he resists, she has complete control over him to be whatever she desires.

I especially like "Mr. Jones, or like, Mr. Brent" both for Sasha; and "Ethan" for Britney as being no problem for Ashley to shrink and give to them.  That is so cool.

The replacement of Ashley's pet hamster with her teacher is so hot.  I hope she trains him further into sub-servitude and compliance.

The time spent between Ashley's thighs and against her panty thong was great.  Hopefully you will have "Bunny" spend more time there.

Keep up the great work.

Aunt Suzie by Kurogane335 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Stephen is a sixteen year old teenager, forced to live with his 21 years old aunt, Suzie, whom he happens to hate because of previous actions from her part. He intends to shrink her to teach her a lesson, but things don't turns out as he planned...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Scat, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10080 Read Count: 113353
[Report This] Published: January 19 2018 Updated: February 09 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: January 25 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Stressful day

This is a really great story; but the grammatical errors make it a bit tough to read.  You should have somebody proofread it for you and do a spell check; otherwize please keep this story going.



Author's Response:

Yeah, normally I write first on Word which helps me deal with the fact that English isn't my native language but my computer is down hard for now, so I've to write directly here. I'll try and correct things myself as soon as possible. ANyway, thans for the review !

Evi's Executions by JDO Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A man enjoys a webcam performance by his favorite adult actress.

This was an entry for Cruel January 2018


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Insertion, Butt, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1999 Read Count: 8637
[Report This] Published: February 22 2018 Updated: February 22 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

youre_my_slave

If I were lodged somewhere up your butt, any scars you have would not be an issue with me.  Though rather than die I'd just rather live up in there; permanantly!  Ya, that's probably TMI and grossing you out, just had to admit it to you though. {Big Smile}

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty darn good. Very interesting ending too with the various other sites.  Though one does have to wonder just how long Michelle survived up Evi's butt. 

Nice pace and nice concept.



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed. I REALLY struggle with the 2,000 word limit in place for the contests, but I'm finding they keep me reigned in so I don't meander all over the place with the plot and it makes for the narrative staying tight. It definitely worked with this one. 

 

And as for Michelle, I'm guessing not too long, but I'm hoping long enough for Evi to have time to rub one out off camera. ;) 

Summary:

A woman heads to the doctor for an unusual check-up. The problem she faces is particularly embarassing, a problem only a doctor can solve.


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3701 Read Count: 6963
[Report This] Published: February 28 2018 Updated: February 28 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: March 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it.  Short and to the point, yet with just enough details added to paint a picture for the reader (e.g. the night sky, the silver letters on the wood panel wall).

Keep it up, perhaps write about the rest of their honeymoon or how he got up there in the first place and for how long before Kendra went for help.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time for reading the story! It's probalby going to be a little while before I write something that will expand upon this, but I did have quite the chronicle in mind.

Summary:

Hey bugs~ it's your goddess Lucy back with another story for all you little guys, enjoy~!

Samantha is just your average teenage girl, all except for her nano fetish. Lucky for her, half the population in the world is nano sized, unlucky for a school of nanos this girl just got exchanged to their school for a few weeks. And she plans on ruling the school.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21998 Read Count: 169772
[Report This] Published: March 25 2018 Updated: June 09 2018
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: April 13 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 - Lunch Date

Samantha swallowed the train, what an extremely seductive act!!!  One of the best parts of your stories is how Samantha takes control of the areas she enters and the bug sized students there.  Simply put she doesn't allow any ever to escape; they are ALL Her's!  Each one of them.

Bree realizing that Samantha does not see them as human, rather as actual "insects" {So HOT of you Goddess Lucy} yet loves her even more for it, even at her own peril, shows just how much Samantha is God to her.  I hope their relationship continues and blossoms.

Just a guess, are the 40 or so students going to wind up pizza toppings or thrown in her mouth and swallowed alive?  Perhaps a game of 'stay on my food wrapper-plate and per 'chance' get picked up and eaten with the pizza and cookie or jump off my food wrapper-plate and 'definitely' get smashed-eaten'???

I am excited to find out what you, ha hum, Samantha does to Bree's two bullies.

Another excellent chapter {swallowing the train is hot, too bad only two students on it} leading up to a lunch for the ages.

Oh, the explanation of hundreds of thousands of bug sized students for Samantha to crush is a very well done detail.  Bravo Goddess Lucy!!!

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: April 07 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Warming Up

DAMN!!!  What a fantastic story.  I have to be quite honest, I don't know what's hotter, your incredible story or you calling us bugs and tinies in your intros.  I think it's the later.

Your writing style is very nice. Aside from a few grammatical errors, repeated words, and the paragraph spacing that throw off the easy reading flow of your story, your writing is quite good.

My favorite line, Chapter 3: "it only got worse for them as she pulled her gigantic panties out of a wedgie and covered them with it, sealing them in for good."  SO HOT!  True I'd rather be IN the wedgie, being stuck in the back of her panties is a close second.  By the way, did she take these panties off for gym class?

All I can say is please keep this story going.  Or as Samantha's Bree would say "I HAVE A GIANT FETISH AND YOU ARE THE ABSOLUTE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!! P-PLEASE KEEP WRITING GODDESS_LUCY_tinyCrusher!!!"



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks so much little bug~. I honestly love how detailed your comment is, and I'll try to work on those things you mentioned ;)

I'm glad you're loving the story, and lucky for you I was just posting the next chapter. I hope you keep reading, and keep up that lovely praise you're giving me~.

Hope to hear from you again. Thanks! <3

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: April 19 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Picking on the Bullies

Hopefully you will have many more chapters Goddess Lucy.  I am kinda in agreement with Samantha, Bree needs to be more sadistic in her domineering.  She could have ordered Adrian and Betty to each suck one of her feet entirely into their mouths (that is one foot in each one's mouth) and even had Samantha add a bit of muscle to stuff them in.  Shoes made from bullies, he he he.  Heck, with her girlfriend Samantha's backing she could have made them both kneel down and pray out loud to her as their Goddess while all the students in the cafeteria watched on in disdain.

It is nice that Samantha swallowed Adrian, and the tilting of her head back for effect is pretty sexy.

One has to wonder if Betty, alone after her boyfriend being swallowed alive, is going to completely breakdown before Samantha and Bree.  Will they have pity or vengence upon Betty?

What is going to happen to all the students from the small plastic cylinder?  Will they end up as lunch, entertainment, or both?

Perhaps Samantha can suggest to Bree that she should pick out a student or two to enslave for her own personal abuse.  Bree wouldn't necessarily have to whip him/her/them so much as decree various punishments (e.g. one could serve as a saddle on Samantha's shoulder for Bree to sit upon, they could be forced into becoming Bree's fulltime home servants, locked in a pillory and beaten, other's could even sentenced to death by Bree's method of choice)

Thanks for yet another great chapter Goddess Lucy.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: April 26 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Their First Kiss

What kisses!  I especially like how Bree feels so insignificant compared to Samantha, her Goddess.  It's a sexy contrast.

Gee, that is a lot of spit.  Surprised Samantha hasn't filled up a bottle cap and made nanos swim-bath in her spit.

It's odd that Samantha was blushing.  Was she really tasting Bree or had she orgasmed, or both?  Maybe tasting Bree made Samantha cum.

Thanks for continueing this story Goddess Lucy.