Not gonna put much in bio, unsure about how many people will actually read this.
Started writing because I wanted more of the content I'm interested in, decided to add to the pool myself. I highly encourage any of my readers to try writing themselves, even if you don't think you're that great you might be surprised about how many people enjoy your style. Plus, there's the added benefit of being able to make stories about whatever you want. Go crazy.
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Made a deviantart account too, gonna upload some of my favourites from Tales of the Tiny there from time to time so don't worry you're not missing out on any content! It's called Duckster77 since this name was taken.
A straight mother tries to fix the problem in her family
Oh wow, great chapter! Happy to see this story updated.
Would love to see some more detail regarding him eating and drinking from the feet of both his mom and sister in the next chapter. Especially if he's disobedient at first so they go out of their way to make their feet sweatier and the task more humiliating.
Excited for what comes next! :)
Thank you for the feedback, sorry but until now I didn't update very regularly, I will try to schedule more in the future.
After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.
There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something.
Big sister small brother? Yes yes yes! Personally hoping for foot and odour domination, but I'm sure whatever form of domination you choose will be great.
From your summary, this sounds like it'll be very interesting and unique. Can't wait for more. :)
Feet should come into the story very casually and briefly on day 5. Rubbing and smelling will be a big thing week 2 and by weeks 3 and 4 he'll be doing a lot more for her than most normal brothers do for their sisters :P
Tapped out here. Loved the story up untl this point, a great blend of realism and fantasy, obviously leaning more towards fantasy in the second phase, although that kinda only made it better. Especially the foot stuff. The under-table foot washing, Olivia keeping her brother's face covered under the couch, the mom's socks used for self-discipline. All 10/10 stuff!
Only thing that really dragged the story down for me was the cuckold-y stuff. Up until this point, it wasn't too jarring. The whole 'fucking his best friend' was much too far, imo, made worse by the fact that she recorded it for the specific sake of psychologically tormenting him. All of it felt super out-of-place and killed any interest I have in the second phase which sucks because I was loving it up until this point. Wish that part had been left for phase three and the ultra-sadistic version of Olivia where it would have felt more appropriate.
Sorry if this seems harsh, This review isn't to critique the quality of your writing, which is great so far in this story, but purely an opinion from someone who's been quietly watching this story since the start.
All the best.
You haven't been quietly watching, I recognize your name! haha
Totally fair opinion to have. And there were a few other people who said the same thing, so idk, maybe it was a lesson I guess. I don't even think the final day in the story gets as crazy as this and the prior chapters were.
But yeah that's OK. I know lots of people like the story because of the more sympathetic relationship compared to most (especially for an R-rated story), so having removed that element I can see why people would be disappointed. I said this in a previous review, but I took version 1 as far as I could think to take it without ruining Olivia's character, and the same for this version. And I'm a big proponent of trying to always build on previous chapters which is why I take things slow. If I started stories off with insertion or full blown foot worship or whatever it might be from the get-go, I'd have nowhere to go but down, you know? I mean I guess that's writing 101 tho, building momentum and stuff.
Anyways yeah, I completely understand, and I appreciate the review nonetheless!
Wow, I don't check the site as much these days but glad I caught an update for this. Don't get me wrong, I adore cruel giantesses and incredibly cruel, humiliating action, but this more subtle and PG form of domination is wonderful.
The whole innocent sibling dynamic side to things really give this story a realistic flair, which makes it somewhat more believeable. I am itching for Reese to have to rub Oliva's feet when they're a little more aromatic, however I understand that there's still plenty of time for such things.
Can't wait for more chapters, as well as whatever you have planned following this story. Keep up the great work!
thank you so much :)
making them "innocent" as you called it was definitely intentional for the exact reasons you mentioned, i wanted to give it a realistic flair so it feels more believable. also why i made the sizes realistic too, and why i made the two of them get along fine (like most siblings i know), along with reese not being "into" any of this for the same reasons. everything i could do to make the story rooted in reality. any more extreme domination from olivia than what i have planned, or lust from reese, or bigger difference in size, and suddenly it goes from fiction to fantasy in my mind.
but its also fun to read fantasy sometimes, like you said, which is why i wanna make alternate versions. the only constant will be the main characters disliking their domination (especially from family members), since that usually brings me out of other stories more than anything else. i can only hope most other people's online taboos dont align with their real-life desires, haha. but thanks again!
Fantastic story, thanks for posting. :)
It's been a while since I've waited for updates so eagerly, and after reading all 3 parts of Day 23 I'm glad I kept following along.
As much as I was hoping for an ending where Reese failed and was stuck with being a servant to his sister, her friends, and their mom, this ending was perfectly in tone with the rest of the story and I'm not sure if it could have been done better.
Excited to see future stories from you. I'll have to check out the daughter/dad one soon. Will future spiritual sequels feature a similar amount, if not more, foot content? It would be wonderful to see Reese under Olivia's feet whilst they're stinky hehe, in the rewrite you've mentioned in other replies.
thank you! last few chapters were definitely a nice treat for anyone who loyally followed along, and yes, while a stuck servant idea mightve been nice i dont think it wouldve worked. and its the last chapter so whats the difference anyways :P
the rewrite of brother has more foot content but since her boobs and butt are big too i'm trying to make it a bit more evened out. but dad/daughter will have more foot content tho imo, idk if any of my stories will ever just be one thing.
btw i loved your beneath the bullies story :)
An average college students stops by a mysterious magic shop and pays a psychic to make his innermost desires come true. Sometimes things should stay a fantasy and not a reality.
Hot hot hoooooooot so far, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Very interested to see how Esmerelda will come into play as the story goes on too.
John's girlfriend, Sarah, is ashamed of her kinks, and won't share them with him. See what happens when John wishes for her to stop caring about what he might think. See what happens when he wishes for his sisters to help her accept herself.
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New story? From Max333?? I think I may hav died and gone to heaven!
Really glad to see you back writing, especially with such an interesting scenario. When the action gets going, I can tell it's going to be amazing. Don't worry about build up, that just makes the inevitable pay-off all the more delicious. :)
Thanks a lot duck! Can't wait to read from you again as well!
Just binged the few chapters that came out since my last review, still going great I see!
The atmosphere box has so much potential, very very very excited to see what you do with it.
Something I spotted on chapter 4, 'John looked at Sarah, perplexed.' I believe that's supposed to be Alison there. Other than that, not noticed anything.
Thanks for posting this, can't wait for the next part. :)
Oh wow, glad I caught this one! Great story so far, very excited to see what cruel foot-related tortures Megan and Shelby can come up with :)
In a world where VR tech has really stepped up, various giantess fans seek to get their hands on the newest, most realistic VR tech out there. Everything comes with a price however..
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Hot story!
Another chapter would be nice. Although, it doesn't have to focus on the same characters/scenarios, if you're against continuing this one.
I'm sure the company has had more than one malfunction, considering how quickly they managed to cover up this one? Maybe there was a testing phase before release that had all kinds of mishaps.
Just throwing some ideas your way. :)
Thanks! I'm not necessarily opposed to continuing James' journey, although it would more than likely be a one-off, life after the incident chapter. Rather I write another chapter or not, I will confirm, in canon, that was not the only VR tech sent out, and there was definitely a testing phase. These ideas are great, and if I end up writing, I will take them into consideration.
A reward for a contest on my Deviantart account. A son spends a bit to much money buying socks from a foot model he loves, so his mother decides to teach him a lesson in working for your money.
I know I already commented on DA, however I simply had to leave a review here too.
Honestly, I'd like to point out a couple of details that I enjoyed. The taped up, repaired sneakers were a wonderful touch, really helped visualise how nasty those shoes are!
Taliah Shine's involvment was great also; managing to help make his life hell whilst hardly interacting with him at all. That kind of casual domination is a big thing about why I love gts content so much, and although the mentioned idea isn't exactly a giantess thing, it's similiar in concept.
Marcus Tilden, a single father since his daughter's birth, gets laid off from his job one day after shrinking to less than a foot tall. Depressed about his sudden height loss and doubly miserable after becoming unemployed, he feels hopeless about finding a new career and being able to continue providing for him and his daughter. But after the two of them start spending more time together, he starts to develop a kind of job in itself just by serving his daughter and doing his best to keep her happy.
So, I finally got caught up with this one. You write at an incredible rate for the quality shown.
Wasn't expecting to love this story as much as I do. Daughter/dad dynamic isn't one seen too often but you pull it off very well!
All the foot content so far has been golden, with the sock smelling and the wrestling being a real highlight for sure.
Also, I was wondering, will we see Jessie getting tickling revenge on her dad at any point? He's tickled her a few times and she's shown remarkable restraint in not getting payback haha. He'd be unable to stop her at his size, and she could tickle him until he's willing to do just about anything. ;)
Excited to read more, honestly curious to see how this one is going to end. I'll be keeping an eye out for the Roommate installment of this serious for sure, and I hope to see a 'How to Train your Son' one day!
thanks, glad you liked it! yeah it helps that i havent been like super busy this past year so ive been able to write pretty regularly.
tickling isnt something i think i even thought of lol. i dont even remember him tickling her but if you say i did then i guess i did shkshshksh but yeah i pretty much already have everything written except for the last day so maybe i'll squeeze it into those chapters but if not i've written it down to add for version 2!
A series of short stories about people wishing on a comet and how those wishes ruin the lives of one or more people.
So glad I saw these! The first one was great, the second?
Amazing!
I loved how he slowly realises that he's screwed. The poster alteration was really nice touch too.
A young woman finds out the consequences of accusing her friend and roommate of cheating when she loses a bet and comes to quickly regret having been a sore loser.
Great story so far, love the action. Excited to see what plans Hannah has!
A man’s girlfriend shrinks him down for a little fun, but gets a little more into it than he expected.
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Great start! I adore Alexis's character so far, she's so playfully cruel. That part with having to put Netflix on for her was a nice touch too.
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Thank you for the review! Playfully cruel was definitely the tone I was trying to achieve so I’m glad it came through in the writing.
Great story! Loved the detail, and the fact that he screwed himself over by offering to go in his mom's shoe.
Even if this remains as a one-shot commission, thanks for writing it. :)
I'm glad you liked it! I have a lot of fun bringing people's ideas to life ^^
There is another dimension beyond that which is accepted by man. It is a dimension as cold as space and yet as intimate as romantic passion. It is the middle ground between right and wrong, between suffering and desire, and it lies between the pit of man's fears and the summit of his fascination. This is the dimension of power and subservience; and within it lies an area which we call "The Size Zone."
Amazing story!
Ever since I watched White Christmas all those years ago, I've played with the idea of writing a gts feet story with a similar theme myself. Never got around to it properly, but it's always nice to see the idea in action.
Thank you for reading! There's still a lot left to explore with time dilation and size, so hopefully other writers will pick this idea up in the future as well.
A hapless college student and his best friend sign up for a gendered study, unaware of its true nature and their impending role in a life changing ordeal...
My first piece of fiction writing... ever! Apologies if there's some roughness, but hopefully this turns into something great!
(EDIT 8/6/2023: The story has received an intense overhaul, with several chapters changed slightly or dramatically to reflect my current writing! If things seem different, it's because they probably are!)
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Great concept, great story!
I'm interested to see how it ends, and if we see the other girls again.
Thank you for your review!
Steve, a 19 year old with newly acquired shrinking disorder, is forced to move in with his mother, the lovely 47-year-old Mary, as she tries to help him overcome his new condition.
Great story so far, I've always been a fan of this dynamic.
It's incredible that you've made this with the help of an AI. Always wanted to try it myself haha but it seems daunting.
Excited to see more foot scenes, and more tickling if he isn't too small yet. I very rarely see tickling in giantess stories and the size difference just makes it so hot.
Hope you like the new chapter! I added a ticking and foot scenes. The story is almost over, as I don't really know where to go next. But I intend to have more prevalent foot scenes from these last few chapters!
Thanks for your review! And I really encourage writing with our without the help of a IA for yourself! Specially if you like this type of story! Deep AI is a good one, but doesn't save your messages, and often is very buggy if you're not using their paid ''genious mode'' as they called it. ChatGPT saves them, but is very picky if there is sexual content.
A married couple experience life changing events when a careless experiment results in the husband gradually shrinking. This is a gentle story about a husband that has many insecurities and how his wife guides him through a difficult process. The male character will find out that his wife, his protector, has far more training in difficult situations that he could have ever expected. She uncovers a nefarious plot which requires the skills of a female comrade from a past life.
Chapter 18 has been updated after a slight rewrite.
Comments welcome!
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Interesting start! I'm a sucker for giantess foot content and their husband/wife dynamic already feels nicely established so I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
Thanks! I've always been a husband/wife story fan - just not maniacal story lines.
