A number of people grow tall. Some moderately tall. Some really tall. And some really, really tall.
Always loved the multisize natuer of this story and sad it hasn't been updated in so long. But you did say you were having trouble coming up with ideas. Well, its rated X, so good old fashioned multisize sex is an option. Though with the sizes you've got going on I think they'd need more than a few planets to satisfy everyone ha ha!
This is the story of Myri, a young twenty something, who meets a beautiful woman who is much more then she seems.
This is still easily my favorite series that you have written and I'm sad that you never continued it. the possibilities were endless and to be honest Im a bit of a sap for romance even of the omnipotent nature. I used to check practically every day to see if there was a new update and then you seemed to move on to other projects. I really wish it had continued or maybe gets a revival because the combination of divine power, authority and lust has so many exciting opportunities. for example, since the Goddesses are the ones who get to decide what is right and wrong you could very easily get what some might consider, well, abuses of power. We saw inklings of that when Myri and Ali destroyed the nightclub and thought nothing of it. And wen they rewarded the guy from the club with a "good time."
It makes me wonder if there were/are cases of Goddesses blowing off steam on their homeworlds or renting out their worlds/people to other Goddesses only to then fix up any damage and memories after they're done playing? Or would something like that be out of the realm of their abilities or something else? I really hope I get the chance to find out but ultimately that is up to you.
I might get back to it one of these days. But, it is on hiatus. I can't seem to find a muse for the direction of the story.
This story is devoted to everyone who posted 'but girls though' on giant male stuff. Or told me giga was stupid due to lack of interaction. It's dedicated to the male giants who want to spank me over a city. And every person who claimed me enjoying a giant was misogynistic and that I should only like girls. FUCK. YOU.
When I saw your description I thought I had to read this. It wasn't bad, at most I'd say there were a few points where you got almost unneccessarily descriptive in a way that felt more like rehashing what you'd already described rather than adding new elements. But it's hard to pinpoint exactly where this happened. Otherwise the descriptions were very good as always.
I did think it was funny how you revealed at the end that there was a girl there the whole time that got left behind, basically trolling the people who think male giants are "wrong" somehow. Teasing them that, yes, there was a girl there, but she didn't do anything. The story also seemed purposefully uninteractive which was surprising at first. I thought from your description you might go the other way and show that you can have interaction but it seems you went the way of "interaction doesn't matter all the time or to everyone" which was interesting. Overall it wasn't a bad piece and I think its generally one of the best male giant things that I've seen. Largely thanks to your descriptive style and pacing
Human civilization finds itself at the mercy of a cute, if irresponsibly powerful, Goddess.
She's looking to try something a little different with Earth. By manipulating sizes she can toy with the universe as she pleases, and there's nothing anyone can do to stop her.
... but that won't stop the military, other Goddesses, and the rest of the known universe from holding onto hope.
You say you’re new to both GTS and stories but I’m guessing you’ve both read a
lot of GTS stories and written stories before, just not in this community. Your
understanding of how to apply the GTS elements in your story especially the
emotional byproducts as well as the overall quality and technique of your prose
makes me think that. Your descriptions are for the most part very detailed but not
distracting. I noticed a few seemingly deliberate bookends and comparisons that I
think showed that you have a good understanding of audience psychology. Such
as the sergeant’s statements to teh old man betwen chapters 1 and 2:
“Weren’t you the one who said we were all going to die?”
“Hey. Weren’t you the one who said we survived, and we could get through this?”
The way these two lines were set up seemed like a deliberate mirror. Bravo if it
was. Another was the similar positions but different outcomes of the sergeant and
LT in chapter two. Where the sergeant bows to the goddess silently, but she wants
him to speak and even listens. But the LT bows to the goddess and begs and
prays for mercy from her, and she couldn’t care less or even notice. That also
seemed to be on purpose.
The story so far is extremely depressing and set to only get more depressing,
though with a hint that maybe, just maybe, as the goddess continues to learn
things from humans she may change her outlook in non destructive ways. Very
unlikely, but hey, they can hope right? Your story has stuck with me after reading
the first two chapters and that’s one of the highest compliments I can give. Bravo
on your first entry into this community, I think it and you have great potential. I
don’t review much of anything on this site, but your story was worth the effort.
omg
I’m so glad you’re taking the time to read and even be so thoughtful here! I’ll be honest I haven’t actually read like any gts stories and literally dove into things a month ago. Building on that I feel like this kind of… self exploration… was really depraved and it was a bit tricky convincing myself that continuing this was worth it (I typed up the first chapter on my phone on a lazy day in bed lol). If people like you can read into things even in a setting like this, then maybe it really is worth it…!
With that in mind, I’d hope to put out a chapter a week… it’s nice to get into writing again, even if it is for something as odd as this. Thanks a million for leaving such a thoughtful comment!! :3
The story itself is about Kaylee's struggle to come to terms with her new giant body, and her new lifestyle as a ten-thousand-foot tall babe super sized babe! The story is written like a diary page, less like a story, and mostly just Kaylee's day-to-day thoughts.
I liked it, the diary style seemed really fun and helped it flow nicely. I'm really hoping you continue it because it sounds like Kaylee would be a fun bubbly character to follow along with as she continues to grow and occupy herself at everyone elses expense. Looking forward to anything else you write too!
I forgot to leave a rating last time, haha.
I find myself rereading this story every once in awhile because something about the simplicity of its stream of consciousness style narrative really appeals to me. It's inspiring me to come up with a short story of my own that does something similar. I also didn't realize that you wrote this over the course of a plane ride, which means, if I'm right, that it's a first draft. If so, then wow, that's pretty good for not getting any editing. Looking forward to more from you, good luck!
I forgot to leave a rating last time, haha.
I find myself rereading this story every once in awhile because something about the simplicity of its stream of consciousness style narrative really appeals to me. It's inspiring me to come up with a short story of my own that does something similar. I also didn't realize that you wrote this over the course of a plane ride, which means, if I'm right, that it's a first draft. If so, then wow, that's pretty good for not getting any editing. Looking forward to more from you, good luck!
Awwwww shucks, you're making me blush honey, I mean does it count as a first draft if I edited on the plane ride as well? <3
~ Kaylee
Kbella had been waiting for her package for days, and now, the formula was finally in her hands. Kbella is very HORNY and VERY excited, as she travels through the city to a discreet location, where she can finally drink the formula and grow BIGGER.
The story is based of one of my favorite giantess growth "adult videos" "Giantess Kbella's growth which I will link, the story is meant to flesh out the video and give my own spin on the character, as Kbella is a real person, refrain from contacting her please.
As an intro it was pretty good, I liked learning that Kbella lives in what almost sounds like a slum in contrast to what one might think. As well as having, well, mixed feelings about her fans on Onlyfans. Gave some justification and context to her desire to grow and be free of all that. I also liked the touch that she'd walked past her destination and had to turn back to get to it, I don't know why but it just made it seem a little more real, a mistake anyone would make, Looking forward to more!
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee
Yeah, I really tried to imbue her with personality, which is difficult since it's a real actress, but I hope it went well.
~ Kaylee
Forgot to rate this story, time to fix that.
Other things I liked about this was how almost desperate you made Kbella for the growth, licking the vial, comparing it to a small cock, all that. I do think the story could've flowed a litle bit better, and I do thinkl it did start to drag on a little bit near the end, but overall I think it was quite fun and lie I said before, I liked the background you gave her. I felt it gave good context to why she wanted to grow so badly.
Yeah, I totally agree, I probably could have ripped a page off near the end and skip to the growth, but I really wanted to build up to it, in my mind the entire construct thing was boring as well and my least favourite part of it, but I think... At least as it was presented in the original porn video, that I had to flesh it out and give it something more. In doing so I made it a biiiiiit to long, when I reaaaaaaaally just wanted to skip to the growth, but it just didn't seem right in my head.
~ Kaylee
Don't read this. Please, I'm begging you.
Man the rhyming in this wasn't bad, I don't think I've seen another instance of poetry of any kind in size writing. I could be wrong of course. I'm not a big reader of poetry so I don't feel I can properly do this justice but it did add to the intrigue of the story. It feels like some things in this poem that sound normal might actually be metaphorical descriptions of something horrific that will be revealed later because of your warning. It seemed to flow quite well. There were some lines that I really liked too, like:
"the felicity of living in simplicity."
"and made it into the finest quality thneed you done gone ever had seen."
(I don't even know why I like this one, I just do, it's fun.)
"The woman in GREEN, began knitting her thneed, with all this free time achieved, it was her esteemed dream to seam, knit, and wrethe thneed. "
(This one flowed really well for me.)
There were a couple parts that felt a little off, but one more than the others:
"she began to axe a tree as tall as herself, with caution for the wealth and the unwashen of course. "
My mind was expecting it to go "Axe a tree as tall as she" but I understand why you didn't want to do that since it'd be double 'she'. And since you did rhyme with 'wealth' I think this works, but it just felt weird when i first read it. However this may just be personal preference.
I'm really curious to see where this goes. I'm not familiar with the original Lorax story but I probably should be. I look forward to whatever horrors you're cooking up.
No I think you're right about the last one, but I feel a bit too lazy to fix it.
I'm just thankful it's only the prologue that's gonna be written like this.
After this, well... it would be understatement of the century to say it took a "little" turn
- Kaylee