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It's kay...but I'm getting annoyed of all the explanations in the middle of sentences (interruptions)... Like that.
And by that I mean for your next story don't add interuptions in every sentence (paragragh etc). It's one thing that annoys (aggrivates) me (person).
Great story, I love the ending too, irony is always a good ending :)
Man this is great, it's hot and yet it has a plot which keeps you reading and reading, read it in one sitting it was GREAT!
Author's Response: Wow. I can't even read it in one sitting, and I wrote the damn thing. Thanks, SB. Glad you liked it!
Your friend shows you an odd device that she brought from a tech lab. What is it? You'll have to find out as you go.
In the tradition of the "choose your own adventure" books.
Good story, but you shouldn't give the chapters names, it makes it too predictable.
Trigger ,Harry ,Dom and Mitch are daily robbers but what happens when they shrink themselves to rob a house and everything goes wrong.
The story isn't that great, you didn't make much effort creating the charectars, describing them, and when they talked there's no quotes or descriptions of how they talk. Did that really take that long to make?
Man keep on writing! your storys are some of the only storys left with class on this site, I'm more of an amateur humorous writer on this. Also I'm surprised Humonculous hasn't gotten an award, I also see some resemblance in some of the charectars in this to some of the charectars in Humonculous(Thats pretty much the only fault) but your storys are so good it makes me think that you should try to get them published, they could make it in the "Alternitive Reading" Section. I hope you make the next chapter soon :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I realized I was sort of falling into a rut with the characters, which is why I had Linda go on a binge and shrink some others. I feel like I may have gone too far, since now it's kind of hard to keep track and give time to all those separate characters. But I have a feeling Carolyn may soon be solving my problem for me ;-)
Please continue this story, it's very good :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I plan on adding many more chapters this summer but right now im strapped for time, most likely within the next two weeks ill add some more content.
To be honest the beginning is kinda unrealistic "Hey wanna go get cloned?" "Ya sure" but other than that, nice story.