The ongoing saga of a tiny little office drone and his horny, goofy coworker.
OMG, you're back! Is this just one chapter for a while or will you write more regularly?
Author's Response:
I nearly wrote it all out as one chapter but thought it'd be less arduous for the reader if I broke it up. My intention is to keep plugging away at this one for a while. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Roy is supposed to be on vacation with his best friend Mimi for the summer but upon arriving at her house he is suddenly shrunk to about 3 inches, effectively ending their summer plans. Mimi has always been like an older sister to him. She swears to protect him until the disease wears off. Hiding him from Mimi's family and pretending to be on vacation to fool Roy's parent's. The two try and enjoy the summer together.
However this proves to be more difficult than they thought once Mimi decides she wants to experiment with Roy in his new miniature form. She has always had a crush on Roy and now he couldn't really say no to any of her curiosities in his new shrunken form.
Nice story; you’ve created a really nice pred-prey-relationship here.
I hope your prey will not be invulnerable because IMHO this really kills any tension – but since you’re the author it’s up to you :)
You still want to continue this story, right?
Author's Response:
Roy will find himself in some more troublesome situations for sure. I plan to see this through. There will be more Roy a d Mimi soon I promise.
As for him being invulnerable, I would have to say no he's not actually invincible. However he has already proven he can handle a lot haha!
Hey, I recently read your story again and I just wanted to say that – if you need some motivation and you’re still on this story – I’m here :D
Author's Response:
Hey Mcpb0! That's super nice of you! I will continuing for sure. This needs an ending. Let me know what you think!
Also this has been very motivating! Thank you. :D
OMG :D Honestly, I thought you'd stopped writing; glad you didn't!
The last chapter is really nice, the indecisiveness; the loss of control when you've gone too far and you can't do anything anymore, the real risk of fatal incidents and the (suggested) complete lack of Mimi's awareness – I mean, if she had swallowed him, the only way to know would be looking in her waste – and then it's too late :P
tl;dr: I love it :)
Oh, I can’t wait for Roy to really experience Mimi‘s stomach :D
I hope you’ll be able to write more regularly :)
Author's Response:
Haha! I'll do my best! Thank you for that Mcpb0! ;D
I'm A Little Curious.. About Your Progress
Oh, I liked the last chapter. Is it just me or is Sarah designed to be fucking annoying? However I can’t wait for more dangerous mouth games, stomach trips and (nearly) fatal confusings :D
OMG., you're back!!!
I really love this story and I'm so happy it's not dead!!
I'm glad to be back Mcpb0! This story will continue! :D
More! Gimme moore :D
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Lol There will be more! One more chapter before Halloween! And I am also working on a one off Halloween story. Hope you guys like that one too.
Yay, another chapter <B – and you even did it before Halloween (2021 :P).
As for team Sarah or team Mimi: I don't really know... On one side, I'm a big fan of personal space, and Sarahs behaviour has been quite obnoxious in the previous chapters.
On the other side: Like Blitz19 said, Sarahs desire to eat Roy is fucking hot! And I think Mimi loves Roy very much – which means that she would be willing to play and maybe he's even in for another short stomach trip – but she would never really eat him.
As for Sarah on the other side... I think she likes Roy, but she does not really love him like Mims does. So I'd expect Sarah to be much more reckless – which is really damn hot! And since I'm still hoping for some dangerous game to go wrong or another cause for tragical digestion... so I guess I'm team Sarah?
I know right? XD I can't even deny it takes me long to get these chapters out. Though honestly writing doesn't take long for me really. If I buckle down I can probably pump out like one a week but you know school, work, life blah blah.
I really love this confict! Mimi or Sarah? They are so different it makes me wonder what else can happen to make readers not know which side they are on.
Man... Vore... I am so conflicted haha.
More "games" coming soon. I am already part way on the next chapter. Hopefully the next one is out before long.
A writer is surprised when his girlfriend reveals she's read his secret stories. Emily has read far too many of them for her own good, and takes his deepest fantasy into her own hands.
Hey, you’re still here? I’d love too see more from this story :D
While I agree with Gershwin, I feel like this is a story that could suit me :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear that haha (:
A girl wants to explore her giantess fetish with her girlfriend. Luckily for them, their pets prove the perfect subjects~
A couple of close friends, Emeline and Stephan, spend some quality time together to unwind over a movie after taking their finals for the semester at the University of Augural Sciences. What begins as a casual evening takes a turn for the fantastic, however, when some of the content in the movie inspires a particular reaction in Stephan that leads Emeline down an interesting line of questioning.
This was done as my half of an art trade with Gershwin! My first story of that sort.
Disclaimer: this story is for entertainment purposes only, it was based on a brief prompt, and any resemblances to persons in real life or in other intellectual property is coincidental.
Hey, I really like your story! It’s pretty immersive and lovely; the sexual tension between both characters is described pretty nicely :)
However there is a scientific misconception which happens quite often: you cannot really dilute gastric juices with water to make it harmless, because pepsine stays active until pH 5 (at pH 4 or 4.5 it is not as efficient as at pH 2 but it does it’s job nonetheless).
The problem is that you need a lot of water to raise the pH above 5 – if we assume that her gastric juice has a pH of 2, we would need more than 100l of water for 100ml of her gastric juice (yes, I’m talking about liters vs. milliliters). If her gastric juice has a pH of 1.5 (more likely), we’d need more than 316l.
A normal adult human produces around 500ml per large meal; so we are talking about more than 1580l necessary - which does not not take into account that a) Emeline is still a young human adult and b) that she’s about 3.6m large. Since she’s roughly about twice the size of a normal adult human we should be able to multiply the volume of secreted gastric juice by 2.
We also have another problem: The stomach of course does not stop secreting gastric juice until the pH is below 3 (then the production per time gets much slower). And even a normal sized young adult has no problems of producing more than 1.5l of gastric juice per meal if necessary (i.e. if the meal is large and buffering and sits in the stomach the whole night).
So we’d have to diluted about 3l of gastric juice which means we’d need a little bit less than 10,000l of water to make a survivable environment for little Stephan here.
In the current scenario, Stephan would not really be recognizable as Stephan anymore in the next morning.
Hahaha! This is the single greatest review I have ever received! Thank you so much for calling me out on what was ultimately a lazy writing move. And you backed yourself up with the numbers! That's just fantastic.
You seem absolutely right. And it seems like you've seen this misconception before and simply couldn't tolerate it once more. While I was vaguely aware that you couldn't do what I described, I chose to suspend disbelief and roll with it, "because magic," and what not. But I had no idea just how far off and unrealistic it really was. So I really appreciate you clearing that up. I've done the math on quite a lot (how long it would take for a six inch man to cycle through all the oxygen in a belly that started out at 16% to bring it down below 12% and asphyxiate, or if the carbon dioxide levels would rise above 7% and kill you before that) but I've never really known where to begin when it comes to the acid problem, and just figured, hey; if she pops a few tums every hour, that'll work, right? Plus, how easy would it REALLY be to digest an intact human? Couldn't be quick. (In other words, I have no idea) So I really appreciate your apparent expertise.
Feel free to reach out to me if you want to discuss hyper realistic situations! I'd love to have my blind spots filled in. My discord handle is available in my Bio.
Thanks so much for the highly insightful criticism. I might actually go in and fix that issue now that you've pointed out it's glaring issues.
