The story was pretty funny and had a lot of enjoyable kinky material, the renders were also great and did a perfect job combining with the story, awesome work guys! <3

This story is really interesting. Is great to found plot focused stories in the site more than pure fetish content.

I'll be following your work pretty closely~

I need to admit that when the previous chapter finished, I literally thought "If I were Brian, I would act as if Allie was torturing me", it took me completely by surprise when you did exactly that same thing xD

Great chapter, keep going! 

Siento que me gusta en la dirección en que se dirige tu escrito; de momento estaré pendiente de capítulos venideros. 

I doubt this could be called a slightly less happy reunion haha. Great work as always! I'm following this story since the early chapters of the first part and damn... It's so damn great how excellent was the character development throughout all the story, definitely top tier of the site.

Also, I don't know what I was looking forward to more, for Brian reunión with his sister, or Brian yelling at his mother because of all the shit she did to him. 

I honestly like the story and I love the topics you have been dealing with in the last couple of chapters.

Of course, as readers we can tell that Lena is a goddess and she has a pretty different way of seeing the world, as a society, we often forget that in fictional stories, beings from different stories will most likely have different morals, most people don't complain after killing an ant, but for Lena, all the other species in the universe are ants, so, who can blame her? I guess a entity of such power has a way different perspective of life than we do. 

Of course, Blyke is watching his girlfriend doing aberrations to other species in front of his eyes, I doubt he can just think about all of this from such a chill perspective when everything is real for him, obviously he will be complained. 

Lena slowly starting to doubt herself is great tho, not because of all the living beings she hurt, but because Blyke gave her a different perspective, that's true love in my opinion, not stopping as if you were living entirely for them but looking inside of you for a moment to question your own ways if you realize they're conflicting your partner. 

Sometimes I feel the narrative is a little uncommon, but aside from that, it's a great story! 

I love so much this kind of stories that leave me with the feeling of having a hole in my chest, man, I'm gonna miss Allison so much.

Great story! As always, you couple bonding is awesome and your characters are pretty lovable, maybe it's just me, but things with Allison kind of scalated quick, but with how powerful she was and her initial repressed desires, it was going to happen eventually, luckily she decided to remain on the good side, getting a little mean but remaining like the caring Allison she always was.

Also, I think I got that Allison doesn't care about Sadie doing as she wants with Clark because she's always in the master/pets role, but I thought Allison would be at least a little jealous with them getting too close with their interactions, in the end, she seemed to enjoy it, I just hope she seems Clark more as her boyfriend than her pet, but considering they sleep together at the same size, I'm pretty sure she stills seems him as an equal outside of the roleplay thing.