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A Cruel God by Shade Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A woman hangs out with her giant god boyfriend while he is cruel and destructive to others, but gentle and sweet with her. Warning: focus on Giant Male/Small Woman interactions.


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Gentle, Giant, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10617 Read Count: 9147
[Report This] Published: October 29 2021 Updated: October 29 2021
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is so fun. I like the idea of the little gf who enjoys watching and playing games. Good job creating arcs and surrounding world building.

Summary:

A peaceful Nordic village has prepared a lovely young sacrifice to a couple of hungry giantesses in exchange for good fortune. They may have underestimated just how hungry they are....

This story was commissioned by  Umhuebr


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8485 Read Count: 2966
[Report This] Published: December 19 2021 Updated: December 19 2021
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a fun story. I enjoyed the set-up because it was unclear how far this was going to go. Lead to nice pacing as the story progressed.

Summary:

A tiny first-time actor stars in a TV commercial with a bubbly and very eager giantess. Will she be more than he can handle?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Tiny World - Size Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13346 Read Count: 26857
[Report This] Published: June 14 2022 Updated: June 18 2022
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a really fun story. I love the focus on teasing and banter between your characters. I also really dig the threatening but giantess vibe.

Summary:

Just a simple story about a shrunken couple being subjected to the whims of an amourous giantess.

Content warnings for language, nudity,.graphic depictions of sex, insertion, mouth play, and oral soft vore.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.




Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Couples, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8673 Read Count: 16246
[Report This] Published: August 12 2022 Updated: August 17 2022
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Delightful story. Very playful and with great descriptions!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Just posted a story I had written some time ago but forgot to upload here called Together. You should check it out if Anticipation was up your alley!

House Hunters by gtswburg Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Freshly divorced, Evan Pierce is ready to enjoy single life but a pair of young strangers want his house and money for themselves.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Slave, Instant Size Change, Humiliation, Giant, Feet, Footwear, Entrapment, Couples, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76984 Read Count: 102507
[Report This] Published: October 31 2022 Updated: April 24 2023
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20 2023 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This is one of the most developed psychological breaking stories. Introducing another tiny (especially one with a complicated relationship to Evan) is a great way to keep the story going in a new direction. It'll be interesting to see how Evan tries to both hold onto his safe place but also now being propelled by embarrassment from being seen this way by his ex. 

Summary:

Jessica has her hands on a Monkey's Paw, the infamous wish granting magical talisman. She decides to use it to become the perfect woman for her crush, Tad, a boy who she can never seem to catch the eye of. The problem is, Tad's got a giantess fetish she doesn't know about, now she's slowly becoming his ideal woman, one foot at a time.

A silly slow growth one-shot.


Categories: Slow Size Change, Fantasy, Breasts, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Entrapment, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7836 Read Count: 8159
[Report This] Published: February 04 2023 Updated: February 04 2023
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Fun with a Monkey's Paw

Fun read!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

MissStep by La Petite Mort Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Psions have been a fully integrated part of society for a few generations now. They're so normalized that it's not uncommon to see the tiny humans dating or even marrying their larger counterparts. Such was the case for Demir Brand's father. Now, Demir has a new step family that's a lot 'bigger' than it was before. While he might be willing to live and let live, his new step sister, Kayla, might not share that sentiment. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Breasts, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10087 Read Count: 2447
[Report This] Published: April 28 2023 Updated: April 28 2023
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another brilliant story. 

I feel like this story could have any interesting sequel about furthering the relationship. Perhaps Kayla helps Demir out with his dating life for her own benefit. 

Summary:

Ben goes to visit his long-time best friend for a weekend of gaming. His friend lives with his sister, Adelaide, who Ben has had a crush on for years. While he's there, Ben ends up co-starring in Adelaide's video stream. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15874 Read Count: 3939
[Report This] Published: April 28 2023 Updated: April 28 2023
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are a very talented writer. This story is a master class in pacing for erotic storytelling. There's enough time building up the characters to increase the payoff to their arcs without bogging the flow of the story down. I also love the set-up that gives Adelaide the flexibility to be both cruel and gentle. Really well done.

Summary:

Kyle, a high-school senior with the terrible condition ARSD, goes on a field trip with his classmates to the amusement park. Known to have shrinking episodes, he fears the worst, but hopes he can still have a good day despite those concerns. Unfortunately for him, his fate lies in the hands of the meanest girls he knows...


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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. All characters are 18+ unless specifically mentioned otherwise. This story may contain content disturbing to some viewers, please be advised.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: At the Mercy of the Mean Girls
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14828 Read Count: 31066
[Report This] Published: July 10 2023 Updated: July 10 2023
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2023 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a fun romp. Each chapter has a fun arc.

The Dog Mom by Panzer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Maggie loves her dog Gracie more than anything else in the world, preferring her pet over most people.  Maggie is out for a walk in the busy city streets with her beloved pup when she suddenly grows gigantic, finding herself towering over everyone and everything.  The people of the city tremble in fear as a newly giant Maggie searches for her precious Gracie amongst the tiny landscape.    

Disclaimer:

This is NOT a furry story.

Please be advised that this story will contain violent imagery and descriptions of graphic nature that is considered sensitive to uninitiated audiences.  No characters in this story are based on anyone real, living, or dead and are purely coincidental.  All references to products, items, or applications in this story are trademarks owned by their respective companies.


This story will describe gore and death in explicit detail that may not be suitable for all audiences. 


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Unaware, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Growing Woman, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22936 Read Count: 13312
[Report This] Published: December 27 2023 Updated: February 01 2024
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk

This is a fun concept. I like the idea of a giantess not being cruel per se, just single minded on something unrelated to the people beneath her.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, she's definitely uncaring of the world around her, it's a difficult mentality to write about in a way.

Summary:

Written by https://www.fiverr.com/theharmonicist?source=gig_page and commissioned by me



Categories: Violent, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Couples, Destruction, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1964 Read Count: 1538
[Report This] Published: April 16 2024 Updated: April 16 2024
Reviewer: DrTritium Signed
Date: April 17 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I dig this concept and I really like the idea of stories that go into depth exploring one awesome scene. But I think there are a few things that could make your writing stronger.

  • Paragraph breaks and spacing are important for readability. This story takes a lot work to follow the way that it's formatted.
  • Show more and tell less. You don't have to explicitly state that your protagonist are lesbians and brilliant scientists. That's implied by their actions (being in love with another woman, being able to invent size changing technology). Sometimes exposition is unavoidable when setting up a scene but where you can look for ways to show the reader rather than just saying it.
  • Descriptions of destruction can be difficult. Have you ever heard the phrase 'the death of one is a tragedy, the death of a million is a statistic'? If you go for broad descriptions of destruction, it doesn't have the same impact as showing the experience in a smaller scale. A human character experiencing this destruction and trying to flee or one of the giants becoming interested in causing a specific type of destruction - that gets to the scale where you can build emotion and character. That draws a reader into your story.

Again, I see a lot of potential in your writing and I'm impressed at your ability to get your stories out of the door. I'm offering this critic as encouragement because I'd like to see more writing for you.



Author's Response:

Thanks but I only commissioned this idea