Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed
Date: March 10 2023
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Story building part 1
Nice start I hope to read more. And I hope Arron and Michelle get together as a couple and Maliyah becomes his stepdaughter. And if Arron has shrunk small then Michelle Arron should take away his shrinking watch and then leave him small forever. And then Michelle should either tuck her little man in her bra or tuck him in her panties day and night or she could let him snuggle on top of her tummy and Maliyah could then play with her little stepdad and cuddle him too. And as for Arron's foot fetish, Michelle and Maliyah could put little Arron on the ground and stomp around him without hurting him of course and they could give Arron the opportunity to climb on top of their feet. But still i really enjoyed the beginning of your story keep it up and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow nice detail. I trying to make a first person size fetish story like Alan misadventures and Watch what you're doing. I love those stories but sadly they stopped making them. I might focus mostly on unaware/ or people think he a bug or doll. I want to see how I could do mouth play, foot fetish and body exploration. I'll see if u can make more characters to keep it interesting but I love messages like this. I can expand and think👍🏾
Author's Response: Wow nice detail. I trying to make a first person size fetish story like Alan misadventures and Watch what you're doing. I love those stories but sadly they stopped making them. I might focus mostly on unaware/ or people think he a bug or doll. I want to see how I could do mouth play, foot fetish and body exploration. I'll see if u can make more characters to keep it interesting but I love messages like this. I can expand and think👍🏾