Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed
Date: November 02 2019
Title: Chapter 1: COMPILATION I
I really do love this story, even with the minor grammer errors. Such as going from 'her' to 'his' and then back to 'her' throws off the flow of the story. As well the over use of commas and run on sentences is a minor gripe.
But that doesn't detrack from my love of this story. I love that the people are so small, almost microscopic, to the girl that towers over them. To be that small to a girl that doesn't know you're there is incredible. A single hair could crush a man and it's not something you really see beyond giga stories where the giantess is thousands of miles tall compared to a planet. The world building is also really well done. Having cities or colonies of people trying to survive in this harsh world over ruled by a goddess that can easily step or sit on hundreds of them with feeling anything. And the fact that there is so much weight being put on the people that get stepped on or sat on that there leaves nothing but a black silhouette on the ground makes the hairs of the back of my nech stand up.
I also love that the main character has one goal. To get to the goddess' legs. To be a regular man again as well it's written from a journal. I can only imagine the life he had before he was brought to be shrunk this small. I enjoy the aspect of the journal and the inner thoughts of the main guy. No diolouge and it's just him and his entires. Love that. Reminds me of a post end of the world situation where the threat is still there, hunting you but for future people to learn to adapt better in this world. Love the concept.
Anyway, long review over. I do hope you continue this story to its end because it is a gem on here that people have been sleeping on. Any way, good luck and have a good life.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review, I have about half of the history I have written even without uploading, and I hope in the coming days to make a thorough review of all the errors to correct them, as well as the rewriting of certain parts, I hope you continue reading what I add later, thank you very much :)