Alot like the movie with the usual evil twist that andrew nellis puts on his stories.
Always been a favourite. Need more like this.
One of my favorites. Nice to see all the pieces of it in one place. Shame it was never completed though. Multiple layers of shrinking are a lot of fun.
Get those negative reviews and/or ratings ready, because here comes another one!
Oh yeah, I guess I should say how this is violent and graphic and probably also very disturbing and evil and whatnot. So if that sort of thing bothers you, or if giant males bother you, then turn back now.
Negative reviews? For something written so nicely?
Very enjoyable so far, love the topic and where you could go with it. Certainly not something we see often or enough of, so thank you for sharing this.
Thanks for the feedback. I consider this story finished (if I don't finish a story in one part, I usually never do), but there's always a possibility I could bring it back in the form of either a sequel or a spinoff of some sort. I don't have any plans to do that now, but who knows...
But I'm glad you liked it at least. I didn't expect many people would, so I'm not disappointed.
What happens when the hottest cheerleader in school has unrestricted access to her father's shrinking machine, and has no qualms about using it to turn other people into tiny pets/slaves to be sold for profit or given away to her friends? These are the tales of the people who were gullible enough to fall into her web.
June 28, 2013 EDIT: Finally updated for the first time in over 3 years!
An intriguing beginning. Given the tags, I look forward to seeing what you'll make of this, but so far the writing style is nice and easy to read.
Like where this is heading, looking forward to more.
It's a normal Christmas Eve that you spend every year at your aunts holiday party, that is until your hot cousin decides she wants to see what you feel like under her feet.
Unsure what the random underlined words are for. Emphasis? Why not itallics?
Author's Response: i like to thik of it as MORE emphasis. italics only when you hint at it. underline is more obvious but severe. and boldening it seems the most serious when it comes to emphasizing the words. but i think i'm going to try to focus more on the italics and emboldening now
Very fun so far, love the staggered chapters. Really enjoying seeing where you take this.
Author's Response: Thanks man, I'm enjoying writing too, kinda making up the storyline as I go along, but I gotta take a break for now..
Check back next week, I'm planning to have the stories converge somehow.. =)
Looking forward to seeing more.
I've moved my stories and their continuations over to the Kindle Store. The Website won't allow me to delete the story, so I'm sorry for having to remove it like this.
Like where this is going. More substantial chapters would be nice.
Mi nombre es Justin y esta es la historia de como fui encogido en la escuela sin que nadie sepa por que y busco la manera de volver a mi tamaño normal pero en el camino encuentro muchos incombenientes.
Esta historia esta inspirada en mi colegio pero hace cuatro años cuando estaba en septimo:p
Was unable to read.
Kimberley is a petite 20 year old who is deeply religious. A long forgotten artifact buried under the family home awakens, affecting various members of her family in bizzare and extreme ways.
Great unaware! Please continue!
Good so far. Love giant men/shrunken women settings!
About 8 years after being rescued, you return back to visit Sarah's family. Everything is fine until an accident brings you face to face with your worst nightmare.
Love where this is going, eager to see more.
A life is completely ruined in the span of about 10 minutes.
Should continue, of course. :)
Dolly Hoest, a victim of a spell that causes her physical condition to mimic her name, makes an impulsive marriage to Benjamin Efraim "Beef" Shorter. Now Dolly Shorter, she finds the world becoming increasingly larger as she becomes increasingly smaller.
A sequel to "What's In a Name?"
Barbie and Just My Size Barbie are the property of Mattel. All characters and situations in this story are mine. This story is intended for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended.
Cute, simple, sweet and erotic. A good read!
The destruction of a civilization at the hands of a goddess. A sci-fi fantasy tale.
Loving this series.
I'm glad you do. Would be great if I got some criticism for this, it's my first story but I don't mind people marking out mistakes.
An 18 year old sister finds herself shrinking and must live through the embarressing trauma of shrinking smaller then her 15 year old, 12 year old, 8 year old and finally two year old sisters. suddenly she isn't the dominate one in the house and her mother just doesn't care. Can she survive her sisters as they realize the upper hand they have?
Only complaint is the chapters feel short. More depth and interaction as she gets smaller would be great. When she gets small enough, unawares would be a fun angle, too.
Please continue this. I love the young age angle and the increasing humiliatuon.
don't worry, i definitely shall continue this as i haven't even got up to the good bits yets. i haven't been writing for a little while because i have been sick for a couple of days (simple cold) and have been bed ridden. but, don't worry i am about to upload a new chapter very soon- then some more aafter that to make up for not writing for a while.
Loving this. Really looking forward to seeing more!
thanks man positive feed back is always appreciated. you might like to know that every chapter from now now will have some type fo torture in store for our little kate. i will also be posting a different, short story, which has similar aspects to this
The local town hero is about to get the keys tho the city,too bad she'll have to deal with an inturder first
Enjoyed the general idea, but some spell check and anatomy checks would be most welcome.
Granted there were aspects of the story that were very unrealistic.My grammar was very sloppy in this story and for that I apologize. The anatomic part of it was really something I didn't focus on too much because it was meant to be a story about total destruction and so the action pretty much was more pivotal to me than factual physics. Thanks for the review(I always aprreciate them good or bad as they are the only way I know how to improve)
