Reviewer: Drowsycandy24 Signed
Date: August 03 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beginnings
Amazing details on the environment. Spot on on describing the size difference, and how they can barely hear him. I adored how we got to see a perspective of Laura and thoughts. Excited to see which direction you take this. Can't wait to see the mother in action by his son either being stuck to her sole and lazy to remove him. Or She thinking the safest location to transport him is in her cleavage. So many options,
Loved the way you write wish I had your grammar skills and writing.
Author's Response: Hey just keep practicing and you'll get there. Unfortunately I'm not really into mom stuff, so you're not gonna see that from me, sorry. The most extreme thing you're gonna see is maybe the mom forcing her daughters to do something to their brother, or her putting him somewhere so his sisters will torture him unawarely. No gross stuff from the mom herself.